My Creation Gallery..!! [Poems on Pg5] - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
That is something utterly amazing.

You've written that beautiful. I loved some of them a lot as they really touched my heart.

A nice concept of shayaris and a nice beginning. Hope to read more of them! :D

- Aditi. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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After getting a good response in all that shayari and stuff...I tried my hands on Poetry i Know it isnt that good.. But atleast read them..

FLOWER FRIENDSHIP
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Friendship is like a flower,
Growing in it's glory,
Each and evry seed,
Telling it's own Story.

Once in a while,
You come across a friend.
Who is beautiful as a flower with a good heart to lend.

So,
I chose this flower,
It's fragnance melted me,
It would bloom more fair,
When carefully tended it.

I picked this flower,
And soon pulled it apart,
And so all its pieces,
Grew into my heart,

But what i really realized,
was that the flower which grew wasn't leaves and petals,
But peices of you!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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FRIENDSHIP HURTS

My Best friend isn't mine anymore,
She doesn't care weather i'm hurt to the core,
Or whether i'm Bored.

We talk behind each other's back,
Ruining the trust we had.

I know less than i thought i would,
And hate to admit,
But i'm a child Misunderstood.
We both know we care,
But,
We stare at each other like frndship's blown in the Air.

Never Celebrated friendship Day,
Now, Wishing Enemy Day?

What to say more?
I want to leave this world,
Leaving my smile on a pearl..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Rish

arre waah !!😃

shayaris n all😳

abhi ke liye res😊

sab padhke tameez se comment karungi..😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Amazing!!! do write more 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
bahut frnds se jhagde hue hai..
aur joh cheez padh ri hu voh sb
..FRENDSHIP se reltd
hi kese hai..??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Wow. .rashi. .its realy awsome yaar. .do wr8 more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Nice try Rishu 😊...
Flower Friendship one was awesome...
Really loved it 😃...
The Friendship Hurts one was so true...
I agree with it , nice one...
U should often try ur hand in this 😉...
Luv U ❤️.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏
Edited by pradeep_maurya - 12 years ago

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