OS : 3 jodis/love stories/fate PART 2 PAGE 3 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

Its fabulous..👏

I loved parth's monologue , you described it wonderfully..

Then charlie was also nicely portrayed!

And sid's feelings were bang on..

Just lived it!

Keep writing😉

Originally posted by: MistyDawn

Very interesting!!! I love the concept of depicting the three state of minds.. do keep writing! :)

Originally posted by: Garima04

The guys and their PoV..so beautifully explained..u nailed it
So much pain for all three..
Please continue and write something related to the three girls and their POV
Waiting to read it 😉

Originally posted by: ankusanu

Sam grt job...
Parth still is broken
N desperately wants n misses veebha.
He truly loves her...
Feeling bad fr sid n Charlie too
Wish wh starts soon
With all 3 jodis

Originally posted by: sidyalifan

Really great job

awesome awesome

truly loved it

Do continue

Originally posted by: akira223

Wow

It's fabulous

Loved how u showed their feelings

I wish somewhat like this only happen in s2

Keep writing!!!

Originally posted by: Helping_angel

A BIG wow parth 👍🏼

I just loved it .. Vibha ko bahot pasand aayi 😳

Parths POV was brilliant .so was Charlies

And sid was too good .. Everything was perfect !!

Keep writing dear

I just love your writings 😆👏