A Ky2 & WH FF:-U stole my heart!!!!!(Part 13 on pg 9) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Too good dear...pls continue 👏
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Part 3:- (Fab 5 n Navni had completed eating their food.So Sid n Siyaali stood up to leave but Manik stopped him) Manik:-Hey by the way u guyz r super cute together just like me n Nandini. Sid:-Thanx bro.
Nandini:Thanx for the food it was relly very tasty.
Siyaali:-U guys r most welcome.
Sid:-Ok got to go we have to report to Veebha mam.
Manik:-Ya sure see u in the evening at the opening ceremony.
Nandini:-Infact waiting for both of ur performances.
Sid:-Don't worry will surely kill the floor.
Manik:-Ofcourse u both will kill the dance floor cause jab chemistry itni killing ho tho floor toh bachne hee nahi waali.
Nandini:-Manik stop it naa.
Sid:-Ok ok u guys continue we have to leave.
Manik:-Fine then.
Sid:-Siyali chal.
(Sid went holding each other hand towards teachers room)
Sid:-Ur still blushing.
Siyaali:-Why not afterall they were continuously teasing us.
Sid:-Aww...look at u ur looking choo cute.
Siyaali:-Shut up we r at the teachers room.
Sid:-Mam may we come in.
Veebha:-So how was it?Did they enjoy the food?
Siyaali:-Yes mam they relly enjoyed the food.
Sid:-Well mam apart from these all things I relly liked there behaviour.
Veebha:-Wo jaldi aise kisi ke saath ghulte milte nahi hai but m happy atlest they had started changing themselves .
Siyaali:-Mam real reson is Nandini di.
Veebha:-I know cause love changes everybody.
Sid:-Love does wonders mam.
Siyaali:-(eyelock)
Veebha:-Uhoo uhoo well if guys wanna romance u can continue somewhere else.
Siyaali:-Mam aisa...
Veebha:-Don't try to fool me I can see that in ur eyes.
Sid:-Kya yaar Siyaali Veebha mam se kyu darr rahi hai wo Kamini mam thori naa hain jo itna darr rahi hai.
(Sid didn't knew that Kamini mam was just behind him)
Kamini:-Siddharth Rajpoot kya apko apni adhayapika ke bare mein aisi ashisht waani
bolte hue zara bhi lajja nahi ati.Abb apki shikayat hum Urmila ji se karenge,hum unse sawal karenge ki kya yahi shiksha di hai unhone apne putrr ki.
Sid:-Mam mujhe maaf kar dijiye aage se aisi koi bhi galti nahi karunga.
Kamini:-Yeh aapko bolne se pehle sochna chaahiye tha.
(Sid face fell down cause he again will get a long lecture from his mom.Siyaali quickly placed her hand on Sid's shoulder giving an assuring smile to him.Veebha was just admiring these two love birds she thought that at such age how can they understand each other so well.On the other hand Kaminin went to Urmila Rajpoot to complain due which Urmila Rajpoot was boiling with anger.Sid was called by the peon to Urmila's cabin but Siyali didn't left him she was just behind the cabin)
Urmila:-Welcome Mr.Siddharth Rajpoot.
Sid:-Mom main who bass...
Urmila:-Here m trying my level best to make u best in everything n u r continuously reuning that.Why u always have to be so pathetic Sid can u expalain it to me.
Sid:-Mom why u alwys force me to do what m not intrested in .I always wanted to excel in sports but u continuously forced me to take those things which I was not intrested in.
Urmila:-But I want u to excel in everything Sid so that all can say me that Ur The Siddharth Rajpoot's mom naa.
Sid:-I can't excel in everything mom cause my way can either be one not all.
Urmila:-Why u forget ur a Rajpoot?We r born to be winners not loosers.
(Now Siyaali was boiling with anger she could not hold on anymore.Siyaali entered the cabin while claping her hand loudly.Sid n Urmila's gaze fell on Siyaali)
Siyaali:-Wow Mrs.Urmila Rajpoot what a philosophy.Kaha seh churaya.
Urmmila:-Siyaali ur crossing ur limits.
Sid:-Baby what ur doing here u go I don't want ki meri terah inhe kuch bhi bahana mile tujhe kuch bhi bolne ka.
Urmila:-Oh so she ur new found girfreind.
Siyaali:-That's non of ur business aur haa aaj jo kuch aapne kaha na iseh saaf zaahir hota hai ki aapke jitni selfish koi nahi ho sakta hai.Mom jiasa word aap pe bilkul suit nahi karta hai.
Urmila:-How dare u?
Sid:-Don't u dare to speak any ill will against my girfreind mom otherwise u'll see my dead face.
Urmila:-She is just a random girl for u just like Krissane.
Sid:-Enough,she is not any random girl to me.She is my soul mate for life get that straight in ur head.I never felt this way for any girl but I felt for her when she came into my life.I don't need to give justification to what she is to me mom so just stay out of it.One more thing don't even think for hurting her in any way otherwise I'll destroy u.Siyaali chal yahan yahn se.

Siyaali:-Sid ur fine na baby,Sid just look at me.

(Siyaali was trying her level best to manofy him but he was continously walking holding her hand with unshed tears coming.Finally he reached the place where he used to punch the puching bag.He locked the door n then left her hand.He straight away went to the punching bag n started punching the bag but Siyaali came there to stop him.In his anger he pushed Siyaali on the ground.Just then he realised what he did so he immidiately rushed to her.)

Sid:-Siyaali m very sorry I didn't mean to heart u.

Siyaali:-Sid more than these bruises ur inner pain is hurting me.Stop hurting ur self otherwise I'll die baby.I love u very very much.

Sid:-Kaise karoon Siyaali tu hee bata haa.Iss baar na sirf mujhe hurt kiya but mere pyaar ko gaali dee unhone .She told be that ur a random girl.

Siyaali:-Unke bolne seh yeh baat sacch toh nahi hota hai na Sid.

Sid:-Tujhe zarurat kya thi waha aane ki .

Siyaali:-Sid she was continuosly blabbering ill will against my love.How could I stop myself?

Sid:-Siyaali just because of that u hurted urself.

Siyaali:-Ur pain hurting me more Sid more than my insult.

Sid:-Tu pagal hai kya?

Siyaali:-Yes cause m mad in ur love get it straigh Mr.Siddharth Rajpoot.

(Sid tried to look away but Siyaali forced him to look in her eyes.She kissed Sid's tears away n then kissed his hands.Sid kissed on her forhead.Suddenly Siyaali kissed on Sids lips n soon there tongues were colliding with each other.They were smooching each other while crying.After a while they broke from the kiss n joined there fore heads)

Siyaali:-My baby, never n ever hide ur pain from me.

Sid:-Thank u for understanding me.I love u baby.

Siyaali:-I love u too.

Guys enjoy reding this part.This emotional as well as romantic.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Lovely update..
But it was more of sidyali from past three chapters..
Where is vibhart n dhruv and aliya ??
But sidyali scenes were perfect..
N manik n nandani as well..
Plz try to bring others scene as well...
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shikha022

Lovely update..

But it was more of sidyali from past three chapters..
Where is vibhart n dhruv and aliya ??
But sidyali scenes were perfect..
N manik n nandani as well..
Plz try to bring others scene as well...
Tc

In this FF Vibha is still ignoring Parth were as Dhrulya have still not moved out of the mess they had created earlier that's why but I'll try to bring those scenes also.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Sandhirrocks

In this FF Vibha is still ignoring Parth were as Dhrulya have still not moved out of the mess they had created earlier that's why but I'll try to bring those scenes also.


Ohk thanks 😊
Will be waiting for that...
Coz u have portrayed the sidyali scenes very beautifully..
Will be waiting for more Jodis..
N plz pm if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
SidYali ❤️..awesome , loved it...update soon please.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shikha022


Ohk thanks 😊
Will be waiting for that...
Coz u have portrayed the sidyali scenes very beautifully..
Will be waiting for more Jodis..
N plz pm if possible

Well thankx for understanding n next time I'll try to put some Vibharth n other Jodi's scenes as well.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4:- Siyaali:-Ok now get up ,freshen ur self a bit n then change ur costumes for the performance. Sid:-Come I'll drop u till the girl's dorm. Siyaali:-But u have to carry me in ur arms. Sid:-Anything for my baby. (Veebha was watching them from a corner n smiling.Parth was standing just behind her.As soon as Sidyaali went away Veebha turned herself she was shocked to see him so she tried to go away.He grabbed her from waist n led her to a secret corner0 Veebha:-Parth what r u doing please leave me. Parth:-Jab aap mujhse pyaar karti ho then why r u showing me away from u. Veebha:-Because we r not meant to be Parth. Parth:-Why mam?
Veebha:-M ur teacher n ur my student.Society hamaare pyaar ko kabhi accept nahi karegi.
Parth:-I don't give any dam to the society ;the only thing which I care is that I madly love u mam.Plaese don't leave me like my dad left my mom n me.
Veebha:-Parth I also love u too Parth but main ek larki hoo jise yeh society harr choti cheez pe sawaal karti hai.I also don't give any dam to society but dadi ka kya,puri society toh unhe hee blame karegi naa.
Parth:-I'll fight for u with this so called society mam.
Veebha:-Parth I need time to think about this matter.I'll take ur leave theek 2 ghante baad ceremony start hone waali hai I need to go.
Parth:-Mam I'll wait for ur answer.
(Veebha left the place while a smile crept on Parths face.On the other hand Sid left Siyaali till the dorm n both started preparing themselves for the the ceremony.Abhi reached the place where Fab5 n Navni were there)
Abhi:-Hello ladies n gentleman presenting the chocolaty boy Abhimanyu Thakkar.
Mukti:-Abhi!!!!!!!!!!!itni der kaha laga di.
Abhi:-Mogambo I was stuck in the traffic.
Nandini:-Ahm...ahm..main bhi hoon.
Abhi:-Hey baby doll how r u.
Nandini:-Abb tumhe meri yaad aai.
Abhi:-Sorry baby doll.
Manik:-Hey Abhi how r u feeling now.
Abhi:-Main toh hamesha ki tarah bikul theek but tum dono ke haal kaise haa baat kisss takk to pohchi naa.
Cabir:-So finally Abhi beta tu aa hee gaya abb tu hee sambhal iss mogambo ko.
Dhruv:-Happy ur back
Alya:-Me too...
Mukti:-U go n freshen up hame thori der mein ceremony ke liye jaana hai.
Abhi:-Ok I'll just freshen up fast.
(Abhi went away to get freahend up while others were engrossed in their work.Alya went outside to get some fresh air taking the advantage of no one being there Dhruv instantly went to Alya.Alya was looking outside0
Dhruv:-Hey.
Alya:-Dhruv what ur doing here.
Dhruv:-I came here to talk to u.
Alya:-Nothing is left to talk Dhruv.Its all over.
Dhruv:-Can't I get second chance.
Alya:-No I can never forgive u.
Dhruv:-Please just give me the last chance to prove myself.
Alya:-I wil think.
Dhruv:-Chale
Alya:-Ok.
(Dhurulya went away to get ready.The scene shifts to green room were Siyaali was changing her costume.Suddenly Sid came over there n was relly amazed to see her like that.It was very short red n black dress which is generally worned by the salsa dancers.Her whole belly was exposed n the dress was upto her upper thigh.She was also wearing a pair big stellitoes,her hair was opened n a feather was placed on the left side of her hair.She had applied a dark red lipstick on her lips n some other make up stuff & a fathery earrings.)
Siyaali:-Sid ur looking awsum.
Sid:-Ur looking super super hot.
Siyaali:-So is our performance Mr.Rajpoot.
Sid:-Ur killing be by ur super hot guestures baby.
Siyaali:-When my boyfriend is super sexy n hot then I have to also look dam hot n sexy like him.
Sid:-Ur even more sexier n hottest then me baby.
(Sid just held her through waist n then kissed her on her cheecks n she also did the same)
Siyaali:-Now I think we should go to back stage.
Sid:-Ya come with me.
Siyaali:-But baby agar kisi ne...
Sid:-Shh...don't worry kisi ki itni himmat nahi jo meri girlfriend ko haath lagane ke bare mein bhi soche.
Siyaali:-Hmmm...
(Sidyaali went backstage n joined their frends.)
So guys enjoy this part n ya this part is specially dedicated to one of my constant reader Shikha.This is dedicated to u babes.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww.. thank u soo much..
n btw i really love this part..!!
vibharth scene n dhurulya scene were just fab..
so everyone giving scnd chance.. wow..
n i really like the way u portrayed abhi n mukti scenes !!
n vibha n her society pressure was amazing.. u actually bring out the main problem of their love story..
sidyali scenes as always super romantic !!
now m really looking forward will they give each other a chance / second chance !!
curious curious n curious !!
update soon will be waiting for next part !!
thank u so much once again !!
tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shikha022

awww.. thank u soo much..
n btw i really love this part..!!
vibharth scene n dhurulya scene were just fab..
so everyone giving scnd chance.. wow..
n i really like the way u portrayed abhi n mukti scenes !!
n vibha n her society pressure was amazing.. u actually bring out the main problem of their love story..
sidyali scenes as always super romantic !!
now m really looking forward will they give each other a chance / second chance !!
curious curious n curious !!
update soon will be waiting for next part !!
thank u so much once again !!
tc

Ur most welcome dear.

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