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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: jhum_86

thanks dear..and u r free to imagine rajat and mugdha...those characters may suit them

but when u r updating next...plz do it soon...

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karuu

@Manipadma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ridzzi

but when u r updating next...plz do it soon...

Sun aruu ..sooon lol hahaha😛

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pallavi guha biswas

@pallo2504

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Thanx for the pm.The story is very interesting and different.Waiting for your next update

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bengalscott

@bengalscott

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Another mytho ff!! I must say u people really love the "Chandrakantha" type concepts. Well the starting is good, but honestly speaking little bit weak than other stories u have written. You can surely make it up in the upcoming parts...and yes, please try to use more paragraphs rather using those ... for line separation unless you are writing on a mobile device.

Best of luck and don't take my criticism harsh, it's just some advice as I love your writings. 👏👏👏

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

@ jhum : nice story & quite fast paced, i liked it..carry on !! ⭐️⭐️

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Khusi

@khusi_*

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Very interesting...
What is the bad luck...good luck!
Update soon...
I am so eager to know...

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Ankita

@radhikarani

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

wow gr8y
par naam to batao!
Nyc flngs.

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Kamalika

@KamalikaG

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

What a beautiful start!👍🏼 Awesome story, and it seems like a fairy tale story...I love such stories...Please continue soon...😃

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Ashi

@ashi.melodyfire

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

whatta nyc starting

its superb

well characters toh batao...

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

wow its beautiful fairytale type
n i love fairytales
i am imaging my prince n princess rtmc
so wht is good n bad luck for king, queen n princess?

waiting for next update
also update rahenge sada
waiting egarly for that

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