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aru - will convey ur thanks, yeah sure.
hema di - will convey ur thanks..lol yeah thats so true..well keep guessing about that! ;)
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heya again, here's the next part, i know i'm doing it fast, but thought i'll just post it since idk when i'll come online after this! 😳..hope u don't mind..

Chapter 3: Haunted

Who would have thought that working would be so much work?

It was exhausting watching Old Hobo Joe sell lemonade all day. Vincent took a sip of his lemonade, and leaned back in his newly acquired lawn chair.

Old Hobo Joe reached for a cup.

"I told you, no drinking on the job!" Vincent boomed. "We don't want to waste any time, for the sake of Miss Sunflower, now do we?"

Old Hobo Joe shook his head.

"Good. Now how much money have we made so far today?"

Vincent's minion poked through the contents of the money can, but he stopped because--

A customer approached their lemonade stand, wearing a mask for some reason. Maybe he was going to a costume ball.

The man pulled out a gun and pointed it at Old Hobo Joe. "Give me all your money."

Vincent chuckled. "How do you expect to rob someone with that puny thing? You need lobbyists, bribe money, and corporate insiders, at the least."

The man's gorilla face stared at Vincent. "Don't mess with me, man. This gun is loaded." He pressed a little switch on the back of the gun, which made a little snap.

Vincent had never really experienced the feeling of danger before, but it was beginning to make his skin itch all over. He didn't really like it.

Old Hobo Joe lunged forward, over the table, and tackled the man. They wrestled on the sidewalk and Old Hobo Joe knocked the gun away. Old Hobo Joe rolled, picked up the gun, and threw it into a nearby garbage bin. The thief ran off.

Old Hobo Joe returned to his seat, and continued with his counting of the money.

"So how much do we have, my servile friend?"

Old Hobo Joe held up three fingers, then two, then five.

"How close is that to a million dollars?"

The old man shrugged.

***

Princess tugged on Ein's shirt. "I want food. Give me food!"

Ein sighed. "I bought you a hot dog five minutes ago."

Princess jumped up and down. "I'm a growing girl! I need nutrients!"

Ein looked around. "There's a lemonade stand. I'll buy you a cup."

"Lemonade isn't food!"

"It's good enough, isn't it?"

"Fine."

They approached the lemonade stand. From far back, Ein thought a little girl was selling the lemonade, but as they got closer, he realized she was something different.

The girl looked up from an economics book. "Hello, and welcome to Sunflower's Lemonade Stand. What can I get for you? Our specials today are lemonade, lemonade, and lemonade."

"I want lemonade," Princess said.

"I'll have the same," said Ein.

The girl served them their orders, and they sat on the nearby bench.

Ein took a sip of his lemonade, and his face almost imploded.

Princess, however, gulped the stuff up without any problems. "I'm glad your butt feels better."

"No thanks to my Grandma."

"She can't be all that bad."

Flashbacks pounded at Ein's consciousness. Hours of scrubbing, brushing, dusting, disinfecting--and on and on. "Oh, she's that bad, and worse. All she does is yell at me through that megaphone of hers and order me around. Cinderella would feel sorry for me."

Princess finished her lemonade and whined.

Ein gave her his. "So, how's the sponsor search coming along?"

Princess's mouth burst with words, and lemonade sprayed all over Ein's face with--"None of the stupid people in this town know a great opportunity when they hear it!"

Ein wiped off his face.

"The problem is," she said, "I think they need to see it. That's why I've been going around to all the restaurants lately. I need a forum where I can showcase my talents, but all of the restaurant people I asked said no."

"That sucks."

"Ein, could you talk to Mario for me? His restaurant would be perfect for what I need. And I know he's a friend of your family."

"He is a friend of my family, but I don't think he likes me very much."

"Why?"

Ein remembered:

Little Einny stared at the menu. "Mommy, I don't know what to get."

Before his mother could speak, Mario leaned over and pointed at the menu. "I think you would like this, little one. Can you read what it says to Uncle Mario?"

"Las…ag…na. What's lasagna?"

"You say it, Lasana, without the G. Would you like some lasagna? I'll make it extra special for you, little one"

"Yay!" Little Einny raised his hands in the air. He forgot he had his fork in his hand.

Mario screamed, with the fork dangling out of his eye. "Mamma mia!"

And then there was the time when--

A slightly larger Little Einny blew out the candles of his birthday cake. His family cheered, and a waiter walked over with the ice cream. "There you are. A special birthday sundae for a special birthday boy."

"Thank you" Little Einny dug into his ice cream and chowed it down. But he ate too much too fast, and the worst ice cream headache he'd ever experienced savaged his brain.

"Are you all right, little one?" Someone put a hand on the boy's shoulder.

Ein looked over, and in the chaos of the pain, and the shock of seeing someone with a eye patch right next to him, he thought he was being attacked by a pirate. So Ein rammed his spoon at the pirate's face.

Mario screamed, with the spoon dangling out of his nose. "Mamma mia!"

And then there was the time when--

Ein shook away the memories. "Let's just say me and Mario have had some…friction between us."

Princess finished Ein's lemonade and tossed it into the dumpster a few yards away. "Becoming a professional eater isn't as easy as I thought it would be. I don't know what I'm going to do."

"It's too bad we don't have our own restaurant," Ein said. He didn't mean anything by it, of course. It was just one of those things people said to keep a conversation going.

But Princess stared at him with a serious look on her face. "You're a genius, Ein. You just thought of the answer to our problems."

"What are you talking about?"

"We make our own restaurant. That way, I get my forum, and you get time away from being Cinderella. It'll be great." She stood. "Come on. Let's go!"

Ein didn't move. "What do you mean, go?"

"I mean let's start this thing."

"Right now? God, Princess, we can't just march out there and start up a restaurant."

"Why not?"

"Well, the money, for one thing. We don't have enough money."

"I have a few hundred dollars in the tree house that I took from my savings account. And I know for a fact that you have some baseball cards that you could sell for a lot of money."

"I don't want to get rid of my baseball cards, Princess."

"You don't even like baseball. You hate sports."

"I know. I'm just…saving them for the future."

Princess pointed a finger at his face. "The future is now, my friend!"

Ein sighed. "Let's say I do agree to sell my cards. I still don't think it's enough to start up our own restaurant. I mean, we have to rent a place, and we have to buy plates and ovens and stuff. And the food."

"Maybe we don't have enough, but I think, if we put our minds to it, everything will work out."

"That's not how the world works, Princess. Things don't just fall into place like that."

The lemonade stand girl walked over and said, "I couldn't help but overhearing, but this is exactly the kind of investing opportunity I've been hoping to make. I'm tired of the lemonade business. I want to move up. This restaurant you're talking about is the perfect step to take. Here." She took out a wallet and pulled out a wad of bills. "I have about five hundred dollars here. You can have it if you let me be your business manager."

Princess grabbed the money. "It's agreed!"

The lemonade girl nodded. "Excellent. Here's my card." She handed over the card.

Princess studied it. "There's no address or phone number listed here."

"That's because I'm without those at the moment. But you'll be able to find me at the alleyway by the park." She straightened her tie and walked away.

***

Ein couldn't believe he was doing this. These baseball cards were supposed to be for his future son. But then again, Ein was sure his son could live happily without them. Princess, on the other hand, needed Ein's help.

So he took the wad of bills from the card shop guy, and headed to his bike. But some teenager was sitting on it, while an old man in a purple cape was sawing on the anti-theft chain.

Ein pocketed his money. "Uh…what are you doing?"

The teenager glanced over at him. "I require a faster mode of transportation. My legs grow tired trekking through this town. And Old Hobo Joe here can't carry me around all the time. I'm sure you understand."

"But…that's my bike."

"And a very nice one at that. Though it doesn't exactly fit my standards, you needn't feel ashamed about letting me have it."

Ein clenched his teeth without meaning to. This was a potentially dangerous situation, but somehow Ein didn't feel nervous. His cheeks weren't even puffing out at all. "Look, I spent an entire summer earning money for that bike."

"Well, then I suppose you'll have to work this entire summer for a new one, won't you? That is what you people do, isn't it? You work and toil and all that?"

You people? Ein stepped forward, hands clenched into fists. "Who do you think you are?"

"I'm Vincent Vandervander, General of the Urban Resistance Force."

"And you think that gives you the right to take my bike?"

"Of course."

"You think you're better than me?"

Vincent chuckled. "That's pretty obvious, isn't it?"

"Well, you know what?" Ein pointed a finger at Vincent's face. "You're just a spoiled brat! Don't try to deny it! I've seen your kind before, and I know how to spot them! But you, you're the worst I've ever seen!"

Vincent frowned. "How dare you speak that way to me in front of my men!"

"Men? What men?"

"I tire of your insolence." He looked down at the caped man. "Peon, are you done with that chain yet?"

The old man finished cutting through the chain at that moment.

"Then let us ride to victory!" Vincent pedaled hard.

"You're not taking my bike!" Ein dashed forward, but the old man jabbed Ein's legs with pointed fingers.

Ein collapsed to the sidewalk.

Vincent biked away, and crashed into almost everything in his path. The old man ran beside him and helped him keep balance. In a moment, they turned a corner, and were gone.

Now Ein usually didn't dislike people, but there was something about him this Vincent guy that made Ein cringe. Maybe it was the fact that he was the worse human being Ein had ever met.

Ein tried to stand, but found that his legs were utterly numb.

***

"Let me get this straight. His hobo friend paralyzed your legs and he rode off with your bike?" Princess giggled.

Ein gave her the money. "It's not funny. I loved that bike."

"I know. I'm sorry." She added Ein's bills to the pile. "How long did it take for your legs to work again?"

"Fifteen minutes."

"That's not too long at least."

"It feels like a long time when a group of kindergartners are dancing around you, calling you names. They said I have a big head."

"They hurt your feelings, didn't they?"

"Of course not." He felt his face puffer-fishing.

"They did!" She exploded with laughter.

Ein crossed his arms. "They were just annoying."

She moved her smile down with her fingers, and forced on a serious face. "So, are you going restaurant shopping with me and Sunflower tomorrow?"

Ein shook his head. "I gave you that money to help you out, that's all. This is your restaurant, not mine. I'm going to be too busy anyway, starting my community college class in a few days."

Princess sighed. "Fine. But it was still your idea."

Darkness crept inside the tree house, as the sun melted into the ground. "It's getting late. I guess I better go home, even though I know my Grandma's waiting by the door, ready to spew out orders."

"You don't have to go back. You can stay here."

"I can't do that."

"We used to sleep here all the time."

"We were kids back then."

"So what? Just because we graduated from high school, we can't act like kids anymore?"

"That's not what I mean." There was no reasoning with Princess when she acted like this. "I'm gonna go."

Just as he was about to leave, she spurted, "Don't break your butt on the way out."

"Not funny."

***

At least his day couldn't get any worse.

Ein realized that making such a mental statement almost required the Universe to present him with yet another bad situation. But that only happened on TV shows and movies.

Everything seemed quiet enough. Maybe Grandma was already asleep.

Ein opened the door to his room and--

"SURPRISE!"

He stumbled backwards, and his Grandma helped him up.

"WELL DON'T JUST STAND THERE, EINNY-POO! COME IN! TAKE A TOUR OF YOUR NEW ROOM!"

She dragged him into his room.

He was almost blinded by the sight. This was once his sanctuary, his safe house, where everything had its place. But now, bright colors illuminated on the walls. His old posters were replaced with those of ducklings under an umbrella, kittens playing with yarn, and a baby obviously pooping his diaper.

Ein hardly recognized this place.

"ISN'T IT GREAT, EINNY-POO? YOUR OLD ROOM WAS TOO DEPRESSING! TEENAGERS THESE DAYS ARE TOO SULLEN ALL THE TIME! YOU NEED RAINBOWS AND CLOWNS!"

"But I'm afraid of clowns."

"OH, YOU DON'T HAVE TO THANK ME! IT'S ALL IN A DAY'S WORK FOR SUPER GRANDMA! WELL, I'LL LET THE TWO OF YOU GET AQUANTED! SEE YOU BRIGHT AND EARLY TOMORROW MORNING!" She zipped out of the room and closed the door.

More than anything, Ein wanted to slip into bed and sleep. But he saw that his bed was now adorned with clown sheets and clown pillowcases and a clown quilt. They were laughing at him. Laughing because Ein couldn't make his life work the way he wanted it to.

So he curled up on the floor, like all the ceramic dogs that now slept on his desk, and entered a dreamland where things were supposed to be strange.

***

Numbers swam around inside Sunflower's head. She could see it now. The profit margins, the cost-benefit ratios, the budgets, all the wonderful calculations. The thought of being in charge of a restaurant made her mouth water. Or maybe she was hungry.

"Here you are, Sunflower." Vincent, sitting on a bike, held out a lollypop. "Don't worry, I have a whole bag of them."

Sunflower took the lolly. "Thank you. Where'd you get so much candy?"

"I stole it from a baby."

She laughed. "You and your crazy sense of humor."

Old Hobo Joe carried Vincent off his bike, and set the boy onto his heap of dirty pillows.

Vincent popped the lolly out his mouth. "I met a very disagreeable boy today. He was very disrespectful."

Sunflower shook away the numbers from her mind, and focused on Vincent. "Oh?"

"I think he was prejudiced against people like me. He thinks his life is so hard, why doesn't he try to spend a day in my shoes? He doesn't know the stresses I feel and the hardships I must deal with."

"I hate people like that, who look down on other people."

Vincent nodded and yawned. "Well, I need my beauty sleep. I'm heading into the castle. Are you sure you don't want to sleep indoors tonight? Old Hobo Joe found another refrigerator box, so we have a new guest room."

"No, that's okay. I like sleeping out here."

"Very well." Vincent crawled into his castle and Old Hobo Joe guarded the entrance.

Sunflower leaned back against the garbage bin and allowed the numbers to seep into her consciousness, and tickle her mind into sleep.

***

"We have enough in our budget to rent here." Sunflower checked her notes. "The landowner said no one's used this place since it was abandoned."

Princess stared at the building. It was…unique. There were the hog gargoyles that leaned over from the rooftop and laughed with wide piggy mouths; the dead tree and its soulless face and crippled arms; the glowing red eyes in the windows that you could only see out of the corner of your eye. "No way we're having our restaurant in the haunted house."

"It's a manufactured haunted house. This whole area used to be an amusement park years ago."

"It doesn't matter. It's scary." Princess remembered all the stories kids said about this place when she was little. With the crazy lady who launched cats from her tiny catapults if kids got too close. The family of ghosts who starved for eternity, eating anything they could get their fuzzy little hands on. The vampire zombie. The--

"Shouldn't we at least look inside?" Sunflower said.

"If you want to get your head bit off by a goat goblin, go ahead."

Sunflower nodded and headed for the door.

Princess rushed after her. "Wait! You can't go in there alone!"

They stood by the front for a moment. A cyclops doorknocker stared at them with a shiny red eye.

Princess bit her fingernails. "Should we knock first?"

"What do you mean knock? There isn't anyone there."

"Oh yeah."

Sunflower took a deep breath and opened the door.

Princess couldn't look.

Sunflower screamed and dashed away.

Opening her eyes, Princess found a very, very large rat looking up at her from inside the house. "Rat!" She knelt down and smiled at him. "Well don't you have a cute little nose!"

After a while, Sunflower crept over to Princess's side. "So let me get this straight. The house itself scares you, but the giant rat doesn't?"

"Rats are cute. Ghosts aren't."

The rat squeaked and trotted into the house.

Princess followed. The main chamber was a haven for spider webs and dusts, but--"It's not that scary in here. Maybe this would be a good place for our restaurant. I mean, are we going to find anywhere cheaper?"

Sunflower backed away as the rat approached her. "This is a good place, but we're going to have to do something about this rat."

"No! This is his home." Princess held out her hand and let the rat sniff it. He didn't seem to want to bite her, so she scratched the top of his head. "See, he's a friendly rat."

"So what do you suggest? We allow a giant rat to live in our restaurant?"

"Yes."

Sunflower sighed. "We'll continue this conversation later. For now, we need to pay the landowner and get this place cleaned up."

"We're going to need some help."

"I know two guys who'll help."

"I'll get my friend Ein to help too."

"Sounds like a foolproof plan to me

...
hope u enjoy it and do post ur comments!
-aish
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AISH....!!!
Okies firstly a hugeeee update..and an awesome one!!!
Great job!!!
Really written well..loved the dialouges as well!!
thanks for the PM
awww....do hope you can update sooner soem time..in between!
Love ya
~Aru
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Yayyy for quick updates!! 😃 Thanks Aish!
Very nice one. It's become really interesting with the whole Old Hobo Joe angle..
Oh and the grandmother is SOOOOO annoying!! Now I understand why Ein was so distraught when he learnt she was going to come! 😆 😆
Setting up a restaurant sounds fun! Looking forward to more 😃 😃 😃
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aru - again, credit to jeremy for that! i agree..np..yeah i think i'll update nw..
hema di - lol okayy then i'll keep em cmng..😉...np..yeah true..lol thank god i don't have a grand mom like that..😆...yyeah it def will be..!
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Chapter 4: The Mean Boy and the Jerk

Ein almost burst into tears when the phone rang. He was so tired of the scrubbing and the dusting and the footrubs. God, the footrubs.

"I need your help." It was Princess, of course.

"I'll do anything, if it means getting to stop cleaning for a few minutes."

"Great, see you in ten."

Ten later, Ein sat on a different floor, scrubbing away a different family of dirt. "I can't believe your restaurant's gonna be in the haunted house. Don't you remember elementary school? All those ghost stories I told you? You screamed like a little girl."

Princess stared at him, then shook her head. "Baka."

"What does that mean?"

"I told you, it means friend in Japanese."

At that time, a puppy trotted into the main chamber. Ein smiled and petted him. "Whose a nice little puppy dog? Who is it? Who is it?" He turned to Princess. "I didn't know you got a dog."

She grinned. "I didn't."

"So she's not yours?"

"Oh, she's mine."

"Then what are you talking about?" He let the puppy lick his hands.

"That puppy is a rat."

Rat.

Rat.

Rat…

The memories clawed at his mind, so he screamed with all his might, trying to force the dark thoughts out.

He opened his eyes again with Princess hovering over him. Her popsicle rained down on his face.

He sat up and quickly glanced around. "Is it gone?"

"So he's an it now? What happened to cute little puppy dog?"

Ein rocked back and forth, shivering. "If I see that thing again, I swear, I'll run away and never come back here ever again."

She studied his face closely. "You really are scared, aren't you?"

"Of course I am! I was petting a giant rat!"

She shook her head. "There's something more that you're not telling me."

"Don't be ridiculous." He swallowed, hard. "But seriously, where is it?"

"Ratty's taking a nap in the mirror room, so don't worry. Keep cleaning."

Ein nodded and kept scrubbing. "It's going to take us forever to clean this place up."

"Don't worry. Sunflower's bringing some friends to help."

"That's good, at least." The front door opened behind him.

Honk, honk.

Ein's eyes narrowed. He recognized that honk. His bike horn! And more importantly--his bike! He turned around and pointed. "You!"

The spoiled brat also pointed. "Sunflower, that's the boy I was telling you about! The Mean Boy!"

Ein pounced forward. "Give it back!"

"No, it's mine!"

"Liar!"

Ein tried to shake the Jerk Boy off his bike. The caped hobo dashed forward, wrapped his arms around Ein and tugged at him.

"Break it up!" Sunflower ordered. "Everyone! Take a few steps back from each other and let's talk this thing over."

Everyone did as they were told, and sat on the ground, catching their breaths.

"I'd almost prefer the giant rat to this guy," Ein grumbled.

"Now Ein," Sunflower said. "What exactly is your problem with Vincent?"

"My problem is that he stole my bicycle!"

"I didn't steal it!" Vincent burst. "I needed it!"

"What's the difference!"

Sunflower studied Vincent for a while, then--"Can't you see what's going on here, Ein? Vincent was raised in such a horrific environment, he doesn't know the difference between right and wrong."

Ein crossed his arms. "That's no excuse."

Vincent also crossed his arms. "Well if Mean Boy had simply pointed out that I was doing something in the wrong, instead of chastising me in front of my men, no less, I of course would have remedied the situation appropriately."

"See, Ein?" Sunflower walked over and placed a hand on Ein's shoulder. "You shouldn't allow your anger to take control of your life."

Ein erupted, "I am not an angry person!"

***

Princess finished her beef jerky, and looked around for more sustenance.

"I'm going to go check about getting our business license," Sunflower said. "You sure you can take care of these two on your own?"

"Piece of cake." Oh yeah, that reminded her. She reached in her pocket and pulled out a plastic bag with leftover birthday cake inside.

Sunflower straightened her tie. She left, briefcase in hand.

Princess rubbed her hands together and began devouring. It took her a few delicious moments before she could hear the horrible silence infecting the room.

Ein and Vincent sat on opposite ends of the haunted chamber, scrubbing at the floor, slowly, mechanically. They stared at each other with unblinking eyes.

"So…guys…either of you see any good movies lately?" No response. "I saw this one movie about a guy and a girl falling in love, and I don't really remember what happened, but there was this one scene where the girl was cooking a meal for the guy. Meat loaf, mashed potatoes. It looked sooooo good." Still no response.

She sighed, and went to work cleaning the walls. Everything was going along just fine, until she came to this one black spot.

The darned thing wouldn't come out. "You darn thing won't come out." Finally, she--"ahhh!"--and pounded the spot with her fist.

The lights dimmed, and an eerie music began to play.

The ghosts were going to get her! Worse yet, maybe they were after her cake! She rushed over and grabbed Ein. "Help me!"

Ein snapped out of his trance, and forced, "You're…choking…me…."

She let go and grabbed him around the waist. "They're after my cake!"

Ein stood, and she stood with him, still holding on tight. "It's just music, Princess. Probably left over from the amusement park days. We just need to figure out how to turn it off." He took a step, and she took a step with him. "Did you do anything before the music started playing?"

She shook her head, and spoke into his neck. "I was just cleaning."

"Stop that, it tickles."

"Sorry."

"Are you sure you didn't do anything? You didn't flip any light switches?"

"No. All I did was hit that black spot on the wall."

"This one?" He pounded it, and the lights brightened, and the music stopped playing.

Princess searched the room, making sure there weren't any phantoms or goblins hanging around. There weren't, so she let go of Ein.

"Now that wasn't so scary, was it?" He said, patting her head like a child. A second later, his eyes widened, and he wrapped his arms around Princess. "Help me! It's coming to get me!"

Princess turned around, and Ein turned with her. Sheesh, it was just Ratty. "You're a nice little Ratty, aren't you?" She stepped closer to the cute furball.

"Ah!" Ein let go of Princess and sprinted out the door.

Princess petted Ratty for a while, then led him over to the others in the room. "Ratty, meet Vincent and his friend. Vincent and his friend, meet Ratty."

Vincent shook Ratty's hand--"A pleasure."--then kept scrubbing the floor.

Princess was a little disappointed. "You don't seem very surprised that I have a giant rat as a pet."

"Oh, should I be?" Vincent scratched his chin. "I just assumed it was normal for your kind to have rats as pets."

"Are you implying that because I'm Japanese--!"

"No, no. You misunderstand. I'm referring simply to our economic differences. When I was growing up, I wasn't even allowed to have an ant for a pet, let alone a rat of this caliber."

So it was true. This poor guy had been living in a dumpster his whole life.

***

Ein finished sitting fetal-position whimpering in the dirt, and was just about to head back inside to get his bike back, when someone grabbed his shoulder. He turned around.

"I know what you want to do," Sunflower said. "But please, let Vincent have the bike. At least until he can afford his own."

"What do you mean until?"

"You do realize he's homeless. That's how I met him. He sleeps in a cardboard box."

Ein looked at the entranceway to the haunted house, and saw Vincent sitting there, working.

Huh, maybe he was wrong about this guy. Maybe Vincent wasn't a spoiled little brat.

Vincent turned around and petted the bike with a stupid smile on his stupid face.

Jerk.

Ein started walking toward Main Street.

"Ein, wait," Sunflower said. "We need your help."

"I'm not in a very helpful mood at the moment."

She sighed. "Like it or not, Ein, you paid the most money for this restaurant, so me and Princess both agree you're the boss. Shouldn't you be here while we're creating it?"

"I'm not the boss. All I did was give money to my friend to help her out. That's it. I don't mind helping out with the cleaning, but I'm not going back there until the rats are cleared out."

"There's only one rat."

"Yeah, right."

***

"Scrub faster, my minion! Faster!"

Old Hobo Joe scrubbed like a good little soldier.

Vincent realized Sunflower was staring at him, and he felt a strange feeling in my stomach. "Forgive me, Sunflower, for not doing more myself. My hands are not accustomed to this kind of work."

Sunflower nodded. "Don't worry about it. I understand. Probably the only work you're used to is stealing."

"You're quite right. My father stole from innocent people, and then I stole from him."

"I'm sorry you had to go through that, Vincent."

Vincent had never met someone who understood him so well, and yet didn't despise him for it. "Thank you."

***

Ein wasn't in any rush to get back home, so he spent some time standing outside Mario's, thinking about what--who was inside.

He took a deep breath, and that wasn't quite good enough, so he took another deep breath, and built up enough courage to enter.

The Waiter, Wall, towered over Ein, and squinted down at him. "Mr. Einstein, you had best not eat here right now. Mr. Mario is here and he is in one of his moods."

Ein sat down in the waiting area, to get out of view. "He still hasn't forgiven me for making him lose his sight in one eye."

"Not to mention his smell in one nostril, and--"

"You're right. I'd better go. But first, I need to talk to one of the waitresses who works here. I don't know if she's here right now, but she has long brown hair, green eyes. She's only been waitressing here for a few weeks, at most."

"You mean Daisy."

Daisy. Sweet, beautiful Daisy. "Yeah, is she here right now?"

"No, she is not."

At that moment, Daisy walked across the eating area.

"But I see her right there."

Wall sighed and leaned over, until his giant mouth was an inch from Ein's ear. "Let me give you a little advise, Mr. Einstein. You best stay away from that girl. She does not want to speak to you. You humiliated her."

"I know, that's why I'm here. I want to apologize."

"I cannot allow you to speak to her directly, but I will relay a message if you so please."

"I please. Uh…" He pulled a wad of bills out of his pocket. "Give this back to her. Tell her I can't accept it. Tell her I'm sorry for everything I did to her. And um…."

"Something else to add?"

"No. That's it. Thanks, Wall."

"No problem, Mr. Einstein. No problem at all."

Ein sat for a while longer, then left.

***

Wall put the money in the cash register, without any intention of ever taking it out again. "I am sorry, Mr. Einstein," he said to the empty air. "But it is for your own good."

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heres the next one! i know i wasn't supposed to be here, but just thought of posting a part!
-aish
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Res...will edit!
Umm Aish...what did u mean..not written by you????
EDITED!
awesoem part...😛
Really truly sweet!😳
well written Aish!👏
Continue soon!😳
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Heyyy, nice one! I'm sorry for the delay..been busy with stuff.
I really liked this update. It's becoming very filmy..hehe.. There's lots of detail so it's easy to visualise everything. And I really like the humour.
And for some reason, I really liked this line:
"Vincent had never met someone who understood him so well, and yet didn't despise him for it."
In so few words, it says so much about Vincent. Concise, yet very effective in conveying meaning.
(Tiny typo there I just noticed: you mean "despise her", right?) :)
Good work, hey!! Jeremy C, it's very well written!
And thanks for the PM, Aish :)
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aru - yah its not written by me, its written by jeremy :P..lol..thanks on behalf of him..
hema di - lol yeah i love the humour!..n thats true..well i don't realy re-read the parts.but anyway sorry about that typo..np..
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Chapter 5: Autophobia

It was the first day of Ein's community college class, and that meant something very grand. A fresh start. Perhaps now he could end his days of being considered a weirdo, and become a normal student for once.

His clothes were nice, but not too nice. He got his haircut in the morning, because it was getting a bit longer than the average length of boys. (He'd looked up the statistics on the web).

He took a seat next to a nerdy-looking kid with thick glasses and wild red hair (but not the cool kind of wild; not the mohawk or spiky kind of wild, just uncombed). This way, sitting next to the weird kid, Ein would seem that much more normal.

Things were actually coming along quite nice so far. For once.

Then Mrs. Kyoto entered the room.

Princess's mother.

This couldn't be happening. Perhaps she was taking some sort of adult class nearby and she'd accidentally stumbled into the wrong room. Or maybe it wasn't Mrs. Kyoto at all. Maybe she was just someone who looked exactly like her, with the exact same haircut, with the same blemish on her arm, who happened to wear exactly the same outfit that the real Mrs. Kyoto wore on Princess's seventeenth birthday.

"Hello class. My name is Mrs. Kyoto and I'll be your professor for this quarter." She wrote her name onto the chalkboard.

Ein felt his face puffing up. No. No! He didn't want to be gerbil cheeks. Not here.

"Welcome to Psychology 101."

What was Ein worried about anyway? She couldn't know that he was responsible for Princess's revolution.

"Here we're going to learn about all the wonders of the human mind. But first, as I'd like this to be a comfortable atmosphere for all of us, perhaps we should all introduce ourselves. Let's go around the room."

The students spoke, but Ein couldn't hear anything. All he heard was his own heartbeat. The bitter taste of dread on his tongue grew stronger and stronger as the students counted down. Three. Two.

"Hello, uh…my name is…." Ein felt his eyes crossing.

"Class, this is Einstein. He is a very good friend of my daughter, and, I assure you, a very good human being."

See there? Mrs. Kyoto just saved him from making a fool of himself. Ein didn't know how he could have suspected her of foul play in the first place. She was a very nice woman.

"Now who do we have next?" Mrs. Kyoto said.

The nerdy boy next to Ein stood up. "The name is Chucky and I'm allergic to strawberries, tomatoes, cheese, beef, horseradish, kiwis, and seaweed, and I'm an expert on all that is science fiction and paranormal phenomena, if anyone's interested, I started a Tron Club here at the college, at every meeting, we watch Tron once, talk about it for about fifteen minutes, then watch it again, so far I don't have any other club members, but I'm quite hopeful for the future, thank you very much, I--"

"Very good, Mr. Chucky," Mrs. Kyoto said.

Chucky sat down again.

Ein could almost cry out of happiness.

Almost for sure, the class had already forgot about Ein's little stuttering fiasco.

Thank goodness for geeks.

***

Sunflower walked with Princess into the haunted house. It was time to get cleaning again.

She almost tripped when she saw the state the main chamber was in. It was absolutely spotless.

Old Hobo Joe walked in from another room, covered with dust and dirt and grime. He had a mop in one hand and a broom in the other.

"Old Hobo Joe, have you been working here all night?" Sunflower asked.

Old Hobo Joe nodded, then saluted, mop and all.

"You didn't have to do that."

He just stared at her.

"But thank you. We…we really appreciate this."

"Yeah." Princess nodded vigorously. "Really. A lot."

Sunflower looked around. "Where's Vincent? He never came back to the castle last night."

Old Hobo Joe walked into the mirror room.

The two girls followed.

There he was, sleeping in the center of all the funny mirrors, cuddled next to Ratty.

Princess smiled. "See? I'm not the only one who likes that rat."

Vincent opened his eyes into slits, and mumbled, "Is that you, daddy? Have you come to apologize?"

"It's just us, Vincent." Sunflower sat down beside him. "You do know you're sleeping next to a rat, don't you?"

"Indeed I do." He petted the rat and sat up. "She kept me warm all night, like a giant teddy bear."

Princess looked at Sunflower expectantly.

"Well." Sunflower shook her head. "I guess if you and Vincent like the thing, we won't get rid of it."

"Yay!" Princess hopped around.

"I've been working on our budget layout," Sunflower said. "Since we don't have much more cleaning to do, we might as well start buying our supplies. I found a place where we can get used stoves and refrigerators and stuff like that. There isn't much money left after all that and the food, so we're going to need paper plates, plastic silverware, fold out tables and chairs. It'll be difficult, but I think we can do it."

Princess nodded. "Let's go."

Vincent stood, ready to leave.

Old Hobo Joe handed a paper to Vincent.

"Let's see here." Vincent studied the paper. "You've done quite well, soldier. Thank you for the report."

Old Hobo Joe saluted and walked out.

Sunflower couldn't help but envy the two of them. They had a strong bond, as strange as it was. It was sad almost, because Sunflower knew she would never have a strong bond like that ever again. Her life would be numbers from now on. She had to remember that.

She had to.

***

Chucky took another deep breath, then--"Then I said to him, no way aliens would ever take over the planet because that'd mess up their experiments and the number one rule of experiments is try not to affect the outcome, and then he said to me, but what if the aliens are only experimenting on us so they can eventually take us over, and I said, if they're capable of building spacecrafts that can transport them lightyears to us, then they obviously have the technology to take us over if that's their intent, and then he said--" Another deep breath.

But luckily Mrs. Kyoto entered the room (the stretching break was over), and Ein leaned over and said, "We'll talk later."

Chucky closed his mouth, swallowing the packet of air he'd built up.

And the both of them faced the front of the room.

"Now then, everyone," Mrs. Kyoto said. "I thought it would be fun for our first day if we went over some information that I think we would all enjoy. Phobias."

Ein felt his spine tingling, but he assured himself there was nothing going on.

"As I'm sure you all know," Mrs. Kyoto continued. "Phobias are fears of some specific thing or situation. They can be irrational fears, or excessive fears. Many times phobias are caused by some traumatic event in your past that has lodged itself to your subconscious mind, and can be triggered when you're faced with a certain object or situation. Does everyone understand?"

There were numerous yesses and nods.

"Good. Now why don't we go over some phobias, for the fun of it. I'll just open my phobia book to random pages." She opened her book and read out loud. " Dentophobia is the fear of dentists." She flipped to another page. "Homichlophobia is the fear of fog." Another page. "Zemmiphobia is the fear of rats."

Ein brought his hands to his face, but not in time to suppress the girlish scream that escaped his lungs.

Everyone looked at him and laughed.

Mrs. Kyoto looked at him, puzzled. "Einstein, are you okay?"

"Oh, yes," he said. "Fine. I just had something stuck in my throat. So…so I tried to…scream it out." He shook his head while the students laughed. That was one of his worst ones yet.

"I see." Mrs. Kyoto brought her eyes down to the book again. "Then let's continue. Autophobia is the fear of being alone."

***

"Sunflower, is that what we're looking for?" Vincent pointed. They'd been exploring the town's garage sales for hours, and this was the first big white rectangle thingy they'd come across. He forgot what it was called.

"Yes, that's an old fridge. Exactly what we need." She straightened her coat. "I'll go barter with the seller."

Vincent looked around, and couldn't believe the useless knickknacks and doodads people were willing to pay for.

"Hey, look at this!" Princess held up a stuffed cat.

Vincent snickered. "What kind of hunter would go after a beast so small?"

"It's just a toy," Princess said. "Not real. Don't tell me you didn't even have a stuffed animal growing up."

He shook his head.

"Well then, it's about time you have one." She got some change out of her pocket.

"No, you don't have to do that. Really."

"I insist." She dragged him over to the little old man who was selling all the junk.

Sunflower was still talking to him. "If there's nothing wrong with it, why is it so cheap?"

The old man tightened up his face and accentuated his wrinkled. "I told ya, I just don't want it in my house no more."

Sunflower crossed her arms. "I'm not buying it unless you tell me."

The little man sighed. "Fine, you want the truth? That fridge over yonder has developed quite an attitude over the years. I didn't mind it at first, but now I got myself a new wife, and she's all the attitude I can handle right now."

"I heard that, George," said a little old woman, poking her head through a window.

The old man waved her away. "See what I mean? Anyway, there ain't nothing wrong with the fridge. He still keeps things cold, you just gotta keep your wits about you when you're dealing with him. So do you want the fridge, or don't ya?"

Sunflower studied his wrinkled old face for a while, then nodded. "Here's the five dollars."

He took the money, with a tip of his hat.

Princess stepped forward, and gave him the change. "For the stuffed cat."

Without warning, an adolescent boy grabbed the money can off the old man's table and made a break for it.

"Get him, my minions!" Vincent commanded, but then realized Old Hobo Joe was back at the castle, taking a nap.

Princess ran after him. The boy knocked over a lamp in his path, and an instant later, Princess tripped on it, smashing against the lawn.

Vincent dashed over to help her up. And he couldn't believe it. Her nose was actually bleeding. He'd never seen real blood up close like this before. He felt a little woozy.

The boy made it to the sidewalk, when a Ninja, dressed in all black, his face and everything else covered, leapt out from a behind a bush and grabbed him. The boy kicked and squirmed, but the Ninja didn't budge. He grabbed the money can away from the boy, and forced a little pamphlet into the boy's hand. Vincent could just barely make out the title. It said, "How Not to be a Thief in Modern Day America."

The Ninja let go of the boy, and the boy ran away. Then the Ninja gave the money can to the old man.

The old man tipped his hat. "Thank you kindly, Mr. Ninja. I've heard a lot about you, and I thank the stars every day that we got a person such as yourself in our town today."

The Ninja ran back behind the bush at an impossible speed, and vanished.

"Who was that?" Princess asked.

The old man chuckled. "The Ninja, of course. Don't tell me you haven't heard of him."

Princess, Vincent, and Sunflower shook their heads.

"He's been the talk of the town for the past few days."

Sunflower said, "We've been occupied with other things lately. Who is this Ninja?"

The old man scratched his beard. "No one knows his true identity, but he's been a busy bee, I'll tell ya what. Going around, doing good deeds and all that. He seems to be a new breed of hero. By that I mean he's got compassionation for the evil-doers. He never captures 'em, never beats 'em up. Just stops 'em from doing bad things, then hands out little booklets and things like that."

"George, the toilet's broke again!" cried the old woman, her head poked out the window.

"I gotta go, youngins. Enjoy that fridge if ya can. But don't say I didn't warn ya."

***

Ein's stomach roared. "So what's for dinner, Grandma? I'm starving."

She hopped up on a chair. "ME TOO, BUT I THOUGHT TONIGHT YOU COULD COOK US DINNER!"

"I really can't--"

"THAT'S THE PROBLEM WITH TEENAGERS THESE DAYS! THEY LOVE EATING THE FOOD, BUT THEY DON'T GIVE A HOOT ABOUT COOKING IT! YOU TAKE AND YOU TAKE AND YOU TAKE, AND YOU SOMEHOW ASSUME THAT TAKING IS THE BEST PART OF THE DEAL! IT'S ABOUT TIME YOU LEARN TO GIVE!"

Ein sighed. "I'm not really hungry anymore. I'll see you tomorrow, Grandma." He headed up the stairs with--"THERE YOU GO AGAIN! GIVING IN TO YOUR OWN--" blasting behind him, before he shut the door and locked it tight.

Grandma didn't know anything. Ein gave everything he had, until he was completely depleted of energy, and it still wasn't good enough. Anyway, he didn't have time for her ramblings now. He needed to get into bed and think things through. Just as he was about to submerge himself into the dark circus of his covers, the phone rang.

"Princess?" He held his new phone with sweaty palms. He didn't like the fact that he was speaking into a clown's open, grinning mouth. "Where are you calling from? Are you back home?"

"No, we got a new phone for the haunted house. Why would you think I'd go back home?"

"No reason really."

"I know you're probably busy with your classes and all, but could you stop over some time tomorrow? You should be there with us. We're setting stuff up."

"I can't help you tomorrow. I have too much going on."

"But you're the boss, Ein!" Princess boomed. "This was your idea. You have to be there."

"Number one, I'm not the boss. Number two, I won't be there as long as Jerk Boy and the oversized rodent are involved."

"I'll make sure Ratty stays in the other room while you're there, okay?"

"And what about the other rat?"

"Vincent isn't so bad once you get used to him."

"So now you're siding with him? Do you remember what he and his hobo buddy did to me?"

"I know, I know. It's just…you really should be there tomorrow. We need our boss to oversee everything."

"I am not the boss, and I don't want to be a part of your stupid restaurant or your new best friends!" Everything in Ein's mind collided at that moment. He couldn't believe the words were actually coming out of his mouth. He listened to the silence for a long time. "Listen, Princess…I'm sorry. I…I've just been under a lot of stress lately. With my grandma, and the bike, and the rat, and the Waitress Girl, and…I didn't mean it."

"No," her voice was strangely soft. "You don't need to apologize."

"Princess…."

"I'm not mad. Really. I understand. I'm going to go now, Ein. Goodbye."

And that was that.

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