Hello, I used to love watching Udaariyan in the start since I assumed it was something different. As per the promos, it was more of focusing on dreams and achieving. Jasfa fans may not like this, but in the promos it was quite evident though Fateh was falling for Jasmin, end game was Fatejo. But honestly, more than that it was about dreams! Looking at the way the script is progressing, i wish I was the script writer.
My thoughts as a writer:
"Three main leads - Jasmin, Fateh, Tejo
- Jasmin's dream - Canada
-Fateh's dream - International boxing championship / Gold medal in Olympics, offering a platform for training Indian sportsmen/youth
-Tejo's dream - Imparting education to create a better society
Fateh is pursuing his dream when he falls in love with Jasmin. He is ready to give up his dream but situation is not in favor, and the wedding doesn't happen. No one's fault - Jasmin's dream is canada and it is ok if that's what she wants. Fateh marries Tejo after they both agree. If they both couldn't tell their parents not to be concerned of society or people, they should not crib about being in a forced marriage.
after marriage, fateh and tejo, as if in arranged marriage, adjust and fall in love. Fateh takes time, but he doesn't cheat. But most important is they both work towards their dreams and the journey makes them fall in love with each other. In parallel, jasmin marries gippy, but for some reason she is not able to go to canada. she is sent back from airport. so she decides to write he own destiny. she starts studying, to become competent to go to canada on her own and not with support from a husband. If a lead needs to be introduced for her, it can be, but not someone who is her reason for canada.
fateh tejo move on, set up their institutes for sports and academics. They also support jasmin in studying and achieving her dream. Jasmin is able to take her family to canada on her own with support from fateh and tejo. there is no extra marital affair. The show could have shown how relationships mature, people become independent and achieve dreams. not all wishes come true, like fateh's love for jasmin, but to learn to accept and move on is a strong sign of maturity and something new for a serial rather than the crying.
No lies, no cheating, no jealousy, no love triangles, no ignorance. Something inspirational for everyone to watch.
All 3 Main leads would be equally popular, positive, and the title 'Udaariyan would have been apt."
(Note: I stopped watching the show, which was my favorite one, because i don't like negativity and stress. I prefer something inspirational and at the same entertaining. Once upon a time, i used to wait for the episode to air, now, i don't really care).