GOTD# 6 *Sher-o-Shayeri*

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: rani7131
I also want to write one badly but can't think of any. ..and my shayri will worst that Raman's lol 🤣.

Feel free to post...😃

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Preeti

@rani7131

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Here is one from me. ..

Toh bhai aarz kiya hai.

Ek hasrat thi ki unke dil meh panah milegi.

Ki Ek hasrat thi ki unke dil meh panah milegi

Kya patha tha unse mohobat ki sajah meligi .

Na apno ne samjha na gayar ne janah.

Na apno ne samjha na gayar ne janah

Kya patha tha ki tere pyaar me mujhe bewafa melegi

~Preet

Edited by rani7131 - 8 years ago

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Preeti

@rani7131

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

I took a little help from Google about shayri and then used my own brain and came up with this. I hope it's not too bad🤣.

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: rani7131
Here is one from me. ..

Toh bhai aarz kiya hai.

Ek hasrat thi ki unke dil meh panah milegi.
Ki Ek hasrat thi ki unke dil meh panah milegi
Kya patha tha unse mohobat ki sajah meligi .
Na apno ne samjha na gayar ne janah.
Na apno ne samjha na gayar ne janah
Kya patha tha ki tere pyaar me mujhe bewafa melegi

~Preet

woww.👏...emotional lines...😭