Surf excel - a drabble

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Surf Excel - a drabble

Brought in as a cameo to support the FL through her emotional turmoils caused by super frauds husband and sister. Entangled in a web of love , lust and sorrow she still loves the ex despite his cheating. Flashbacks comes according to seasons. In shimla she had wonderful ones and erased the bitter moments. In moga, however, air, water and environmental changes brought back the earlier bitter events revolving ex


Meanwhile the cameo was turned into a powerful detergent, a surf excel to cleanse her notorious ex who suddenly realises that she was his lady love out of the blue when he was all alone suffering on the foot path


All the while when he was getting free food and accomodation in dear papa's home, at that time, he didn't realize that she was his true love. Infact he was determined to make her leave claiming he doesn't love her at all but her sibling.

It's quite intriguing that both lovers' feelings and flashbacks flows according to venue and climate changes.


They finally gets united but suddenly part ways due to trust issues. The cameo walked in as a support pillar once again but yet the ex wins the gamble of love in the name of destiny tarnishing the name of the Almighty in the curse titled rab ney benayi jodi which apparently was made in hell instead of heaven.

The reason being the lord clearly stated that hey ! When do i make a pair that was ruined due to EMA. I produce perfect matches, not defected items.


The audience agreed with the Almighty and switched their remote controls elsewhere to save balance mental sanity from the mockery of the heavenly made couple which didn't make sense at all.


Lastly, the fact that the cameo is being turned into a detergent for whitewashing purposes seemed indigestible and resulted in diarrhea issues among some of the loyal viewers.

It is very unfortunate that the fresh entry who was suppose to bring positivity as a cameo is now pronounced as the permanent surf excel to redeem the heroic tantrums of the villain type loverboy. One of the famous detergent brands of India. Well, super washing powders are required at the end of the day for hell made bonds


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ani.. nice one..😆


I don't even want to waste my energy abt the show.. it kind of stooped low with the promo and the track..

It was disgusting and I guessed how it was going to unravel and stopped watching.

I wish good luck to everyone associated with the show.. Makers,Actors, UD team and viewers..

Tag me if anything interesting happens in the show.. I will binge watch all these episodes when I find time because Karan acts well in both positive or negative roles.. it is always a pleasure to watch his work

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Well Iam Just Reading Updates For Now.

Karan Should Leave The Show His Character Is Ruined.

I Hate The New Promo

And Tejo Won't Die She Might Be Danger But Not Die.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ElizaDarcy

Ani.. nice one..😆


I don't even want to waste my energy abt the show.. it kind of stooped low with the promo and the track..

It was disgusting and I guessed how it was going to unravel and stopped watching.

I wish good luck to everyone associated with the show.. Makers,Actors, UD team and viewers..

Tag me if anything interesting happens in the show.. I will binge watch all these episodes when I find time because Karan acts well in both positive or negative roles.. it is always a pleasure to watch his work


Hi Sushma

Was busy past two days

I myself have dumped it how to tag u for anything interesting in the show 🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SilverBell

Well Iam Just Reading Updates For Now.

Karan Should Leave The Show His Character Is Ruined.

I Hate The New Promo

And Tejo Won't Die She Might Be Danger But Not Die.


Hi nicita.

Sorry was busy past two days

I left onscreen two mths back and now updates as well three weeks ago since holi.

I love listening songs at yt and that's where i come across their bts precaps or promos

Story is merry go round update also not required. . Wasting time.

From the precaps of hardly few seconds and also the promos, u already know where the story is heading 🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


Hi Sushma

Was busy past two days

I myself have dumped it how to tag u for anything interesting in the show 🤣🤣🤣

Keep the show aside.. did you see this post..

Karan met with a small accident and still managed to reach on time for the shoot.. SaRavi are lucky to have such people on board.. Ankit with constant bruises and Priyanka is such a sport to do so many scenes drenched in mud


https://www.instagram.com/p/Cca2S_spkqj/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


Hi nicita.

Sorry was busy past two days

I left onscreen two mths back and now updates as well three weeks ago since holi.

I love listening songs at yt and that's where i come across their bts precaps or promos

Story is merry go round update also not required. . Wasting time.

From the precaps of hardly few seconds and also the promos, u already know where the story is heading 🤣🤣

True Watching Or Even Reading Updates Of This Show Its Just Wasting Time.

Take Karan Grover Out Of This Show He Over Stayed His Welcome 😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Closed for review.


Udariyaan DT.

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