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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys, my friend wrote this a long time back but now she finds it useless and crappy. 😆 But since I love it sooo much I decided to post it here. (Oh god, she's going to murder me now 😆) Anyways here it is:

My love to you is like a rose

It blooms into the sky

Whenever I see you

My heart burst red

Like love has reached my eyes

But there are the thorns

In which i hate the most

Whenever i see you

You love someone else

My heart sank into a pile of dirt

I know were never meant to be

Cause you barely recognize me

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sis beautiful poem na !!

I loved it to the core!!
wish I could write like that !!
em horrible writer !!!
I wish I could write but I cant
but beautiful peom again na !!
tell ur firned I loved it 😳
-Lina-
Edited by rkmnsg - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesum yr
i really loved this one a lott
ur frndzz write so well yr
lovedi tttt
Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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*Edited*

Man, I dint notice! 🤢 You haven't written this. 😆 BTW, let your friend know she's really good at poetry and this ain't crappy. Just short. She's awesome. =]


-Kanky
Edited by -Kanky- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nikki, your friend has written a beautiful poem.

Very well written. And I especially appreciate poem writers, coz I seriously suck at it 😆
Beautiful work !
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank you for your comments guys!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nikki its beautiful.......... Loved the words use in it and everything...........

Awesummm....

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