Originally posted by: disha15
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EDIT 1 :
read the update,and boy this was surreal man!Shit.I was like aww aww and aww 😳 and teenie bits of comedy here and there (dunno if the word comedy would be apt,but oh what the hell,you know what i mean :) )
I just HAVE TO post a long comment for this,but im afraid,that'll have to wait for a day or two.
I will post asap pakka :)
EDIT 2 :
Though i have loved all the chapters till now...this chapter has made a very special place in my heart 😆 (if that even makes sense!)It was all so adorable! Aww…Im glad you think so. That was partly what I was going for.
The trio's friendship was highlighted so very well.It was such a feel good chapter,yet heart breaking at places,when the growing apart thing popped up. Yeah. Just a little peep of the life they used to have, and then what they have now
I absoultely loved teh way you mentioned these small details here and there..like how Sam started answering for Al bout why her favourite colour was red 😳 And then how caring Kabir was.How Sam still loves Al so much 😳 Yes. Kabir is the best friend that every girl wants. And Sam the boyfriend that every girl dreams of. Al is one lucky girlie 😳
This is one big usp of yours you know,you pay attention to every single detail and give such a descriptive read.I just simply L.O.V.E your writing 😳 Why thank you! I am flattered :)
Peices i loved the most thsi time :
-Sandhya locking them up in the house 😃 I just love Sandy i tell ya!Haha! You can see where Al gets her evil genius from, right?
-Kabir and Sam trying to talk to Al,but her running away and thry running to and fro along with her 😆Haha! Yesh… Indeed. Very funny
-Kabir's experience telling him that Sam and Al are gonna begin world war 3 soon 😛 ROFL. haha He knows the two very well. Almost as well as they know each other.
-Sam-Al scene..where he forces(thats not the write word 🥱 but oh well,you know what i mean )Al to speak up and confess why it hurt her so much 😳 Yep. Emotional blackmail is one of his strong points.
This scene was simply brilliant.(REQUEST-i know only two chapters are left,par bolne mein kya jaata hai 😛 Please please include a few more romantic scenes!Romantic scenes are tricky.And people get it all messy most of the time.But i simply loved the way you've described Sam and Al's scene here!Is there any genre u aint good at it?I doubt it! 😉) Aww… Ok. I'll try. But no promises… Haha no, I'm not good at thriller. Or mystery…I can't write mystery or thriller that makes you bite your nails and go crazy trying to unravel it And humour, and tragedies, and realistic fiction and long stories. But…I could go on and on on my flaws, so I should stop here.
You know,i personally believe,that a couple who fight once in a while are much more in loev when compared a pair who dont fight at all! hmm…Yeah. I used to think that. I think it shows that the couple cares enough to be angry at each other, or comfortable enough. But each couple is different. Maybe sometimes they care enough to not let their ego come in and thrust their opinion on the other…Difference of opinions is the base of arguments you know :)
Occasioal fights in a way becoem a way of communictaion wid each oder..see..like sometimes even though some habit of ur partner is bothering you,you keep it to yourself,thinking it would hurt him/her or whatsoeva.These small small things form a bg heap and then one day it backfires,hampering a relationship.Instead if u fight once in a while,these things will come out in the open through ur words you know,so the partner would know what exactly has been bothering you. Yeah that's true. Fighting is healthy. Especially if you're married. Because you have to LIVE with that person. Or if you're in a live-in relationship.
The way they blurt out every mean thing they inside of the,did make them feel as though a big burden is off their chest.And then they remembered all their shared romantic moments 😳 Yeah…what mean things are you talking about? Im confsued😕
I just loved this scene <3
-Sam Jay scene..Sam confessing it to Jay that he feels for her..and that she drives him crazy 😆 Yes…they're crazy for each other😆
-Kabir AL scene..i laughed my lungs out when Al pounced on Kabir 🤣 I just found it so very hilarious at the moment.Jay's comment seeing her was a contributing factor later on 😛 Plus Kabir and ALl questioning Jay in response at the same time 😛 jinx 😛 Kabir carrying her and then the foot thing..aww 😳 Oh!the cockroach.Kabir is such a doll 😳 He is truly the best friend any girl could have. Amazingly sweet.
-Jay being this as you call him..sunshine 😛 His permanent disposition.
-Kabir confessing to Al bout why he..sort of drifted away. Yes…she's partly given in to his apology. PARTLY.
Im so glad that they are back to being what they were 😊 And what i admire the most is..even though they've been having this sort of ..turbulence in their relationship for almost a year..they didn't even talk to each other during the time you know..it took them minutes to get back to what they were.I am referring to all three of them here actually. Actually its a little more complicated for Sam and her. Theirs was a more physical relationship. Im not saying the base of their romantic love was physical, but that was an aspect. And unless they start going out again, they won't ever revert back to the same Sam and Alya that they were before the breakup. And Al and Kabir…they're getting there.
-The masterchef thing. 😳
Another instance which showcased this one point i mentioned just above.
-The ending scene 😳 Aww 😳
You know it was epic rite? 😳 So i need not comment anything on this scene.I simply loved it 😳 Aww…Im glad you did. I liked writing it. But the weird thing is, writing it….I find it sweet, but when my boyfriend did that for me…I was so creeped out. Poor guy, he has to endure so much for me. 😛 I shun a lot of his romantic advancements by saying they're creepy.
I cna go and on bout this chapter,but i just have to hurry up and summerise my views.I hope you atleast got a brief idea as to what i thought bout the chapter 😊
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