A Cup of Coffee - Tejo OS - Page 2

Please post that OS again with the mature tag. This is the first case I've heard where it's been taken off. It never happens. Please talk to the mod about this. IF never censors stuff like this

Originally posted by: TJ9896

This was really amazing!

What a beautiful, well-written OS!👏

I am expecting a sequel of this, and maybe another one after that.

The next one with Amrik and Jasso talking to Fateh and the third one, Fateh and Tejo reuniting.

Hello dear! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

For this one, I have a couple of ideas to see if I can stretch it.

Let's see how they fit in.

- Niki

Originally posted by: hapc

This was absolutely lovely. First I thought Fateh was the airport which I now realize was silly because it is a Tejo OS not Fatejo OS. I was pleasantly surprised at how the conversation flowed despite it not being Fateh. If at all they take the ITV route of defamation they better end it like this. Then my heart broke a little for Fateh though he kind of would have deserved it and then the ending made me laugh. Amrik is entertaining.

Loved the story. And about Broken, I will wait for you to put up the edited version and wait even more intensely, if that is even possible, for the original on your blog. Your writing is amazing. Keep writing.❤️

Also I know this is an OS but please continue it as a short story if possible, I would love a reunion and happy ending for these two.

I expected many to think it was Fateh first 😈😈😈

This fic was a surprise for me too. Thinking about toning down angst, I was facing a lack of ideas. Then I started wondering how Amrik might react to Tejo years later and this fleshed out.

I will definitely share my blog link.

This one might just get a continuation.

- Niki

Originally posted by: TheFluffyCactus

If you aimed at reducing the angsty feeling, you definitely succeeded in doing it. I loved how although the angst was there but it ended (for now) on a positive and hopeful note. A much-needed break after reading your tragic OS previously. No offense intended. They made me cry. So of course you should take responsibility and write an OS that makes me smile as well,😛 To be honest, (just an observation), although you make it seem like an OS maybe it could be because of the angst or something else, they always feel incomplete, to me at least. So I would definitely urge you to write sequels of those OSs Shackles, Broken as well as this one and give them a proper ending, even if on a bitter note.

Yayyy...thanks. Less angst is on 😌😌

This was kind of aftermath fanfiction.

Oh..man....I made you cry? It's ok..I will try comedy next.

Yeah...I understand. You see, some stories have that tragedy quota because of the lurch of an inappropriate closure. Human beings love proper closure; preferred is happily ever after and if not at least a good conclusion. But when things are left in a lurch; a continuum without ending, it's pure tragedy.

That was my idea when I was writing them.

This OS might get a continuation but Broken will never do.

Shackles...I will think on it.

- Niki

Originally posted by: TJ9896

This was really amazing!

What a beautiful, well-written OS!👏

I am expecting a sequel of this, and maybe another one after that.

The next one with Amrik and Jasso talking to Fateh and the third one, Fateh and Tejo reuniting.

Thank you so much dear.

I do plan to write another part when I am sure of the plotline.

Thanks for appreciating!

- Niki

Originally posted by: Mehr03

Another amazing fic from you... thank you so much for this. I am also sorry that they have taken down your "broken" fanfic. I do not get how it has breached the site's rules and I find it unfair. Please do update us when you will update the story. Thank you so much. 😊

Even I am upset about the way it was taken off. But well....nothing can be done. I am sad that those beautiful comments by all the readers cannot be read again 😓

Welcome dear!

Originally posted by: Nikita_99503

Another fabulous one from you... 👏 👏 👏

Got a small but pleasant surprise with Amrik.

Abhiraj and Mahi pair was another surprise...

It was really entertaining to read... You have woven the chain of events so beautifully. It kept me hooked till the end. Really well written... Everything was penned down very wonderfully.

Absolutely loved reading it... ❤️

Thanks a lot ❤️❤️❤️

Amrik is a surprise addition ... isn't he 😅

I am glad you likes it.

This one was more sedate in comparison.

- Niki

I need to know more! I want read how they approach Fateh, how Fatejo reunite. AAAHHHHH please continue! Please please please 🤗

This was really good..

Are you going to continue this?

I would love to read how Tejo would go to Fateh..

And how Fateh and the family reacts on seeing her..

What I absolutely love about this story is how beautifully it unravels! You don't get to know about Tejo's circumstances immediately, instead you gasp in surprise at every detail that's brought to light.👏

And kudos to you Niki for finally making a story with a happy ending (well, sort of) 😆

It was so refreshing to see Amrik interacting with Tejo when you were expecting to see Fateh instead, the dynamics between Simi and Tejo had me feeling all warm and fuzzy while the MahiRaj pairing had me squealing.

I've read this over and over again, so much that I forgot to comment until now. Thank you so much for this beautiful OS. 💗💗💗