Short story: Ride of my life (now complete!!)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Hey Hema! Awesome work! You did a great job describing her feelings, her desire that the ride never end. You are very good with descriptions. Makes readers feel as if they were there. Awesome FF!

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: nanshr
Hey Hema! Awesome work! You did a great job describing her feelings, her desire that the ride never end. You are very good with descriptions. Makes readers feel as if they were there. Awesome FF!

Sravi, you're awesome! ⭐️ Thank you very much for your kind words. Really appreciate it.

It's a true story so it wasn't too hard for me to describe everything... But, that said, I shall accept the compliment nevertheless 😆

Thanks dear! 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

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No problem

btw, just a suggestion :please write more=)

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Grace-
No problem

btw, just a suggestion :please write more=)

Umm, more, as in more stories? Because I have posted some other stuff in WC..so you can have a look when you can 😊

Thanks for the comment!! 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

yup more stories.

and it wud be great if u introduce the names of the characters n stuff...lol......

ohh sure i'll check out...

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Originally posted by: -Grace-
yup more stories.

and it wud be great if u introduce the names of the characters n stuff...lol......

ohh sure i'll check out...

Lol.. Well, since you insist, the girl's name is Hema. And the guy..ummm 😳 but you can call him whatever you want to 😆

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

hey Hema

Just saw this one nd thought of checking it out....

its really touching- simple yet effective...i can actually feel the emotions...

beautiful story

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Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania
hey Hema
Just saw this one nd thought of checking it out....

its really touching- simple yet effective...i can actually feel the emotions...

beautiful story

Sur

Thanks so much Sur for commenting! I really appreciate it! And I'm very flattered that you liked my story! 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

This is stunningly beautiful. And very moving... especially knowing that it's a true story. I love ur positive attitude..

Big Hug, 🤗

Nish

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Originally posted by: nisha.munim
This is stunningly beautiful. And very moving... especially knowing that it's a true story. I love ur positive attitude..
Big Hug, 🤗

Nish

Wow, I wasn't expecting a comment on this one! Thanks so much Nisha! This was my first story on If and is pretty special to me, so yeah, I really appreciate that you took the time to read it and comment. Thank you! 😃

Aww, bigger hug 🤗 back!!

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