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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rosabelle

beautiful update anki!! well done, bravo!!

parth should not be in tension, he's a topper! he will do well!!

Tysm dear...it means alot to me...Bravo aww ty...Parth will tk tnsn or not and wat be the rsult suspense..ty dear...ur comment gives me motivation🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

nice update loved it..
Vibha all dressed up and all appreciating her wow and then our jealous parth , didn't like her talking to rishabh😉
parth has lost it kya??😆 studying so hard that not at all sleeping😳
Vibha cares for him aww😃
Takes him to medical room and he comes back with books hilarious😆 she knew he was gonna do that!😛
Uttu what did you do?? reminded him exams are in three days and he ran back to study😆
Next Vibha in full firey mode gonna blast him off..took him back to medical and asked him y he was doing it and he said for his wife and mom😳 and she asked found her? he replied yeah!!
aww this was the best convo..superb!👏
then parth doing actions while sleeping , vibha keeping wet towels whole night😲
awesome part!!
I am waiting for next😉
Ofcourse parth gonna top man..😃

a big big thnk u dear...m seriously vei hppy that u loved it..u read full and gave ur best parts u loved it...kp commenting as such...m feel higly motivated babes...u r hppy then m hppy too...
Topper students traits are in Parth😆
Whole night towel to cool down his body temp...
Well that's the suspense who will top and wat reaction of vibharth...tysm alot babes😳🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SalinaKhan

Aww Anki, this was so cute . Everything we wanted to see in the show in one OS 👏. Vibha's make over, jealousy and Vibha taking care of Parth. Loved it, your ideas are too good, waiting for the next update😉.

Tysm dear alot...finally I made u to comment diff word for my work...cute ty dear...it's a big compliment for me...ya me too want it...hoping cvs do it...
I just wanted to put evrythng in 1...ty for compliment for my ideas dear🤗 I feel higly motivated😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shikha022

That was super awsm anki..

I really love every single bit of ur ff..
The part where vibha do new makeover n parth couldn't help but starring at her continuously..
Then parth says everything in one go..
N vibha blushes..
Then the way vibha took care of parth...
All the moments in meri room were just wow..
M in vibharth world..
Seriously tat was super amazing part till now..
Hoping to get more..
N again loved every single part ...
Tc

aww...tysm dear alot...a comment from my critic😆 m glad u loved every bit of it...ty it's a big compliment for me...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Helping_angel

Anki

Plz send it to CVS naa .. So in s2 we get to see such cute scenes 😳
Vibha makeover 😉
Jelous parth 😆
Blushing vibha
Awww .. So well described 👏
Jaldi dedo next one
Can't wait 😭
Take care 😆

aww...a comment from my anu😳 m hppy babes u loved it...it's a big compliment for me to send it to cvs...nybdy can send it or u urself send it babes...waiting for next part...will update asap dear🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ankusanu

Nice update...
Veebha caring parth..
N looking beautiful..
Bangle part ws also soo gd...
Parth really wants to break d record..
All d best fr nxt update

tysm dear alot...m glad u liked it..I wonder wen u will say sum othr word other than nice...ok I will mke u give me some othr word...yup parth is ready to break the record...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Angevil786

Awww Anki your getting more romantic update by update i guess its Vibharth effect..

I really loved the update that was sooo romantic very well written..
Thanks for the pm

Tysm dear alot...m glad u luvd it...yaa u vei well know which effect it is 😉 u can tell it as vibharth or ur company effects😉🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 15

RECAP-vibha took care of parth coz he was sick and now he is quite good J

Now...

In assembly hall...

Urmilla-gm every1 ...u have been assembled here to know a vei imp announcement...

Yes...as u all know ur exams are going to start within 3 days bt it has postpone and it will be start after 5days...that means from Monday...all the best 😊

Dismiss...

Utkarsh-aisa thodi koi karta h...main fail hojaunga...sabh bhul jaunga main

Parth-looking at him and says "tu kabhi nai sudhrega"

Utkarsh-bht mazzal sujh rha h tujhe ? really ? yaar main serious hoon...sach may fail hojaunga main..haan tut oh bolega hi cox tujhe kya h...tu top karega naa...tujhe toh sabh kch ataa h..

Parth was lost "TOP" he says in mind mujhe record break karna hi h kisi bhi haal my making a jeals look

Utkarsh-abh tujhe kya hua...abhi toh smile kr rha tha...acchnk se kya hua bro ?

Parth-kch nai...

Vibha sees them talking and sees utkarsh panicking...

Vibha-kya hua utkarsh ? tm itna tnsd lag rhe ho and tmhri shakal keh rahi h ki tm dareve ho...sabh thk h na ?

Parth was abt to say to avoid this topic coz he thought how silly will be if vibha maam to see utkarsh behaving weird for exam..bt utkarsh said-maam aap mujhe miss karoge aa...main aap ko bht miss karunga...

Vibha-utkarsh y u saying such things...hua kya hai ? thk se btao ?

Utkarsh-main fail hojaunga...aap ko pta h ki main kitni mushkil se yaad kia and abh bol rhe h ki exam 5days baad hoga...tbh tak main sabh kch bhul jaunga..aur MATHs and hindi toh mere palle hi nai padhti hai...

Vibha started laughing and said "relax..sabh thk hoga and tmdono best kroge...waise tmdono group study kar lo...all the best..i have a class to teach J

Utkarsh-maam...r u serious ? parth k saath padhai...aap ko pta h na ki yeh kitna padhta h...seriously yeh itna padhta h ki koi bhi bhul jayega vo insaan khud kya padha h...plzz maam mujhe itni buri saaza matt do...iss k saath padhna mere liye saaza hogi...main aur bhul jaunga and koi doubt nai hoga ki school se nikl denge...

Vibha and utkarsh are laughing hard😆😆😆

Parth looking at both of them and gave a look at them...not so funny

Vibha smiles at parth and leaves...

At night...

Utkarsh was lying on bed...

Parth enters and says utkarsh-chl uth..bht so liya..now get up..its not the tym to sleep

Utkarsh-yaar sone de..dkh kal se pacca padhenge aapne...subhah se start krte h...new day new energy parth bro..thk h..tu bhi sojaa...

Parth-accha thk h..aaj jitni neend puri krni h kar le...kal se main teri class lunga..tu ruk bht hui teri bachkaani harkatein...

Utkarsh in half sleeping mode covering his face with blanket and says bro darra kyun rha h aur...thk h uth jaunga...

Early morng...

It was around 4am...

Parth gets up and says utkarsh get up...letz study

Utkarsh doesn't responds...

Parth now shook him and says utkarsh get up...

Utkarsh-bas 10 mins...sone de yaar and again cover up his face with blanket...

Parth was now go angry and said utkarsh tu uth rha h ki main paani phekun ?

Utkarsh got up fast and said nai...uth gya hoon...chl lib...main washroom jaa k ata hoon

Parth-jldi aana...warna dkh lena...

Utkarsh-haan aa rah hoon...bole toh tub hi chle...hmdono bro h...apna BROMANCE

Parth giving a look and say nothing can happens of yours...

Parth and utkarsh studies in lib

Suddenly utkarsh yawn and says for today its enough...m feeling hungry and see mess will open after 8am

Parth- utkarsh tujhe abhi bhi khaane and sone ki padi h ? exams hai saamne...

Ok...bht bhuk lagi h na tujhe wait i have sumthng for u

Utkarsh-excitedly kya ? main jaanta hoon tu mera best Bro h...pta tha mereko tu kch naa kch jugadd krga mere liye...

Parth closed the literature book and gave him maths book and said solve this...u wont feel hungry..just start solving it..tym will pass asap and study will happen too...with a smile

Utkarsh-pta tha mujhe...i thought u have chngd in my company bt no u havnt huh...BORING

Parth -ok ...now u have...shall we study ?

Parth was confused and wasn't getting the ans of the sum...

Utkarsh takes the pen and says arey bewakuff le hogya...does the sum...so simple it is...

Parth-utkarsh its not so simple..u know i hate this chap and m fearing coz of this sub i wont get good rank...u r brilliant utkarsh..u catch things so easily

Slowly slowly they take speed and started studying more...utkarsh became serious abit and both enjoyed...they used to tease...throw papers and take pen not to study more...

Parth-u r seriously brilliant...y don't u pay attention..u just need some efforts thats all...

Utkarsh-lol look i know u r encouraging me bt look m vei worst at it and infact all teachers know m weak in studies...so nothing will happen...m hppy if i get only passed...m not interested in bringing rank and u talking abt effort then teachers will also not take extra effort to fail me and throw me out from school

Parth- m sure u will bring rank this tym and yes i want a treat too...u just be ready

Utkarsh-thk h...u gonna break the record coz the way u studying its sure ur name will be inked in the toppers list and m gonna give treat to you...

Parth-chl chl kch bhi...dkhnge and now study...

All this was noticed by vibha and she was vei happy...

Exam started...

All students were rushing...nervous..some bitting their nails...some were reading it chcking if they havnt missed any prt

Before that vibha comes and says utkarsh and Parth "all the best"

Utkarsh-thnk u maam and this tym parth gonna top for sure...u see it and says abt their treat deal to vibha

Vibha-utkarsh now u said me..i would be also part of treat or not looking at parth

Parth smiles...

Utkarsh-afcourse maam...

They all gave their exams best...

Utkarsh-kal result out ho rha h...m tnsd

Parth-relax kr...dkhna tera rank ayega

Utkarsh-tu toh record break krga for sure...m happy for u

Parth was tnsd...for him it was not a difficult to bring rank bt he was tnsd that we he able to break the record of Manik ?

Next morning...

Results were pinned on notice boards...only rank holders name was there

Utkarsh looking at the notice board and wat he sees PARTH SAMTHAN BREAKS THE RECORD 98% he was abt to scream bt then his voice was not coming out...yes UTKARSH RAJPUT 3rd rank...he was standing still there...

Parth was standing aside to let others see their result first btw en every1 congratulated him..he was confused..he thought ok...it means i got first rank

Utkarsh screamed and said PARTH u break the Record

Krissane-congratulations utkarsh..u r vei intelligent..

Utkarsh-thnk u bt all thnx to by BRO PARth

Parth-phir se shuru and checks yes he did it...he was happy bt not reflected it...it was more of a ok...

Utkarsh went in mess to have something and bring for PArth

Parth was standing and looking at the ground and thinking "ok i did it..finally she will be happy and wont kp saying to manik that non has break his record" he was more happy for utkarsh..he was hppy that he made him did wat he nvr expected...

Suddenly he hears a voice which brings him to reality...he turns around and sees...

Vibha was looking for Parth to congratulate him bt sees a girl approaching to talk to him she said to herself "now he gonna ruin her mood" bt to her surprise...

Parth-hii Ad ( ankita or anki ) with a smile

Ankita-hey champ !!! congratulations ;)

Parth-thnk u and to u too J

Vibha who was seeing this was in a bit shock "he is talking a girl so sweetly ? he nvr does with ny1 she was curious to know more and she has just started to walk towards him more bt was stopped again...

Parth and ankita hugged and yes it was a vei warm hug and said congratulations to you too u topped in class...

they were whispering in eachothers ears.

This made vibha jeals..how can he do this ? he didn't hug me...he hugged her...how dare he...it was enough for vibha to see..she went towards them and said "ahem ahem"

Parth-vibha maam aap J

Ankita-gm maam

Vibha giving a not so happy look bt says to her "gm"

Vibha-u both shud be in ur classroom right ? so go to ur classrooms

They both were abt to go just then vibha drop her books and folder...

Ankita-she understood that vibha wanted to talk to parth alone and she was making it difficult so chose to leave fast...

Ankita was leaving and she was abt to fall coz she got a spat bt just then he was catched by strong arms..her eyes were closed coz scared to falling bt wen she opened her eyes she sees parth had catched her from falling and get hurt more..

This scenario was observed by vibha and she was hell angry with jealsy that he could have said her to check..it wasn't necessary to hold her so tight...he could have made her stand..he nvr scolded me in such a manner...he nvr holded me so lightly...he alwz holded me tightly sumtymz it gave me pain too huh

Parth started scolding ad-cant u walk properly ? so careless right ? ur habbit wont go...how many tymz i have to tell u that takecare of urself bt no u wont listen...see if nythng would have happen to you then ? he took her to medical room without giving a look at vibha and pick the book...

Just then utkarsh sees it and he picks up the book and folder for vibha and says-look maam finally our Parth has started to talk to a girl..isnt it maam so good thing...

Vibha-giving a not so hppy and say yaa bt he shud be aware of it with whom he is getting close..

Utkarsh-yaa maam...u know her...oh so Parth hasn't said u nythng abt her..she is Ad J

They both are vei close frnds...parth shares alot of things with her which he nvr shares with me maam...they look cute..she is really cute..jovial..Parth is happy around her..he really mean her alot.. giving her the book and folder.

This was enough for vibha to fume with anger...infact missed feelings with anger and jeslsy...

Parth took ankita in medi room and said to chck wther she was f9 or not...

Ankita-m f9..u r being tnsd too much

Vibha enters medi room and says parth m here u shud go to ur dorm ?

So in such a way day went...

It was night parth was looking for vibha coz he couldn't talk to her...he went to lib bt she wasn't there.He saw her sitting under the tree looking at the sky.

Parth comes and says vibha 😃

Vibha-so u got tym for me ?

Parth- i was looking for you whole day...u weren't there nywhere
vibha-i came parth to congratulate u bt u were busy with ur frnz and vei good frnz...

Parth-ok m sorry..i know u came bt i was busy bt now can we talk..

Vibha-m feeling sleepy m going..u bttr too go to ur dorm

Parth-so wont u congratulate me ?

Vibha was leaving and turned around saw Parth hugged her said-ok m sorry i ignored my best frnd today who came to congratulate me 😳

Vibha melted and said to herself i was thinking wrong...he hugged me...congratulations u break the record 🤗 they both didnt wanted to break the hug...both were feeling happy and stars were smiling at them.he whispered in her ears "manik is best or me " ?

vibha-so u heard my phn convo parth...how mean...i didnt expected this from u😉

parth-yaa i heard it bt now say who is best ? if i havnt heard it then i wouldnt have come to know abt record😉 making her embarass...

vibha- both 😉

they both broke the hug...

Parth-so u r happy😳

Vibha-afcourse i am

They had an eyelock,smiled and left from there...

Vibha who was burning with fire,jealsy was faded away bt was it really away or she got convinced by Parth's hug to her.

precap-entry of a new teacher...parth seems a bit weird abt new teacher😛

ok...i know its not that long coz i write alwz long one so this one is small one...hope u like it and yes sorry for late update😳

Edited by anki01 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally an update..
I knew Parth is gonna top 98% haww😲 Bravo👏
So coming to the start , uttu scared of exams and says maths aur hindi to mere palle nahi padte lol😆
Vibha and uttu's bond i admire alot in ur ff😉
Uttu saying to Vibha that Aap mujhe miss karogi na ma'am?? haha so cute!!😃
Parth ke dimaag mein toh din-raat record hi ghum raha tha😆
vibha asked uttu n parth to group study nice!😊
after constant efforts from parth uttu got up lazy bum😆
Utkarsh came third OMG Am I dreaming??
Parth broke record but was more happy that utkarsh came third so cute bro😳 and utkarsh also more happy coz parth broke record and giving all the credit of his rank to his bro aww what a bond!!👏
Next up OMG I want more jealous vibha WOW that was so cute..Is the girl you?? Lol😆
Vibha feeling neglected and ignored by parth and was abt to burst out when he held her from falling rofl😛
Liked vibharth talk at the end when he hugged vibha and she congratulated him 😳 the hug made her realize parth is only hers aww!!
Waiting for next.New teacher😲 Is he a guy or gal?? will he make parth jealous?? Waitinnggg give next one a bit sooner!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

finally an update..

I knew Parth is gonna top 98% haww😲 Bravo👏
So coming to the start , uttu scared of exams and says maths aur hindi to mere palle nahi padte lol😆
Vibha and uttu's bond i admire alot in ur ff😉
Uttu saying to Vibha that Aap mujhe miss karogi na ma'am?? haha so cute!!😃
Parth ke dimaag mein toh din-raat record hi ghum raha tha😆
vibha asked uttu n parth to group study nice!😊
after constant efforts from parth uttu got up lazy bum😆
Utkarsh came third OMG Am I dreaming??
Parth broke record but was more happy that utkarsh came third so cute bro😳 and utkarsh also more happy coz parth broke record and giving all the credit of his rank to his bro aww what a bond!!👏
Next up OMG I want more jealous vibha WOW that was so cute..Is the girl you?? Lol😆
Vibha feeling neglected and ignored by parth and was abt to burst out when he held her from falling rofl😛
Liked vibharth talk at the end when he hugged vibha and she congratulated him 😳 the hug made her realize parth is only hers aww!!
Waiting for next.New teacher😲 Is he a guy or gal?? will he make parth jealous?? Waitinnggg give next one a bit sooner!

a big thnk u dear...thnk u so much for ur reviews..it means alot to me..m highly motivated..yaa Uttu got 3rd 😆 uttu parth bromance and trio scene is alwz cgerished dear...m glad u luvd it...ur comment makes me hppy that readers won't throw chappals to me...thnx to u dear...
Yaa u guessed it right that girl is me lol
New teacher is a surprise...letz see who it will be male or female😉
I luvd ur comment babes...yup dear next part will be asap soon..🤗

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