*~*~*Raj & Tanya Romantic Scenes*~*~* - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadaf_09

here is mine.,,,

tanya is abt to go and take shower, but she left her towel on the sofa.... after that raj come from outside and he doesnt know that tanya forgot her towel on sofa, tanya calls her sister mansha but instead of her raj come and sees her ccalling her sister to get her the towel, but raj didnt give her the towel she comes out wearing raj's shirt and raj starts laughing and tanya feels shy and raj start grapping her and then end up on their bed and kissing each others

Sizzling part sweety 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
candyluver thx 4 dis wonderful thread.
rest 2 all d updaters of taaj romantic scene.
it was fabulous yara. muahaha. luved it...
man i m fallin 4 taaj ryt nw onoy. pata nahi. if i really csum of deri luvey-dovey scene in d screen. wht will hppen. hehehe
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
very sweet scenes keep it up!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omgshh Candylover, MARRY ME! hahah.. that's my way of saying: you're WAYYYY too awesome for creating this space! lol.. I never even looked at here before. [yes, I'm officially a douchbag!] let me read all of the posts now, and then create my own "scene"

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Posted: 17 years ago
#25

kk I made some little notes while I read each scene! here are my thoughts:

aisha1 – one word: AMAZING! your lil' scene put a HUGGGEEEE grin on my face!

and wow your second scene. PLEASE LET THAT REALLY HAPPEN GOD! ahhHH. I'm in love. haha.

mesmerized - awww.. I actually hope that happens soon. Tanya already does some housework. your scene's very real! (I'll be waiting for that "soft kiss" *wink wink*) your second one was cute too.. I was imagining that as something which happened (I'm in need of some TAAJ scenes.. and since we're deprived of such scenes, I have to make-believe) the fact that Tanya mentions Trish just adds originality to your scene.! =) LOVEEE IT

SADAF! I have an aunt who usually says (to my dislike) tumhare mu mein ghee shakar! and now I want to say that to you!!!

I HOPE THAT HAPPENS.! *blissful sigh

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Posted: 17 years ago
#26

I'm going to give this a try. =) *crosses finger*

Yuvi's looking all over the Kholi house for Tanya as he hasn't seen his wifey since the morning [if I had my way, I'd superglue the two together.! =)]After seeing the other Kholi sisters consoling Trish, he walks into his room to find Tanya crying in the dark. He noiselessly lights a candle on the far end of the room. Next, he fists his hands together, marches towards Tanya, and unintentionally grabs her rashly. Tanya flinches and bits her lips to avoid yelping in pain

Y: heyy. sorry Tanya. galati se tumhe meine zodh se pakarliya

T: (looks the other way in order to wipe her tears away) koi baath nahi Yuvraj. (she tries to walk away)

Y: (lightly grabs both her hands and prevents her from moving away. he sits opposite her on the bed) baithi raho Tanya. Aur mujhe baatho, tum yahaan andhere mein kya kar rahi thi?

T: (she remains quiet, and the tears start again. she lowers her gaze so Yuvi can't see her)

Y: (uses his right index finger and gently lifts her face, and wipes her tears) kya baath hai Tanya? mujhe nahi baataogi?

T: maine mere kamre mein jaate jaate Sujata Di, Trishna Di aur Mansha ko mere bare mein baath karte suna. Woh sab loag mujse kush nahi hai Yuvraj. maine sabki kushi cheenli. (Her tears start running freely over her cheeks once again) mere paas kahi aur nahi ta jaane ke liye.. isshi liye mein idhar chali aai. (she gets up to leave, and starts walking towards the door) sorry yuvraj. ab ke baadh mein nahi aaongi.

Tanya's almost out the door when Yuvraj walks up to her, and spins her around, and securely locks her between him and the locked door. He places both hands on either side of her, and looks into her eyes

Y: kyun? kya yeh tumhara kamra nahi hai Tanya? (Tanya looks up at him in total shock) Aur waise bhi. Tumhe koi zarurat nahi ke tum unn sab ki baathon se naraaz hogaao. Tum meri paatni ho Tanya. Woh saab shayed bhool gaye, magar mein nahi bhoola. Trishna mera guzra huva kal hai Tanya. Aur tum mera aaj or aane wala kal. (he lowers his face to hers) got it?

I'll leave the rest to your imagination ladies.! =) let your minds wander.

<3.

Edited by bibbo - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG bibbo!!! I really Really REALLY hope that the creatives use your scene in the serial! SO good!

Here's mine:

Tanya is in her room cleaning. she is picking up things. Raj walks in, he is very happy. He sees Tanya picking up things, and he decides to make her work harder. As she is cleaning, Raj spreads a mess behind her back.

T: Aree...abhi abhi toh maine isse saf kiya tha...

Tanya goes back to cleaning. Raj keeps making the room dirty...
All of the sudden, Tanya realizes that something is not right. She knows that there is someone else in the room besides her. She gets scared. and starts backing into a corner.

T: Kaun hai kamre mein? Dekho, mere paas mat aana...

She backs up into a wall and is stopped dead in her tracks. She hears the window close. This makes Tanya's heart race even more. She sees a shadow of a man, tall, fit, walking towards her. She goes into a state of hysteria.

T: Nahin...nahin...nahin...

Poor girl, she falls down to the ground. Raj realizes that his joke has really scared Tanya. He goes to Tanya and tries to console her.

R; Tanya, kuch nahin hua. Tanya, tumhe kuch nahin hua. Mein hoon. Mein hoon, Raj, tumhara Raj.

Tanya is just shaking her head no. She begins to cry. Raj put his arms around Tanya, but she just closes her body. Raj shakes her.

R: TANYA!!!! Mein hoon! TANYA!!! Mein hoon, tumhara Raj! RAJ!!!

Tanya comes back to reality. She puts both her hands on Raj's face.

T: Raj!...Raj!!...RAJ!!!!!!

In her over excitement, she hugs Raj tightly. He is a little stunned at what just happend. She feels a little electric current go through his body and he hugs Tanya as well. Tanya just cries in his arms.
After a while, Tanya realizes that she is hugging Raj. She lets go. Raj looks at her face and wipes her tears.

R: Mein hoon na tumhare saath. Mere hote hue, mein tumhe kuch nahin hone dunga.

Tanya sniffles and Raj gives her a short hug and a kiss (peck) on head. Tanya finds comfort in Raj.

T: Raj...thanks.

He helps her to the bed. Raj is about to leave, but Tanya stops him.

T; Raj! Kahin jaa rahe ho kiya?
R; Haan, woh mein...
T: Zaroori kaam hai?
R: Nahin, asi koi baat nahin...woh mein to bus woh
T; Raj, mein janti hoon ke mera haque nahin hai, lekin, please kiya tum mere saath thori der baeth sak the ho?...Please.
R: Haan, haan, kyun nahin.

Tanya and Raj just sit there on the bed, saying absolutely nothing. After 5 minutes or so, Tanya falls asleep. Raj tucks her in. There is a string of hair on Tanya's face, as he moves the hair out of her face, he sees Tanya, beautiful, vulnerable, fun, loving.
He realizes that in such a limited amount of time, she has gone through a lot. He vows to keep Tanya happy. Although he may not love her, and vice versa, she will be the most precious thing in his life from now on.

He kisses her on the forehead and begins getting ready for bed.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
"tumhara Raj" ehh. Where can i get a peice of that? hahah i kidd. and THANKSSS a5abeegirl389! your scene is awesome as welllll!!! I WISH WE COULD SUBMIT SOME SCENES TO THE CREATIVES AND THEY'D USE 'EMMMM!! i'd go crazy making scenes. hehe.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow great scenes everyone...loved reading them 👏👏👏 you guys are very talented..hope all these scenes really do happen later 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow! That is all I have to say!! Wow. Actually no I would like to say more!

1st I read Aisha and I was like "omg what a great scene!" Then I read mesmerized...I was like "this is even better!!!!" Then I read Aisha again and I was soooo happy because the scene was just sooo wonderful!! Then I read mesmerized and I was too shocked because it was too amazing! Ok the process continued!!! Both of you guys are super duper awesome!!!!! Then came Bibbo and a5abeegirl389 you guys were totally mindblowing! Thank you sharona!!

My turn! I will take of from the wedding.

Raj comes in their room which is decorated beautifully. He looks around to see Tanya standing by the window. He walks over to Tanya.

R: Tanya ...

Tanya doesn't respond

R: Tanya...

Again she doesn't bother to turn

Raj places his hand on her shoulder. And Tanya turns. She is crying.

R: Tanya..ro kyun rahi ho? [trying to wipe her tears off]

T: Sab mere waje se hua hai [almost in a whispery voice]

R: Tanya...[wiping her tears of and pulling her closer to hug her] Tanya shhh

T: No Raj...[having a hard time talking because of her crying] Yeh sab..sab kuch sirf aur sirf meri waje se hua hai. Di kitni dukhi hai. Aap kitne dukhi ho.

R: Tanya main dukhi nahi hoon.

T: Jhoot maat boliye. Aap Trishna di se bohot pyar karte hai.

R: Haan lekin Rajdeep usse mujhse bhi zyada pyar karega. Now smile.

Tanya continues crying.

R: Tanya! Sab kuch thik ho jayega. I promise! [hugs her tightly]

After a while Tanya stops sobbing. Then she slowly pulls away.

R: dekho now I am all wet from your tears. I will go change.

He goes to the bathroom.

When he returns he sees Tanya is having a hard time taking her necklace off, and she is getting frustrated.

R: Main madad kar deta hoon..[coming closer]

T: Nahi main kar sakti hoon.

R: It's ok baba!

Raj tries to take the necklace of but has some difficulty as it's stuck.

R: Pata nahi ladkiyan itni complicated cheez pehenti kyun hai

T: [almost smiles and then bites it back.]

This is the 1st time she has smiled in days.

Raj looks in the mirror straight at Tanya catching her off guard.
R: Muskurana itni bhi buri cheez nahi hai Tanya. Tum rote huye bohot acchi lagti ho par jab tum muskurate bohut khubsoorat lagti ho.
Tanya looks away.
Raj goes back to concentrationg on the necklace and finally manages to take it off. He sets it aside.
R: Ok done! Now tum jaa kar change karlo.

Tanya nodd and goes to change.

When she comes out she finds the lights dimmed really low and Raj sleeping on the couch.

Tanya lets out a soft sigh. A feeling of relief washes over her. And she hopes Raj is right. And prays everything will be all right!
I know that wasn't really romantic but I hope you guys liked it! Like Bibbo if I had the power I would super glue them together too!!! Aaaah I am like counting second to see soemthing between them. I love every second thay are together on screen!!!

-Fatima-😆

Edited by Perfangel5655 - 17 years ago

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