rote samay echha ke hoth kampta hai.....

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Sanjay Kedari

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Posted: 16 years ago

rote samay echha ke hoth kampta hai.....

yah khud ko akele pan mahsus kar rahi hai...

koshish kar ke bhi niyat usko saat nayi de rahi hai.....

kya kare dusaronka chinane se apana hi dena accha samjati hai.....

par yah denewali baat nayi thi phir bhi khuda ko manjur nahi hai.....

rote samay echha ke hoth kampta hai.....

aisa abhinay to kisi sadharan kalakar ko nayi sujati hai...

asadharan veer hi eska pati ho sakata hai.....

hum sab utaran ki iccha ke fan ban gaye hai.....

rote samay echha ke hoth kampta hai.....

ichha syayam apana prabhim dekhakar usake saat ekrup hoti hai..

tappu apane sharir se jakadi hoyi hai....

jo sharir se pare dekhane se inkar karte hai unki samaj me kuch nahi aata hai..

yahi dono me phark hai....

rote samay echha ke hoth kampta hai.....

a aa aaa aaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..............💔

Edited by sanjay211 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

salut to iccha's great performance in the hospital!

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shivani9

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Posted: 16 years ago

bahut achaa kavitha hai lekin wot ke badley hoth hota thoe aur bhi badiya hota. plz correct me if I am wrong, my first language is not Hindi. Good luck

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Sanjay Kedari

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shivani.chenna

bahut achaa kavitha hai lekin wot ke badley hoth hota thoe aur bhi badiya hota. plz correct me if I am wrong, my first language is not Hindi. Good luck

thank u very much...kuch to naya koshis kar raha hu...😊

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shivani9

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Posted: 16 years ago

I should thank you for accepting the correction. Well done. Keep up ur good work

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Sanjay Kedari

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shivani.chenna
I should thank you for accepting the correction. Well done. Keep up ur good work

its your greatness! shivaniji, you are having all those good qualities which are required to become good writer and philosopher. you can also become a good director. your way of thinking and imagination power is excellent. the things which you analise are very meaningful which alows to keep thinking. thank you ..keep it on wish you all success.😊

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shivani9

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjay211

its your greatness! shivaniji, you are having all those good qualities which are required to become good writer and philosopher. you can also become a good director. your way of thinking and imagination power is excellent. the things which you analise are very meaningful which alows to keep thinking. thank you ..keep it on wish you all success.😊

Dear Sanjayji,

I am honoured by your flattering comments. Thank you very much. I started loving to write recently. I may try and write a book once I settle in my current proffesion. Anyway Thanks once again. Wishing you sucess in all your endeavours. God Bless and Take care.

Regards.

Shivani

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Sanjay Kedari

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shivani.chenna
Dear Sanjayji,

I am honoured by your flattering comments. Thank you very much. I started loving to write recently. I may try and write a book once I settle in my current proffesion. Anyway Thanks once again. Wishing you sucess in all your endeavours. God Bless and Take care.

Regards.

Shivani

hi shivaniji,

the success comes to those who dare and act and that's you.

hope you will get great success in your profession my best wishes are with you.

if you find good and true don't forget old from you.

regards sanjay

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shivani9

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjay211

hi shivaniji,

the success comes to those who dare and act and that's you.

hope you will get great success in your profession my best wishes are with you.

if you find good and true don't forget old from you.
regards sanjay

Dear Sanjayji,

Thanks for your wishes, wish yoy the same

I will never forget old when I find good and true.

Regards.
Shivani

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Sanjay Kedari

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: shivani.chenna

Dear Sanjayji,

Thanks for your wishes, wish yoy the same

I will never forget old when I find good and true.

Regards.
Shivani

you are the architect of your own faith. start writing story or script like utaran and hum aap ke hai koun.. God bless you. good day..take care

Edited by sanjay211 - 16 years ago