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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sitting at the window, staring out I watch the rain,

Don't know why but it seems to take away all my pain...

The dark clouds, the thunder, the lightening,

It all makes me feel light, my life seem happening!

Those little pearls that hurtled down,

On my skin they can ease any frown,

I sit at my window, put my hand out,

I feel joy filling me inside out!

when it begins to pour without a hint,

My eyes sparkle with a mischievous glint...

the less seen me peeps out,

In a playful mood I can sing and shout!

Full of glee I twirl around,

I can be found grooving without a sound,

carelessness, recklessness you might see,

but in the rain, just let me be!

The shivers of the winter...the beauty of the spring...the heat of the summer,

I wait through it all for the rains-my life's glimmer!


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Jake-

When I stand under running water, I learn to be okay with myself and not being like everyone else, cause I am still learning to be my self.

Your poem reminded me of those times, when water purifies the mind and takes you to another world...

Do write more, your words are very encouraging.

"Still learning to be myself"
I don't mean to pry, but is it because you have been something for someone for too long, losing your own self?

Please don't answer if you don't want to.

Water has always held that power to me and will continue to do so.
Thanks a lot for your appreciation, and I will keep writing, coz thats my way of unwinding. Hope to see you around when I post next, which will be soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Jake-



I think at one point or another we all become someone else for someone, either it's intentionally or unintentionally. And trying to get back to your true self is a difficult task cause we been someone for so long that we forget who we really are and what we want from life. But tell you the truth I have not lost hope and will keep trying to rediscover my self and live life to the fullest.

Water is the purest of all cause it's give life and a meaning to our existence.
Your writing brings out some great dept and will continue to read more.

I agree. I guess I have faced that too, and maybe I am still not over with that phase completely.
Thankyou for the appreciation and since you are here, i will post another, but please be warned-this one might be depressing!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I love the rains too!

capturing the joy of it in a poem is never easy .. u have done an incredible job !
what's ur name?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Purple_Lady

I love the rains too!

capturing the joy of it in a poem is never easy .. u have done an incredible job !
what's ur name?

Thats the only way I know of capturing every happiness and tear. The other way is through photographs,but, unfortunately, photography is certainly not my cup of tea, hence just this for me!

I am Swati😊

Thanks for the praise, still seems surreal!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kunggan

make fool of yourself1334470554289


well,what you believe is making a fool of one's self, is not the same in my dictionary!
I am who i am and I love the simple things in life.
Each is entitled to his/her own opinion and so, I respect you weird view, but I CERTAINLY DON'T AGREE!

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