wow! That is all I have to say!! Wow. Actually no I would like to say more!
1st I read Aisha and I was like "omg what a great scene!" Then I read mesmerized...I was like "this is even better!!!!" Then I read Aisha again and I was soooo happy because the scene was just sooo wonderful!! Then I read mesmerized and I was too shocked because it was too amazing! Ok the process continued!!! Both of you guys are super duper awesome!!!!! Then came Bibbo and a5abeegirl389 you guys were totally mindblowing! Thank you sharona!! My turn! I will take of from the wedding.
Raj comes in their room which is decorated beautifully. He looks around to see Tanya standing by the window. He walks over to Tanya.
R: Tanya ...
Tanya doesn't respond
R: Tanya...
Again she doesn't bother to turn
Raj places his hand on her shoulder. And Tanya turns. She is crying.
R: Tanya..ro kyun rahi ho? [trying to wipe her tears off]
T: Sab mere waje se hua hai [almost in a whispery voice]
R: Tanya...[wiping her tears of and pulling her closer to hug her] Tanya shhh
T: No Raj...[having a hard time talking because of her crying] Yeh sab..sab kuch sirf aur sirf meri waje se hua hai. Di kitni dukhi hai. Aap kitne dukhi ho.
R: Tanya main dukhi nahi hoon.
T: Jhoot maat boliye. Aap Trishna di se bohot pyar karte hai.
R: Haan lekin Rajdeep usse mujhse bhi zyada pyar karega. Now smile.
Tanya continues crying.
R: Tanya! Sab kuch thik ho jayega. I promise! [hugs her tightly]
After a while Tanya stops sobbing. Then she slowly pulls away.
R: dekho now I am all wet from your tears. I will go change.
He goes to the bathroom.
When he returns he sees Tanya is having a hard time taking her necklace off, and she is getting frustrated.
R: Main madad kar deta hoon..[coming closer]
T: Nahi main kar sakti hoon.
R: It's ok baba!
Raj tries to take the necklace of but has some difficulty as it's stuck.
R: Pata nahi ladkiyan itni complicated cheez pehenti kyun hai
T: [almost smiles and then bites it back.]
This is the 1st time she has smiled in days.
Raj looks in the mirror straight at Tanya catching her off guard.
R: Muskurana itni bhi buri cheez nahi hai Tanya. Tum rote huye bohot acchi lagti ho par jab tum muskurate bohut khubsoorat lagti ho.
Tanya looks away.
Raj goes back to concentrationg on the necklace and finally manages to take it off. He sets it aside.
R: Ok done! Now tum jaa kar change karlo.
Tanya nodd and goes to change.
When she comes out she finds the lights dimmed really low and Raj sleeping on the couch.
Tanya lets out a soft sigh. A feeling of relief washes over her. And she hopes Raj is right. And prays everything will be all right!
I know that wasn't really romantic but I hope you guys liked it! Like Bibbo if I had the power I would super glue them together too!!! Aaaah I am like counting second to see soemthing between them. I love every second thay are together on screen!!!
-Fatima-😆
Edited by Perfangel5655 - 17 years ago