Just A Fling...?? [Mayur OneShot] - Page 2

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

lovely os.

nupur feeling was beautifully narrated..........

want more form u.

thanks for the pm.

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

You're the best when it comes to OS, i loved reading this one<3 you've captured her feelings really well .. awesome (:

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Nikki

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Posted: 14 years ago

Aww I love it. I reminds me of reality, is it just a fling that will pass away? Or something more? So I absolutely loved it, there's nothing more to it. It was truly amazing. Can't say anything more.

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey Mahi
superb OS jana
U describe nups feelings beautifully
and some how it can relates our real life feelings
i loved it dear
do write more

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daniella

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Posted: 14 years ago

lovely os!!!
thanks 4 the pm

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Mahima

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Posted: 14 years ago

name mate

jaan love you yaar

you are the best

fantastic job mahi

it is a feeling we all go through

sometime or the other

we wonder it is just a fling or more

sometimes we try to convince ourself it is just a fling

p.s can't wait to read more of this

update soon

luv ya

name mate

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Posted: 14 years ago

Mahi

That was beautiful OS hun!

I loved how you penned down Nupur's confusion. It felt real :P

x x

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griffy.fz

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Posted: 14 years ago

lovely yaar!!!

really likes it

thanx 4 the pm's

rock on

griffy

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afsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesum OS

Loved how u expressed Nups feelings n confusion abt her feelings

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Sanzy|Sanz

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome os

loved it

thanks 4 da pm

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