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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shiona12

WOW...THIS IS LITERALLY A MASTERPIECE... 👏👏
I really like your writing style dear..😃.seriously one of the best fan fictions i have ever read...👏
the way you described Sids's inner turmoil is AH-MEZ-ING...afterall he is not a heart-less monster..😃
KUDOS to u ... keep these awesome stories coming buddy...officially became ur fan 😆😛
P.S- This is my first post in the WH forum...really like the show and the concept..😳


Thank you, shiona! 😳
Yup, Sid ain't a heart-less monster.. At first, he seemed all shallow, playboy-ish, even selfish (the night call incident). He still is, for me, although, I hope that his character develops more and not stay this way.
School's last 2 years changes people. And this batch of WH have a long way to go.

Oh damn! I am glad that I made you comment then! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anulovessarun

wow that was so amazing👏👏👏

the emotions were beautifully expressed
do continue to write😊


Thanks, Anu! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoonyLuna

Annie this is really good.👏While watching the kissing scene I was worried about Krissan.She really loves Sid.Guys should stop saying "I love you"s like "Lol"s..It is wrong to play around with someone's feelings.Good thing that they showed that Sid was feeling guilty.I would want a scene like your OS to happen on the show.😊


Hey Luna! 😆
Thanks! 😳 Exactly, she indirectly voiced out her fears, when Sid was flirting with her and asking for a kiss in the party.
I was surprised when they showed us what he was thinking, and it showed that he did care for Krissan. But just not enough to still stop the kiss from happening. 😒 I really hope Sid's conscience becomes stronger, enough for him to think through everything he does. It's nice to be impulsive, sometimes a good thing, but not always. He's gonna leave destruction behind.

Aww... thank you! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: archisha06

Amazing 👏

Simply AMAZING 😃

Loved it ❤️



Thank you! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: arsha_simran

Ohh my gosh
This is Woowww!!
Simply wow!! I loved it!!
I really would love to noe how things will happen!!!


Thanks, Simran! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this was a terrific read! I literally pictured everything at I read along, that's how good it was 👏
can't wait to read more of your work 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was amazing <3 Please write something on SidYa also na xD
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW👏
It was amazing the way u described Sid's feeling was awesome.I was literally able to visualize each and every.
I became your fan😳 Can u plzz write more on SidYali?? I would love to read that😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You are such an awesome writer...
You are able to make me visualize everything..
Keep up the good work :)
-Prerna
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow really awesome well written 👏 plz do continue to write more 👍🏼

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