Eyes And Vision [Original SS] : Chapter 10 : Pg 53

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Yashi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

AweSome Dear..U so Talented...🤗 ❤️

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sariska sujaini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Wow mahak

A new ss :D

Lovely update

Simply loved it

Cont soon

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luv_sweetz

@luv_sweetz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

wooow!!!...👏...i luv the idea!
it's very beautiful😳😳!
n d way wrote it...awsm👍🏼!

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Rafa.LunaPotter

@Rafa.LunaPotter

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Mahii - wow! really interesting! Want to read moreee! U said updates everyday right? C'mon now...get on with the update... :P

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tukun2009

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Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

super update👏! do pm me whn u update!

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Hello, Mahak.

I am certain, the piece I just read does not qualify for a chapter. Hence, assuming, it was the preface, I will let out my two cents to you.

It has been really long that I read from you, by the way.

The protagonists deliver a Hindustani feeling, they converse like folks from UP and MP, simply etched. Simplicity always signifies something deep, and definitely dark and the way you punch a story out of such an idea is eventually going to help you grasp the attention of your reader.

You've made a really nice attempt.

Thanks for the PM.

Kankshita