Sidyali FF: Irresistible [Chapter 1 - page 3. 20/09] - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shinning_AD

Awsome 👏👏👏

Do continue writing ~ Would love to read it


Thnks for reading 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome. Simply loved it! 😊
Love your style of writing. Feels like reading a real book.
Crapy? No way! 😳
The narrative style is fantastic.
Love it!
Keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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When will you update the next part??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Garima04

When will you update the next part??
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Exams the coming week, but will update latest by Wednesday.
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Exams the coming week, but will update latest by Wednesday.

great!!
Looking forward to it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yup I'm writin nthr one and hopefully I'm gonna complete this one.


please give us a summary for the one you're not writing . :/
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Update coming tomorrow. Exams just ended today.
One more thing guys, I have decided to complete Blizzard
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Great !!
Looking forward to read it
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C H A P T E R O N E


What can be wicked than not having a job? I'd say it'd be the long falter after you have attended an interview - for a job of course, to know if you have survived the slaughter as well as you presume or not. I let my speculative gaze slither through the spurious shades of burgundy as I crossed and uncrossed my shaky legs for the fifteenth time. Not that I liked the color in particular I was just zooming on the derailing trail of events I had gone through. My eyes halted at the wall clock again. 11.30 AM it read. I clicked my fingernails on the worn-out cloth of my bag and heaved a sigh. This one, considering this was my very first one, did go fine, almost fine.

I could feel my stomach muscles squeezing, twitching, and dissecting my interiors. My last meal was the one offered to me on the plane and I did not actually have the time to go grocery shopping or grab something from somewhere. I sipped some cold water. It was sort of depressing actually, being pathetically lonely fogged with strangers in a place away from home waiting on to know if you've made a job you never plotted on taking up .Through the screens of my psyche I could see my once genuine sixteen year old self mock at me, at my imbecility. Being a personal assistant for a some swish, spoiled celebrity was definitely not one of the things I had pictured myself doing a couple of years ago. Predominantly because I was good in my studies, maybe even brilliant and I was proud of what I was. However, life never takes you the places you want to go, if it did then you would not call it life would you?

It is almost funny how people change. Look at me. A wannabe something to a hopeless nothing. Sometimes at the summit of self-disgust, I really wish I could re-live my life, take different decisions, erase my past, never meet the guy who made me believe that he loved me and one fine day broke me. Life must be left a pity, unedited. The click of heels fretting the porcelain whacked my brain and coerced it to conform my thoughts to the present. I raised my eyes expectantly to encounter Meg as I pulled myself up from the chair. Even though I could not exactly call her my friend because we spent so little time to befriends, she was more than an acquaintance and whether I made it or not I would be grateful to her for helping me get here. Without this offer, I would have been serving tables or worse.

The way she threw her arms around me insinuated that I had made it. The broad grin decking her face validated my hunch.

"I made it, didn't I?" I manage to chock out through her asphyxiating hug.

"Yes. You did. I told you didn't I?" she wallowed stiffening her hold. For a moment there, I almost thought I would pass out.

"You're chocking me." I muttered attempting to decarbonize my lungs.

"I'm so sorry, it must have been the excitement." she apologized.

"It's okay. Thank You. Without you I'd have..." I trailed off. Sentimental was the last thing I would like me to be.

"It's cool. You owe me a treat after your first salary. " She blinked her left eye while keeping the other one focused on me.

"Sure thing." I beamed back. "But I don't know anything about who'll they assign me to." I literally had no time to amuse myself with the various sources of entertainment; I had heavier things to take care of.

"Don't fret. You'll get used to it. Actually, the label were looking for someone who wasn't a fan and barely knew their talent."

"Oh, that's half a worry down for me." I forced a smile.

"It is. Now you won't have to overwork. This job will pay for your other stuff."

"I know." I asserted to myself more than to her. This job would pay me enough to take care of everything and I wouldn't have to run multiple shifts between jobs. I might finally be able to breathe.

"When do I start?" I asked, unable to hide the quirkiness in my tone.

"Well today. You'll start tomorrow. I'll text you the studios address."

"Okay. Anything else I need to know?" I inquired daubing a professional touch.

"Nothing really. Bye. Take care"

"Thanks.Bye." I enclosed her in a brief hug and led myself away.


This could be a fresh start at a career. Irrespective of what happens from now, I won't backtrack. I badly needed the money.


"Siyali I forgot to tell you." And before I could make a few feet, I hear her voice stab me.

"His name is Sidharth."

I freeze.


~xXx~


I finally put up chapter one. Had a rough last week. Exams. Glad that the coming week has got tons of holidays. I really wanna update faster. And coming to the update don't forget to leave your comments/reviews/suggestions. Buddy me for pms.


Thank You.

Edited by Destiny_rose - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You've put Siyali's pov so well.
Very beautifully written.
Feel like reading more n more.
why did it end so early?
Waiting for more updates and soon pls
Really great script..loved it
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And thanks for the PM
Edited by Garima04 - 10 years ago

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