written update 8th oct(india)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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i don't know whats hapnin & where the serial is goin,its more then month & they showin nothin but hospital,lagtaa hai keessee nae freemai shooting kae liyaa dae diyaa hai & ma aakkkthuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu this dr. manav the new hero,maddyyy tuu 10days baad mental asylum jaa rahee hai naa kavita aur uskee production team koo bhee lae jaa,ektaa kae serial sae bhee sadraa dekha rahae hai,now i even dunnoo feel like watchin anymore,whats the story line they r taking its really bogus,gutteral & more over they always shows somethin new,but it was always good but this bull shit,they r tryin to adjust a story line with no meanin

well,the operation done,its a baby boy 4 them both,dr. goes & tell its a boy,all r happy,too happy,all thanks god,kamya is like will go mad hearin this,she says she wanna see her grand-son,but dr. says f u have waitied this long then little more time won't make any differences,so wait 4 some more time,sameer says both allright naa dr. u tellin the truth naa,dr. smiles & sameer rmbrs what somyaa wanted to do & he instantly hugs the dr.& thanks him(guys he means wait 4 some more time til the stupid story line gets more stupid & we start tearin our hairs,hheee............),just then a nurse comes & informs dr. to go & celebrate as this time its your miracle,we have dr.junior manav in the world & dr. is escatic to listen this & says f u all will excuse me,i willl just be back & sister informs he has just become a proud father tooo & all cong. him,he rushes & while goin to the otty he hugs every dr. he know shoutin me a papa,he is very happy,he reaches to teh otty & a nurse cleanin the otty & dr. saks bout his wife,nurse amn't able to say anythin,only she been shifted to the room,he gets out & as is bout to find out which room sees dr. saurav & says thanks buddy,u have always given me so much happiness but this time u have given me the precious gift.tell me what i had & boy or girl.fast,tell me,& dr. surav says its a boy,& dr. slaps his one hand 3rm other & shouts she won again,she always knows every thin,this time again she won,she has given me the world best gift,she has lighted my life,i wanna see her & willl shower her with my kisses as my life most beautiful gift is now with me & dr. stops him sayin in givin u a life gift she succedded but she lost her life in that process & dr. is shoked & he goes throug all the flash back time spent with her,

he enterd inside the room & see a body covered in a whits sheet,opens the cover & its pallavi,he tries to wake her up(oh! god,plz npt again,isn't production house goin nuts to seee the same sceane & dialouge,tummmmmm mujhae chodr kae nahee jaa saktae,abaay jaa saktae tou update teraa bapu karta kiyaa,yum kiyun gayee,takee glecreennee kaa pisa kavita bachha sake aur apnae saath do cha koo aur agra lae jaa sakae,abbmai tumahare binaa kiya karungaa,pari sae romance bewakuuf,yahan sandy aur papu intazaar karta hai kee mai kab jauu aur unkaa pichaa chodru aur tujhae tou bin mangae hee mill gayaa,donn 1.30 sae lae kar subhae kae 4 bajae tak yaa hee geet gatae rehtae hai,tuu kab jaa rahee hai)abyaa dr. seek hamsae khuch asuun poch,mard ban seena taan aur chall pari sae romance karnae,he cryin & dr. saurav comes & asks 4 the forgivness not to anle to save his wife & all blah!ekk tou nakee kiyaa upar sae mafee,kiyaa bava rajshree tou chup rustam niklaa,ektaa koo bhee mat dadiyaa marnae maranae mai,👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 2 nurses standin sayin till date non patient died 4rm the dr. manav's hand what ever the complication is the patient & child both always servives & see today he not even able to see his wife last time & being such a big dr. wasn't even able to save his own wife

sameer goin nuts,he distrubets money hwo ever comes in his ways(nurse & ward boys)then he rmbrs somya wanted to hug every ward boy,so he calls again every one & hugs them & says no to nurse & gives the money too all sayin distrubets to every one & eat sa much sweet as possible & enjoy,chahiji standin & watchin all this & is little confused,its all true or what,sameer is just showin or its all true,sameer enter inside the mandir & sits in 4nt of ramjee & tell him thankz to give him this hapiness & both r fine & again renew his promise to take care of the child more then is life,

nurse brins the child.all r so happy & taijee tells nurse to give us the child,nurse lovingly no,can't,dr. manav will give this child to his mom 1st,its the mother rights to see her child 1st,kamya rushes & says my somya has come & wanna take the child,nurse repets not anyone but mom 1st,so no,kamya shouts,he not if anyone,he my somya,my child,will not give to anyone,& never to apri,she is the one who killed my child my somya,she is the one who took away my son,i won't give this child to any one,& who the hell is dr. manav to tell me whome the child will take 1st,me gonna take 1st,u all gi to hell(yes baby,we al will gonna be hell seeing all this scrape daily,yaar trp mai kuch unatee hai kee aur uppar bhadr gayaa),all shoked in this outburst in kamya,abhay tries to control his freeky wife,but to no avail,danima comes & says to somya(hai!bhagwan!phir wohee leacture.cooleege aur school mai maa nae keetnee bar kahaa lecture attend kar loo,practice hoo jatee naa,lae abb bhugat)pari is not to be blamed,its not in our hand,death & survival is god's wish,f we can then pari wouldn't let your son & somya die & blah! -2-2-2-2-2& i request give the child back & to pari,the way u r hurtin to have your son back,your mamta 4 somya think of pari,she kept her son to her 4 nine months(thanks 4 the information woman have to keep the child in ovem for 9 months,i thought it was 4 some only 9 weeks,how informative this production has become)& she too had some dreams with this child,so give it back & then nurse too say sterny yes,give it back(han tuu bhee behtee gangaa mai haath dhoo lae,kiyunkee abhee tunae nageen kaa aslee rup nahee dekha,jab jagae gee tub dekhanae hai behatee gangaa nai haat dhona hai kee tuu usmai rakh ban kar beha jatte hai),she gives the child back & danima takes the child to pari,& their dr. saurav too brings the child to dr. who is sittin & cryin & thinkin only of his dead wife & her last words of teasin him bout to learn how to tie a shoes lasces & all,gives the child to dr. & again apolligise & went with tears in his eyes,dr. ho;ld the baby to his heart & loves him with ters of joy & sadness,pari too lovin her son with tears of joy & sadness & wth that serial ends(thank god! had mercey on us at last)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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kya yaar, din bhar din yeh serial bakwaas hota jaaraha hai.

thanx payal for writing these updates even though u cant stand it anymore.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks payal........ 👏 👏 👏
tho dr ki wife maari gayi kya yaar writers ko kisi ko maarne khi aadat hai kya sab log ko maarthe hi rehathein hain....... 😡
agla marne waala hai pari ka baccha....... 🤢
mein soch ke hi paagal ho jaaoongi.......... 😡 😡
dehkthein hai aage kya hoga...... 😕 😕 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the update.

Count of death -- 4 {rohits mom, dadaji, saumay, dr. wife} , Am I missing someone.

Please Payal don't let your update die along with this...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks Payal fopr doing justice again 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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haan payal.... main rajshri writers ko zaroor leke jaaongi.... pakka... arre mujhe toh lagta hain ki abhi tak hospital waale unhe doond hee rahe honge 😆 itna bakwaas kahaani likh rahe hain naa.... aaj article pada tha... lagta hain ab dr.saurav pari ka agla pair hoga.... yaa phir manav... woh toh aur bhi bakwaas hain ..... 🤢

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