Short Story: Youth Experiences

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Alpenliebe

@Alpenliebe

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

This update was too gud....I m in love wid this ff....thanx fr the pm dear, waiting fr the next part!!!

love
Aditi

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Garima

@ScatteredCastle

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Finally, I read this. It was definitely awesome :) You know what, I really did not get the whole concept it had, earlier... before I read this part and understood what the title really meant. hehe... I believed, that it was a random title to a random love story.. but, I now know, what it actually is... about the things youth experience. How nutter-ish of me, that was! :\

So, about the part.. it was superb. Nicely written. But, to be honest... I want the pace to rise up, I mean... I want it to see something actually happening and not only what these guys feel. Show it, rather by any one's perspective... if it's going to happen between these three. But, seriously, I wanna see the odd circumstances and situation which teens/ youths are put in... they're so wierd and somewhat ... umm, just weird. But well, its your story and I'll love it anyway you show it, seriously. :) Still, I loved the way you penned it down. It was absolutely brilliant. Great Job and Thumbs up :)

Thanks for the PM again,

and am damn sorry for showing my face around, so late.

Update soon!

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luv07prida

@luv07prida

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

kanky luved it yaar

ek dam u know feels true

aisa lagta hain were watching tht scene

ur a lovely writer

keep updating dear😃

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Champion Dude

@snazzychamp

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

I'm really sorry for the late comment....I was a lil busy so could read earlier. So I just read the update n now I'm commenting..........

So, its was an awesome update n Kanky plz plz plz do continue it and soon.

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Ishaan

@-Ishaan-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Very nicely written....u r a born writer.

Keep writing n thanks for the PM.

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

4 a change 4 the 1st time i m reading a completely different story..n i m truely loving the plot..continue soon..

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Hey Kanky, I got the time to read this ss of your and I have to say, it's very interesting and I'm absolutely loving your writing style! Who said you're a bad writer? I love your writing now! Be sure to pm from now on =)

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

so vry amazingly written dear.. 👏⭐️u portrayed d harshness of life so deftly... 👏
m realy in awe of ur writing potential girl!! 🤓u shud do some srious thinking abt ur goal in life as u realy can be a grt storyteller n write amazing books..in any genre u feel like...👍🏼...u realy can!! all d best!!!👍🏼

luv mayur always!!!🤗

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