By chance or By choice- One shot - Page 2

Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey caro..nice story..

Ash always wanted a frient in Meera i think..but then she was always critizing her..maybe she meant it in a gud way..but she just did'nt put it across the right way..n tat hurt Ash which made talk to the fig tree..she thought it could hear..aww..its always nice to share ur thoughts, even if the object cant hear u..

n Meera once heard her talking to the tree..and felt bad and said sorry..they patched up and became friends..

Ash was missing her when she went on the vacation..but she as soon as she came back was criticizing the painting which Ash drew..aww..i guess she wants evry1 to be perfect...but Ash aldready was hurt too much 2 b bothered by tat..

so ure gonna write meera's POV?..thats nice.

-aish

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

aw well i really like it, the characters are pretty more mature than 16 years right?.. I mean, if Ash cried for being critizised for her origami's lack of colour at 12 years, and now she can have sucha deep thoughts, i think she has grown up a lot, but it happens, actually, its just the way it has to be. Taking in mind the circumstances that she lives among, its pretty natural that she's like this currently. Nice person. 👏

As for Meera, i feel bad for her, ouch. She's less anoying coz for some reason, when ppl grow up, others leave calling em annoying.. even if they turn to be the most annoying persons in world, do u get me? nvm. Well, but she's still the same, she didn't attempt to change her thirst to judge negatively, coz so far, she didnt say any compliment i think. She ain't bad at heart, coz she made a promise to Ash wid the best of intentions, but she cudnt keep it. But well, she was just 12! who says that promises that are made in such a tender age are meant to be kept.. always?

I liked this. 👏 Do write more please.

Originally posted by: carolinecj

that is such a beautiful thing to say to me!
the characters are odler than they appear..and one reason I would say is probably..some of us have an inner self that is way different from what we express ourself as... I am personally a nerd..but there is a part of me which wants to be an artist...😆😆😆 if u know what I mean..the thought process within a 16 year old may be too profound at times and individualistic!

sometimes we just promise! we dont intend to keep promises i guess at that age

i will definitely write more!
thank u so much!