My Veeya dream... part 8 updated!

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Hello dear Friends😳

OK this is a dream I had about Veeya😍...it lasted the whole night so its incredibly long😆...I promised my dear friend Prithika🤗 i would write it up...and I dedicate this post to her...and also to my love for Veeya❤️.

I sincerely request if you are not a Veeya lover that you please dont post anything bashing Tapu or Veeya in this post and please no rudeness.😊


This is part 1:

It had been two months since Veer had brought Tapasya back home, yet Veer found himself unable to accept her. He knew that this distance in their relationship was starting to show in the house and he had no idea how to put an end to it. He also knew that his refusal to accept her was making Tapasya bitter and more frustrated and as a result he knew that even without reason she was becoming more and more angry at Ichha. He was not sure what to do. He didn't feel right being in such a relationship where neither he nor Tapasya were happy, he had condemned her to this when he made the decision to bring her back yet he could not send her back. He had given his promise to fulfil the relationship to her father. He could feel pity for Tapasya yet could not forget the past. He was feeling extremely lost. he had no idea what to do.

He was walking along the road the next day feeling lost when he heard a set of bells. He realised he had unknowingly arrived at a mandir. Veer looked up. He had been less inclined towards God ever since his marriage fiasco yet had never shown it to his family, who were extremely pious. His Mai had told him when he was younger that whenever a difficulty arose, Kanhaji would give the answer. He also knew his Chanda didi was a devout Kanha bhakt. Veer removed his shoes and walked up the mandir stairs. He was the only one there. He stopped in front of Krishna's idol, rang the bell and said "meri madat karo Kanhaji. Hum badi uljhan mein hai. Hum kya kare!? At that moment a priestly man came up to him and said "kya hua beta. Tum bahot pareshan lag rahe ho" kya pareshani hai. Aao beto humare paas. Veer said to him that he has a big problem and that he desperately needed the right solution. But he had not prayed to Kanhaji for a long time. Would Kanhaji listen to him? The priestly man answered "bhagwan sab ki pareshani sunte hai. Ab pooch karke to dekho. Ab ghar jao aur meri baat ka paalan karo." He told Veer to do some things then sit in the mandir of his house and think of Kanhaji.

Veer was not sure if he believed what he heard yet he tried it anyway. He arrived home and realised that nobody was home. Vansh and Ichha had gone out and Tapasya had gone to her parent's house. Just this time, he was glad he was alone. He sat and sang the following bhajan (the one from Swarg...the Radha Krishna one...my favourite😳) He sat there for a long time with his eyes closed...posing the question in his mind...."Aakhir hum kya kare Kanhaji? Hum yeh dukh nahi seh sakte aur hume yeh dukh Tapasya ko bhi dena accha nahi lagta! Usne humare saath jo bhi kiya ho lekin hum usse is ghar mein wapis le aaye...lekin hum usse khush nahi rakh par rahe hai. Aur usse dukh dekar mere parivaar ko bohot dukh hota hai! Yeh sab kya hai Kanhaji! Kya hua yeh sab! Kyun hua! Mujhe jawab dijiye Kanhaji............Veer kept repeating these words in his head. Then suddenly...



Part 2:

"Veer!" His eyes jerked open. There in front of him was an apparition of Kanhaji. He could not believe his eyes. Kanhaji? Kanhaji said "Veer tum aisa kyun sochte ho ki Tapasya ke saath rehker tujhe zindagi bhar ka dukh milega? Hum jaante hai ki usne kya kiya hai. Lekin Veer, tum iske bachpan ke bare mein kuch nahi jaante. Tapasya aaj jo kuch bhi hai, waqt aur haalaat ne usse banaya hai. Tapasya ek bohot achhi ladki thi bachpan mein. Hasi khel....maa papa ka pyar....sab behadd milta tha usse. Jogi thakur ke gunn the isme. Sirf ek cheez thi jiski kami Tapasya ko bohot chuubti thi...ek saathi. Woh bohot akeli pargai thi. Phir Ichha aur iski maa aai sab ki zindagi mein aur Tapasya bohot khush hogai kyunki Ichha ke roop mein ek dost mil gayi. Tapasya Ichha se bohot pyar karti thi....sadak pe iske saath phool bhejne mein madat karti thi...donno bohot khush thi. Lekin Tapasya ki naani ko yeh baat achhi nahi lagi. Iske mann mein zeher bharne lagi aur dheere dheere Tapasya Ichha se jalne lagi. Is baat woh bardasht nahi kar sakti thi ki Ichha ne iske maa aur papa ka aadha pyar chheen liya tha. Yeh baat itni aage nikal gayi k eek din school ke excursion pe Tapasya ne Ichha ko jungle mein chor diya, oomeed karke ki woh kabhi wapis nahi aayegi. Jab Jogi ko yeh baat pata chali to usne Tapasya ko hostel bhej diya...aur usse ehsaas nahi hua ki yeh ek badi bhool thi. Tapasya hostel mein bohot bimar par gayi thi aur Jogi kuch hafte ke baad isse wapas ghar laye. Tapasya aaj tak Ichha ko iske hostel jaane ki zimedaar maanti hai. Uss waqt se uski nani uske dimaag mein itni zeher bharte rahe ki aaj bhi Tapasya maanti hai ki iske maa papa Ichha se zyaada pyar karte hai aur Ichha ne uska hisse ka pyar chheena hai. Woh yeh nahi samjh paati ki sab isse zyaada Ichha ko kyun pyar karte hai. Ichha ki khushi cheenna uska maksat ban gaya hai. Aaj bhi uski naani isse bharhaava deti hai. Tapasya ke mann mein ek bohot badi ghalat fehmi hai. Ichha ka pyar woh kabhi samajh hi nahi paai. Sach to yeh ki aaj bhi Tapasya ko yeh pata nahi hai ki sacha pyar kya hota hai. Nani ko dost samajh kar nani ke ssaye mein pali badi. Isiliye woh nani ki tara bangayi. Jogi aur Divya ko yeh baat ka kabhi ehsaas hi nahi hua ki Tapasya ke mann mein kya chal raha tha. Samajh paate aur samhja paate to shaayad nahi hua hota yeh sab kuch.

Veer said: "lekin jo Tapasya ne kiya koi kaise kar sakta hai! Woh itni girr chuki hai mein yeh bhi nahi samjh pata ki koi aisa kaise kar sakta hai! Usne apne maa papa ko bhi sharminda kiya hai! Sab se jhoot bola hai! Ichha ko sab ki nazron mein giradiya.

Kanhaji said: Veer beta, iss waqt Tapasya ko yeh pata bhi nahin ki kya sahi aur kya ghalat hai. Woh iski nafrat mein itni uljhi hai ki kuch dekh hi nahi paati! Veer, hum jaante hai Tapasya ko. Iske nafrat nahin, isme jhaak kar dekhiye...woh bohot naram hai...bohot sensitive. Woh pighal sakti hai.....woh apne parivaar se bohot pyar karti hai....lekin unki nafrat mein uska dukh isse nazar hi nahi aaya...Sacha Pyar kya hota hai...Tapasya ko dikhao Veer....ab sirf tum ho jo uski nafrat hata sakte hai. Usse batao ki jeena kya hota hai...insaaniyat kya hoti hai. Yeh ab sirf tumhara kaam hai aur hum tumhe beshak keh sakte hai ki bohot jald uska nafrat Ichha ke liye khatam jo jayega....woh raasta bhatak gayi hai....hum tumhe yeh kaam sopte hai....usse sahi raasta dikhao...usse sahi raaste pe liyao aur hum vaada dete hai ki ek baar iski nafrat mitjaye to tumhe sirf chehre se khoobsoorat Tapasya nahi dikhegi...lekin mann aur aatma se sundar Tapasya dikhjayegi. Woh apne pichle karam dekhegi to usse khud bohot pastava hoga aur woh khud prayaschit karegi. Phir tumhe khud Tapasya ki izat karoge aur iske saath ek kushal zindagi jee paoge. Khushi aasaani se nahi milti Veer. Sabko pariksha se guzarna pardta hai. Ab tumhari pratiksha yeh hai ki tum apni patni ko sahi raaste pe liyao aur Tapasya ki pratiksha yeh hai ki woh dus saal ka zeher aur dus saal ki nafrat dimaag se nikal paayegi ya nahin. Ab hum chalte hai Veer. Meri baat yaad rakhna...aur Tapasya ke saath achhe se pesh aao...isko pyar se apne ghalti ka ehsaas dilado!

Veer says: Mujhe sahi raasta batane ke liye bohot bohot shukriya Kanhaji. Aap ne jaisa kaha waise hum karenge.

Part 3:😊

Veer comes back in the house, his mind full of thoughts. Tapasya enters the house, quickly putting up her pallu. Veer looks at her with a smile on his face. Tapasya is stunned. Veer comes upto her and says "so did you have fun at ur maayka?" Tapasya still surprised. She says "ji" then she says "khana laga du?"Veer smiles again and says theek hai.

Then my dream skips forward one week. Btw, Veer has moved a couch into their room and sleeps on that instead of outside now.

Tapasya is sitting on the dressing table in Veeya's room getting ready for a family friend function they are going to. She is deep in thought. She had noticed a change in Veer that week. He was no longer being rude to her and was talking to her nicely and smiling. She was wondering how this had happened. She had on a yellow/gold richly beaded saree and yellow beaded gold heavy jewellery. Her hair was tied up in an elegant bun. She was still deep in thought when Veer entered the room and looked at her. He smiled at her and Tapasya, realising he was there, sprang up instantly. Veer came up to her. She noticed he was hiding something behind his back. Her voice stuttered as she asked what he was hiding. He slowly brought his hands around. In them he held two of the most beautiful golden kangans she had ever seen. She asked Veer who they were for..."tumhare liye" he replied. Although extremely stunned, she wore them. She really wanted to ask Veer why he was being so nice to her all of a sudden but she didn't get a chance. She, Ichha, Vansh and Veer arrived at the party. The other three were very happy but Tapu, although being happy, was extremely confused. Today everyone complimented her new kangans. For the first time ever she noticed that Veer was standing next to her, greeting everyone with her, all this with a smile on his face. She did not understand it at all. Was he finally accepting her? Yet she did not know. The dance floor had lit up. She remembered her last time at one of these parties around two weeks previously. Veer had had to forcibly dance with her on the strenuous requests of the hosts. He had looked stony the whole time. The first song played was one of tapu's favourites "Dupatta Tera" and to her utter astonishment veer asked her for the dance she accepted and later vansh and ichha joined them .for the first time tapu found that she was not pained by Ichha's smile.😃

The song ended and they headed home. For the first time that night Tapasya slept well. She felt a certain light feeling inside her that she had never experienced before..one she couldn't explain...like a great burden had been lifted off her.😊


Part 4:

Three days later, Tapasya was making lunch in the kitchen when Veer came in and smiled again. He says "Tapasya hum aaj shopping pe jaana chahte hai...kya tum aana chahti ho mere saath? Agar chaho to baad me aapki favourite restaurant mein dinner bhi karenge. He keeps smiling (smile is the secret to success😉). Tapu agrees. An hour later they are walking outside tapu's favourite shopping mall...a big one like Atria in Mumbai😊. We notice some goons on the side of the road casting a bad eye around on all the people. Suddenly their nazar falls on tapu😡 who is looking really very nice indeed...less make up also but unfortunately wearing alot of expensive looking jewellery, which also catches the goons attention...beauty plus riches? Ur dead if a goon sees u😆. They get up and follow Veeya into the mall.

Tapu goes around, excitedly looking at the big shops with the big names...she loved expensive shops with their designer items...she stops and looks longingly at a dress by her favourite designer Mohit Kashyap. She looks at the price tag...23,000 rupees...she looks down sadly...she does not have so much money. She moves along and Veer says "hum abhi aate hai"....tapu moves wonderingly onto the next shop as Veer goes to the men's shops a little further down................suddenly the goons come in front of tapu, stop and stand leering at her.....there are 5 of them.....there isn't anyone else in that small area of the mall. They are looking at her up and down🤬 and suddenly one of the goons grabs her long necklace. Tapu: Yeh kya batemeezi hai! Choriye hume! Tum jaante nahi ki main kyon hu! Thakurain hai hum...himmat kaisi hui mujhe haath lagane ki...choriye hume!!! ...well tapu is not the strongest of characters and she never knew that attitude never works with goons who dont get to beabroo thakurains everyday ....she starts screaming for Veer as the goons snatch at her jewellery and her bag and start to assault her...they force her down as she still is screaming for Veer...tapu is grievously getting injured and then one of the goons raises a knife on her when suddenly there appears Veer and grabs the hand of the goon whose bringing the knife down...and says in this extremely angry and hissy shaking with anger voice with his hottie outrage look."HIMMAT KAISE HUI MERI PATNI KI TARAF AANKH UTHAKE BHI DEKHNA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" and he starts fighting with them in a very macho man style with alot of herogiri. Well these words have a profound effect on tapu and she starts getting all these blurry flashbacks before the police arrive and take the unconscious goons away. Tapu is in deep shock and she faints. Veer picks her up and rides her home and carries her up to the room. All the other Bundelas come in with Mai and Ichha hysterical as Tapu is very badly hurt and has injuries, bruises and cuts all over her. Vansh quickly calls the doctor. The doctor arrives and checks on Tapu...she is still unconscious. He says that she is very badly hurt and is in deep shock...she needs special care and attention. Her mental health may deteriorate for a few days. She has escaped severe injury and rape and may stay in shock for a few days. She will regain consciousness soon.


Part 5

Ok now the next part of the dream is on the song "Haan Tu Hai"from Jannat, one of my all time favourite songs and even though it's a male's voice it's being sung from tapu's POV...and as the song goes is a series of events spanning over about a month and a half.

The starting of the song...just the instrumental:

In this bit tapu is having flashbacks nightmares in her sleep of the attack and then recalling how veer came and saved her...then she remembers them forcing her down. She jerks awake suddenly and screams. In this way she regains consciousness. She is sweating very badly and looking terrified and is breathing very heavily, chest heaving.

Jo kwaabo khayaloon mein socha nahin tha
Tu ne mujhe itna pyaar diya
Mein jab bhi jahan bhi kadi dhoop mein tha
Teri zulf ne mujh pe saya kiya

It is late night.... she is still screaming "choriye hume" she then realises that Veer is sitting next to her trying to calm and control her... ...she starts crying , terrified and frighteningly hugs Veer looking around her...she looks a little bit mad..eyes wide and disturbed and she is clinging onto veer as though the attacker is still there... she then realises she is in a lot of pain...the wounds are still fresh...they have started bleeding again... veer notices this.

Haann'
Jo kwaabo khayaloon mein socha nahin tha
Tu ne mujhe itna pyaar diya
Mein jab bhi jahan bhi kadi dhoop mein tha
Teri zulf ne mujh pe saya kiya

Veer reaches for the haldi paste and balm prescribed by the doctor and starts to apply it on her arms. Tapu is still crying in pain yet she is looking at Veer with an unreadable expression unlike her normal mean looks. Is it oncoming respect? ........surprise? or still in state of shock so cannot comprehend...

(Haan tu hai haan tu hai
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irradon mein tu hai) ''2
Irradon mein tu hai

Ichha comes into the room with a glass of haldi milk and a bowl of soup. Veer gets up and takes it from her and says Thanks Bhabhi and then he shuts the door and says chalo Tapasya tum yeh soup our dud peelo phir baad mein dawaa leni hai naa. Her hand is still hurting alot...so he feeds her slowly...Tapasya looks faint and numb

Yehhh'we could fall in love
I say' I could fall in love
Yehhh'we could fall in love
And i say' I could fall in love with you

Tapasya finally speaks and tells Veer "kyun bachaya hume" and then Veer says I didn't save you Kanhaji did...then he talks some more about bhagvan and how great he is...Tapasya is taking in all his words.

Koi bhi aaisa lamha nahin hai
Jisme mere tu hota nahin hai
Mein so bhi jaao raathon mein lakin
Tu hai ki mujhmein sotha nahin hai
Tu hai ki mujhmein sotha nahin hai

Tapasya is taken by Veer (who is supporting her) to the mandir at their house. There she stares at the idols for a few minutes. Veer has already folded his hands and closed his eyes so Tapasya looks at him then faces the front...closes her eyes and folds her hands....all the wounds on her hands are still clearly visible...and she thanks the gods for sending veer to her in the nick of time and why she feels different towards him now...before she wanted to upset him for the way he had hurt her...why was he taking care of her now?

(Haan tu hai haan tu hai
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irradon mein tu hai) ''2
Irradon mein tu hai

Over the next month Veer helps Tapu get cured...she realises her feelings towards Veer have changed and starts to realise her follies towards him. Despite whatever anyone would have thought...this incident has humbled tapu and she also sees Ichha's true love for her as she has taken care of her needs day and night... Every night she gets flashbacks of all that she has done to everyone, starting from the wedding. The guilt washes over her, getting deeper and deeper every day. She becomes silent for a few days. One day she cannot take the guilt anymore and in the middle of the night, crying, runs out of the house and without shoes makes the way to the nearest mandir...crying bitterly and grasping her head she remembers again all that she has done to everyone. Swaying...she gets down on her knees and climbs the mandir steps...there is blood everywhere by the time she reaches the top...and there sobbing she screams at Kanhaji that how could she have been so horrible towards her family and cries and cries and cries and curses herself.

Hai teri innayat tujhse mili hai
Hoonto pe mere hasi jo khili hai
Usse mera chehra chupa bhi na paye
Tujhe paake hasil huye jo khushi hai
Tujhe paake hasil huye jo khushi

Haan tu hai haan tu hai
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irradon mein tu hai


Having fainted in front of Kanhaji from great loss of blood and mental stress, Veer Ichha and Vansh arrive at the steps to find her lying there. They sprinkle water on her and she wakes...and starts crying again and moves away...not facing them she says she needs to confess her crimes because her heart is very heavy. She confesses everything from the time she was seeing Sid..to the wedding....to how she could not bear to see Ichha's happiness over her own....how she wanted to snatch that...how she tried to kill Ichha using Sid and then how she tried everything, once she found out about it, to milao Vansh and Ichha, that she signed the divorce papers only so Veer would believe her innocence and how she changed the letter that Ichha had sent to Vansh before the marriage because she wanted that Ichha also have an unsatisfactory marital life like herself. That zeher that she had in her mind for Ichha...she felt it unravelling as she saw that despite everything, Ichha was still taking so much care of her

Jo kwaabo khayaloon mein socha nahin tha
Tu ne mujhe itna pyaar diya
Mein jab bhi jahan bhi kadi dhoop mein tha
Teri zulf ne mujh pe saya kiya

(Haan tu hai haan tu hai
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu
Irradon mein tu hai) ''2
Irradon mein tu hai

After saying everything she turned back to face them and inexplicably saw all three of them smiling at her. Veer says "I know all this already. You had been talking in your sleep for a few nights now...always saying the same things... forgive me Ichha forgive me Veer please forgive me..........I went to Ichha bhabhi and asked her about all this...she said yes I know about all this already...Seeing her so close to death ... I had forgiven her...Vansh bhaiiya had heard all this also. I knew...I could sense that you were finally changing. In my view anyone who followed the wrong path wants to come on the right path again should be encouraged, loved and honoured for being so brave. I have forgiven you. Now let's go home...both families are there...I had informed everyone before hand...they know everything...when I told them of your repentance a few hours ago they all forgave you.

Overcome with emotion, tapu runs to hug veer and veer hugs her back...vancha smile and head back towards the car...veer leads tapu towards the car. They arrive home.

Part 6:

Vancha and Veeya arrive home to find the Thakur and Bundela families gathered there in the main room...Tapu is afraid to enter and she clutches Veer for support...Veer smiles a reassuring smile and supports her inside...there is standing Jogi Thakur and Divya looking at them...Jogi Thakur looks angry and Tapu looks down in shame...but then both her parents come and hug her and Jogi says " m proud of you beti" and tapu is very happy that everyone has forgiven her...she says sorry to everyone and they all bless her and then Jogi says "waise to jis haalaat mein shaadi hui, hum apni beti ka kanyaddan theek se nahi karpaye...isiliye hum soch rahe the ki jab ab sab kuch theek ho gaya hai to hum chahte hai Veer aur Tapasya ki shaadi dobara se ho...sahi maine mein...iss bar pure dil se hoga. Agar ab sab ko koi aitraaz na ho to.

Mai says "yeh bohot achhi baat kahi aabne Thakur saab...lekkin Tapasya ki haalat theek nahi hai...jaise woh theek hoti hai hum bohot dhoom dhaam se yeh shaadi karenge"...saying this Jogi and family leaves (very emotional) and then Mai says "Veer, Tapasya ko kamre mein le jao...aaram ki zarurat hai isse" veer nods and supports tapu up the stairs. For the next two months Veer and Vancha take great care of Tapu, Veer feeds her and gives her medicine, Ichha cleans her and Vansh drops in every evening for a joke session with the others which helps tapu cheer up.

The next week arrives and tapu has finally become better. She is up again now doing all the housework and pooja with Ichha despite Mai's strenuous exclamations that she needs rest. She is happy once again...in the right way this time. Veer is coming to terms with this new Tapasya...one so different and so much better than the last...for the first time he can see what Ichha and Kanhaji had told him...that tapu really was a beautiful soul once her ego and hatred for Ichha had evaporated. She was a true wife now...a true lady...doing all her wifely duties and fulfilling her responsibilities ....every morning the house awoke to the sound of her beautiful voice singing bhajans and as he listened to the devotion echoing out of her voice, Veer knew she had understood the true meaning of love now...she was forever going around cooking, making sure he was comfortable, making sure Vancha and the family were comfortable, cleaning the mandir and as Veer had suggested as part of her recovery to fitness...had started her traditional dance training again...it was her passion and he could see a radiance on her face as she smiled while she danced. She had also developed a liking for devotional books and read them every night as Veer came home from work. Soon, despite everything, Veer realised he no longer remembered the old Tapasya...being so good, pure, divine and holy....the new one had evaporated and extinguished fully the bad memories of the previous one. Soon, he found himself falling truly, madly, deeply and passionately in love with her. Her internal and external beauty radiated throughout the house, making the atmosphere one of beauty and serenity...he started to crave her presence all the time and the image of her truly beautiful smile never left his eyes. Veer himself was back to the way he used to be...happy and joyous, his face had lightened...his smile had returned, he looked years younger and his eyes were bright and alight with happiness. He found he truly loved life now; every moment was beautiful with his wife. Tapasya herself loved her new life and she thanked Kanhaji for giving it to her, thanked him for giving her such a beautiful family, such a great husband and such a sister like Ichha. She thanked him for leading her back onto the right track. As she looked into the mirror now, Tapasya no longer saw the proud, vain and selfish Tapasya Thakur she knew she used to be...now she could see a face with a bright smile, a light heart, one filled with joy and her eyes dancing with radiance... as Mrs Tapasya Veer Singh Bundela...Ichha's tapu and Vansh's little sister, choti bahu of such a nice Bundela family, daughter of Jogi and Divya Thakur. As she looked back, she could not remember ever feeling happier.


Part 7

Jogi Thakur rang up the next week. He said that he was coming in a few hours to bring Tapasya for a few days to her maayka...Veeya's re shaadi would happen in 4 days...and he would do his beti's bidaai with full rituals. Veer became half happy/ half sad to hear this...he didn't want to be away from her for four days...he would miss waking up every morning to the sound of her bhajans...hear her natter on happily while she made the bed...see her face after coming home every night...he didn't know if he could live without it for so long...problem was...as he suddenly realised...he had never admitted his new feelings towards her...if she had to go...he wanted to make sure she knew before she left that he had fallen in love with her. Suddenly he heard Mai saying to Tapu "beta Thakur saab ke aane se pehle hume bahar jaake kuch cheez leni hai... hum sab do ghante mein aajayenge. Vansh aur Ichha tum log bhi chalo humare saath naa...aur veer to office ja rahe hai naa ek meeting ke liye...tapu: koi baat nahin Mai hum theek hai! Tum log jao hum maa papa ki anne ki tayari karte hai...she smiles and heads towards the kitchen. Veer smiles as he gets a sudden idea. He jumps in the car and heads towards the nearest florist shop. There, he buys a red rose and a giant ILU card and writes in it a very beautiful poem about how much he loves her in this beautiful red glitter ink pen. He quickly heads back home to see that Tapu is still in the kitchen making laddoos. He steels into the next room and quietly places the card and rose on the table in the middle of the room...then he steels across the room and purposely knocks down a chair...to make tapu come rushing in...He then picks up the chair and hides. Tapu comes rushing in and looks around for the source of the noise...she thinks she is alone at home at the time...she then notices the table in the middle which is usually kept on the side and walks confusedly towards it...she then notices the rose and the card...then she gives a little chuckle and says "yeh Vansh bhaiiya bhi naa...aise hi Ichha ke liye cheez hamesha ither uther rakh deta hai...she just picks it up to put in the other room when the card flies open and she catches her name at the top. Surprised, she keeps reading...by the time she gets to the end she is crying silently with this smile on her face...truly touching...then when she turn around veer is standing there in front of her smiling...then OMG he gets down on bended knee and says I Love You and proposes. Tapasya = full on crying now...she gets down and hugs him and says I Love You too and then just cries heaps...when they hear everyone else coming back so go back out to greet them. Vancha smirking...they have this totally knowing look on their face seeing Veeya like that.

Jogi and Divya and nani arrive 15 minutes later and Ichha welcomes them in...Tapu has gone to get changed after finishing the laddoos and pack some stuff and Veer is sitting like a good guy with his in-laws. All the time his eyes are on the stairs. Down comes Tapu in this beautiful red sari with wavy hair and this beautiful set of dangly earrings. She looks radiant. Veer looks lost in her. She goes and touches everyone's feet. Jogi and Divya stand up and bid the Bundelas tata. Jogi takes tapu's hand and takes her out, tapu turns back to look at veer and gives a little wave. She is a bit sad. She will miss Veer very much.😭


Part 8

Tapu arrives at the Thakur house while Veer heads up to his room in Bundela house...he sits on the chair and pulls a picture of tapu towards him...with her radiant smile...he smiles looking at her smile and then thinks...there an hour later after finishing talking with everyone tapu also goes upto her room and looks at the photo of veer on her bedside table...she smiles too...kismet konnection...suddenly her mobile rings...its veer...she smiles real wide...heart hammering...says hello...veer says : Tapasya....aap...Veer: haan...kyun tujhe meri yaad nahi aarahe thi....Tapu: woh mein abhi....Veer..acha suno...abhi hum Atria mall be bahar hai...aakar miloge nahin? Tapu is blushing....woh hum...aaj...woh papa.... But u see tapu really wanted to see Veer so she says acha hum aarahe hain. And goes for a quick shower and rushes out...she wears a suit... a beautiful golden one...with transaparent sleeves...and these lovely golden danglies and a tiny gold pendant on her neck...just above her mangalsutra..and she smiles...she wears very little make up these days...she doesn't need it. She gets in the car and tells the driver to go to Atria. She gets out of the car and looks around... she notices a big crowd of people at the front of Atria. There is music playing loudly at the front...Tapu smiles as she recognises her favourite song "Zara Sa" from Jannat...she walks forward towards the music...she sees Veer on the stage and is surprised..he never was the outgoing dance type as long as she had known him...yet there he was...looking right at her...his face alight with joy...he hops down from the stage...comes over and gives her a big hug (there goes shy Veer too!) and then says "chale?" tapu: waise hum yahan kyun aaye hai? Veer: waise humne socha ki shaadi ka joda ki mai ki bajai hum tumhare liye khareede tumhare pasand se...tapu: achha to ek kaam karte hain...tum humare liye lehenga chuno aur hum tumhare liye sherwani choose karenge..theek hai? Veer smiles " to chalo" Veer chooses this beautiful shaadi ka lehenga for tapu...its red and got silver and a tiny bit of gold work on it...a transparent red chunari with work...and chose this beautiful red, silver and gold kundan set as well as a set of heavy gold payals that had red and silver gems on it (all extremely stunning stuff) and tapu chose for Veer a red sherwani containing heavy embroidery. They then went for dinner at restaurant Gulmurg (totally my favourite) and had mango lassi (its great there) and then Veer dropped her home where she snuck in quietly and locked her bedroom door and took out the joda Veer had selected for her and felt it...it really was so soft and beautiful and tapu loved it. She smiled.



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Posted: 15 years ago
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U r starting a FF on Veeya ??😲😕😆..
SRKji u wrote it very well..I mean the use of words were very good👏...but can u change the name Tapasya to some Ina..Meena or Deeka😳😆..after all its your FF..so Veer in your FF can Hv a wife with some other name as well na😉😆😆...I promise I will read your FF regularly if u change Tapasya's name there😛
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

U r starting a FF on Veeya ??😲😕😆..

SRKji u wrote it very well..I mean the use of words were very good👏...but can u change the name Tapasya to some Ina..Meena or Deeka😳😆..after all its your FF..so Veer in your FF can Hv a wife with some other name as well na😉😆😆...I promise I will read your FF regularly if u change Tapasya's name there😛



areyyy jyoti ji its abt veeya! how could i change it? but u shud keep on reading because u will like the ending where tapu commits suicide😆
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areyyy jyoti ji its abt veeya! how could i change it? but u shud keep on reading because u will like the ending where tapu commits suicide😆

Hey that's why I asked for the last part first 😆😆😆
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areyyy jyoti ji its abt veeya! how could i change it? but u shud keep on reading because u will like the ending where tapu commits suicide😆

ShockedReallyyy...
I hope its not a misleading info or u r planning to show that after Tapwater commits suicide ...Veer too kills himself to go and meet Tapwater in hell😡😆...If thats the case then....😡😡...
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

😲Reallyyy...
I hope its not a misleading info or u r planning to show that after Tapwater commits suicide ...Veer too kills himself to go and meet Tapwater in hell😡😆...If thats the case then....😡😡...

Jyoti I think as per SRK ji's theory Veer dies first and in his gum Tapu baba comits suicide 😆😆😆.
SRK ji that's why I was asking u for a promo to make ur FF popular in this forum 😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shyams

Jyoti I think as per SRK ji's theory Veer dies first and in his gum Tapu baba comits suicide 😆😆😆.
SRK ji that's why I was asking u for a promo to make ur FF popular in this forum 😆😆😆



but ji i gave u the promo! after alot of time and incidents she'll fall truly and deeply in love with veer he'll accept her then he'll love her then she'll become pregnant but veer dies in a car accident and tapu unable to bear this commits suicide right in fron of everyone with a knife with the baby still in her stomach and gasping her last she says "please fulfill my last wish" please cremate me together with my veer. then she dies.😭

im telling u i got soooooooooooo scared imagining this that i woke up and started crying😭
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Originally posted by: shyams

Jyoti I think as per SRK ji's theory Veer dies first and in his gum Tapu baba comits suicide 😆😆😆.
SRK ji that's why I was asking u for a promo to make ur FF popular in this forum 😆😆😆

😲😲Oh no ..yes thats a real possibility😲😲..Taps first rapes and kills the already dead soul and then commits suicide...Nahinnnnnnn...
SRKji see your FF is already becoming Popular as we all r waiting with huge expectations about the disastrous ending that u will provide in this story😆😕
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but ji i gave u the promo! after alot of time and incidents she'll fall truly and deeply in love with veer he'll accept her then he'll love her then she'll become pregnant but veer dies in a car accident and tapu unable to bear this commits suicide right in fron of everyone with a knife with the baby still in her stomach and gasping her last she says "please fulfill my last wish" please cremate me together with my veer. then she dies.😭

im telling u i got soooooooooooo scared imagining this that i woke up and started crying😭

Hey don't worry jab tak suraj chand rahega (read UT CVs) Uttaran me tapu baba ka role rahega 😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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but please i do ask anyone not to bash tapu in this post😭 no rape please!

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