Rosy Cheeks... a Short Story - Page 2

Originally posted by: Arushi.

Chhilt, I always knew you were a great writer. This peice touched upon the aspect of habbits, i believe. It's not that a Chinese cant speak English, it is just that chinese are habituated to talk in their language not another. Its what they have grown up in, and its the enviornment you grow up in.

Dexter in this case, was a child. A child who like everybody wanted to eat something different, who wanted to taste the food his peers ate. In matters like that he was under a certain kind of pressure. Ummm, you can say pressure to belong? One fine day, that chance comes knocking on his door, the chance to trade his food. He goes for it not realising that, it is not how his stomach is built. The consequenes of it make him realise that it is for a reason - a reason for his own good- that his mother didnt allow him to eat junk. And with that sinks in another realisation, that no matter what, mistakes happen... but the do not diminish his mother's love for him.

Great read. 👏

Loads of love,

arushi.

Originally posted by: _.serendipity._

Nice one!! :D

I love the way you use a simple story, with simple words...and yet there's so much depth to it all... A mother's over-protective love, a child's innocent rebelliousness and his little desires..to be like others and eat what they eat.

I have no words.. It's really.. beautiful! :)

Originally posted by: Miley_hp

Chhilt....you should take up writing as your permanent career.

Originally posted by: scarlett.lady

i like the way u send across messages the subtle way chillit ... ideal for a children's story in every way!