Eye My Girl, will Eye U - My SuKor The Miracle did happen ...an OS Pg - Page 6

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Awesome update 👌👌👌intriguing precap.....loved the interaction especially because I tend to imagine MEEJAY in it and their chemistry which we are used to😍😍❤❤❤ loveeeeeeeed suraj.... terribly missing MEEJAY together....

Eagerly waiting for the next🙈🙈 do it today na...pleaseeeee

Thanks so much Niki

Will update soon 😍👍

Thanks so much Smita. Writing this is indeed making me nostalgia but scared too as i need to link to the already written post and need to keep it logical to the maximum possibility.

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Part 5:

It's very interesting & entertaining update Sumi 👌👌. Chakor's being a self reliant person & a well known Marathoner of under 14, her being prepared herself for the benefit of her village & villagers & in future to fight against the wicked like KN & on the contrary Suraj's arrogance, rough attitude, using his father's influence, he's trying to get things done by scaring everyone with his gun all were quite natural & it has similarities with the show but you have put your touch on it to make it different, that's great 👌. Chakor's benevolent attitude unknowingly saved her "Sabkuch" 😍😍, her pushing him towards the wall, his band getting entangled with her watch, her making him shut his mouth up 😊😊. I can visualize Meejay in the entire sequence but you made it distinguished by doing their role reversal 😊😍😍. Their dispute, her prayers for his safety, his feeling the same tenderness with her touch💘💘, having goosebumps thinking of their closeness😍😍, so pleasing & precap was as usual very interesting👍. Despite their repeated meets, they did not see each other's face yet , made our excitement increase. I'm curious to know how Rahul & gang will try to harm Chakor & surely it will be Suraj saving her from their devious plans. Overall a fantastic update, great going Sumi👍, waiting for the next update. Thank you.

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PART VI

The Furnace

(Re-edited my apologies girls as firstly I lost what I wrote initially and then rewrote but got a bit mixed up with the classes. As I am trying to sync with the solo eye my girl post, Suraj needs to be completing 12th. As per the post he is in third year engg and she steps into college so logically he should complete 12th. Thanks bossy for pointing it... uggghh though I try to be logical but got a bit mixed up)

There were the other boys too who came to Rahul with wound marks on their forehead. What happened to you all he asked. We tried to manhandle a boy when that girl from nowhere came and catapulted stones at us.

Whaat he shouted… this is our area and the boys should be scared of us. Who is she he asked.

Don’t know but I have seen her always running past that big play ground he said with her face always covered in a dupatta… What? Why?

Oh ok then bring her let me teach her a lesson he said…. How dare she hurt you both.

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Amarpura

KNji the elections are going to come up in two year, so please gear up and try to bring in your son too for the youth wing said the Party Head.

And ….. you will be responsible for the Rural development and welfare like now (yes I need that he told within himself)

We have long time KN said….But I have to lay the path fine and get the minister post… Only then I can rule autonomous. Now and then the media keeps taunting me of that old murders too though there is no proof…. Hmmm hope this kite flying the CM is going to visit the village after 6 years hope things are fine so that he gets pleased.

Raam Singh he called, ensure everything is properly planned and set he said.

Ji Maalik he said… he was stocking the embroidered finished products in the godown.

When is Suraj coming he asked.

Chota Malik finishes the 12th exams next week and will return over the weekend.

Ask him to come soon KN said. I have organised for him to get into my friend's Engg college.

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Jaipur

The boys were trying to find a suitable time to bring Chakor as Rahul was irritated that his friends were hit and more so he does not want anyone to be not scared of him.

Do you know her name? No… hmm but we know she runs in the big playground. Run???

The next few days they could not get to her as either Dhrona or Keshav was with her always. Jaipur was very cold too so she always covered her face with a dupatta though Dhrona always tells her to wear the monkey cap.. but she would desist saying the wool irritates and cotton duppata works fine.…

She would be at her room and just look at the hand band… this looks very expensive and its written SR.. What’s SR.. hmm she kept it in her bag… who knows if I will ever meet him…. She just remembered that day at the school and the powerful eyes….and the attitude. Ugh what an attitude… bilkul paagal.. wanted to fight those thugs with big knife. Thinks he is a big Don …. But why am I thinking that.

She was at the dining when she saw on the TV informing that the CM was planning to visit the kite flying ceremony at Amarpura after six years.

Tears rolled down her years…that day changed her fate…… Anjali just hugged her when she just cried… as she remembered the brutal murder of Kaushal…..her parents, her village, that shed, her fellow… suddenly she had a flash of the Chota Malik……….the way he tried to hit Katju… She looked at her bandhuva stamp…..

Dhrona stroked her and said within a month you are participating in your first National Marathon. Focus on that and keep your Goal to win that so that your voice is heard.

National Marathon!!! She looked at her bandhuva stamp again.

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The High School

The Head Master of the School was infact worried as he was informed that thugs were there and also that Rahul and Suraj are getting into scuffles too much… He was infact waiting for the school to close that week once the 12th exams are over for the vacation so that these boys get off the school and join some college.

It was the last day of the exams

He was driving his Haya …..just could not come off the thought of the hold, that dupatta covered face which was so close to him. Chup ekdum closing his mouth while looking out through the hinges of the door.

He searched in the PT room for his hand band… my favourite one and very sentimental too.

He saw Rahul talking to the boys and out of inquisitiveness he walked stealthily and over heard, catch the girl tomorrow else we all will be off on vacation. How dare she hit and first remove her dupatta to see her face he said.

Dupatta??? Girl??? Which girl??? Before he could hear them out completely the bell rang and they pushed off.

The past one week he had been looking out if she was studying in the same school but he could not get details. Today is the last working day.

The next day early morning he sets off to Amarpura on his bike though KN chides him but he is not the one who listen. SR has his own way.

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It was wee hours…..

She got ready for her usual run ………………… it was quite cold and unusually dark…………..

She did not want to disturb Dhrona. The Ground was just few Kms away from the house.

Very softly she locked the door and carried her bag which had her water bottle, her basic mobile, a biscuit packet. She looked to see the hand band in her bag. She covered her face with the dupatta..

She started to Sprint slowly….Today its quite cold and unusually dark she told to herself.

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The boys were getting ready…we need to catch her today…………………… they were in their WagonR.

Where is Katju they asked. Oh he left last evening to his native. Hmm coward… he runs away…

The two boys were waiting at the corner while two were inside the van and one was on the steering. Are you sure is this the route? Yes she will go past this route to the Ground..

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Chota Malik please go by the car… A stern look at them and he wore his helmet and vroomed his bike… a quick words of those boys….girl with dupatta???

He went his usual route unknowing the route was past the big ground which was in the outskirts of the city leading to the highway to Amarpura.

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He was riding when he saw her running…. It was dark and her face was covered with the dupatta…

He went past her when he saw the van and the boys…it was dark. He took a U turn and went past her revving on the left side of hers opposite to the oncoming of the van

Is it Rahul and the boys???and why a van and the thugs is this the girl they mean?? But why ??? he was thinking to himself… But why am I bothered… I never bothered about any one… but an unknown feeling… He just slowed his rev….

The boys were getting ready coming on the opposite side while oblivious to anything she was running slowly as she runs to the Ground, does her stretching and then does her sprinting.

The head lights were so bright that it was blinding her… she kept her palms to avoid the beams when she realized the van was coming very close to her right side… the door opened and the thugs extended their arms….

Heyyyy there was a big noise!!!!!Vroooom came the hayabusa to her left …. She closed her eyes and was swirled……….

The van could not slow down and went forward and then stopped. Hey she is gone….. who is that….. follow that bike………………. They shouted. By the time they could swirl around the haya went gaya in the wind in the darkness.

She slowly opened her eyes to realise she was on something speeding at jet speed and she was literally on the petrol tank clinging on to a hard surface … her legs were hanging on the side.

She looked up scrunching her eyes to see only the eyes through the fully covered helmet.

Stop Stop ……she shouted…… hey you fool don’t shake we will fall he shouted through the helmet. Whaat she asked ….. she soon realised they were being chased. Get back he said…Whaaat She said.

Peeche bait…. He just grabbed her waist and made her get down and realising there was danger she got on to the pillion with her legs on both sides and was holding his shoulders. Hold me tight he said… a rev on his bike she just clung to him.

He vroomed vroomed through the lanes and reached the dry river bridge which had shrubs and trees grown allover… it was more like a small forest.….He went down the bridge below while they drove past fast above.

As it was sloppy and sandy he had to park the bike behind the shrub and pulled her towards huge pillar holding the bridge

She was heaving…. Leave me what are you all doing to me she shouted. Whaaat??? We??? Hello??? Not we … its they tried to abduct you???

Why??? Who are they she asked…who are you?…. Leave me she shouted when he heard the sound of the car over the bridge.

He pinned her to the wall,closing her mouth over her dupatta and holding her other hand. Chup, shut up he said looking above ….he said softly they are there…

She froze… he held her mouth and was holding her right wrist…

Where are they ???search down….. No No its too bushy and dark….. they waited there for sometime and left….

They heard their voice and the van receding slowly….

It was brightening up when he saw her face covered in dupatta… her eyes…..

hmmmmm , she was squeezing her hands to free when he said whaat???

Realising he was closing her mouth over her dupatta, he removed it but was holding her wrist…

He was in his helmet his eyes were revealed… both were lost for few moments…

She thumped his feet and pushed him when her bag fell down as he went backwards but was holding her right hand.

He slowly removed his helmet and looked up to see her removing her dupatta…

Uff… she coughed….. how hard you closed my mouth and my hand is paining too… she was pouting angrily.

He was lost in that face, ….She was so innocent, plain, beautiful… a simple pony tail with her tracks, a simple stud and a small bindi. She must be 15 or 16?? But why I am feeling different, for the first time….

She looked up to see him. Hellooo???

He came to his sense… what he asked…

How do you know they were trying to abduct me? And how dare you rode me like that on your bike

The hand band fell down…. he saw that he left her hand and took the band…

Hey this is mine… how did you get it.

Yours??? She scrunched.. this is from that boy in that school…..

So you were the one….. last week…. Who saved me…. In the school….You study there? he asked. I have not seen you???

So you were that Gundaa…. No I came to do my 10th exam. I wrote privately. if everything goes fine I will join there for the Higher Secondary..

But why are the boys and the thugs behind you..??? he asked.

I don’t know but were those the thugs in the school too. she questioned

Did you scuffle with anyone he asked…

Hmmm haan yes I catapulted those boys who were harming a meek one.

Oh that was you… Lokmaatha. No wonder they were trying to harm you.

Whaat she said..

Anyways thanks for saving me today…

Mutual thanks he said....

He took the band when she was rubbing her wrist… murmering.. so hard it is…

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The turmoil……………….emission of the lava………………………the furnace…………………… burns or blooms

Whats SR she asked, caressing her wrist..

When he looked at her wrist…his eyes was widening…

He pulled her hand…. Looking at it….

This stamp….. she quickly pulled… nothing…

He grabbed her head all of a sudden tell me who are you? Whats this?? How did you get this stamp? Are you from Amarpura???

She got scared… Whats your name….His eyes were in red.

Leave me she said, yes I am from Amarpura and you how do you know about the stamp. Are you from Amar….. her eyes were fluttering….

Who are you??? What is SR….

That stamp is bandhuva stamp… You are a bandhuva and how come you are in Jaipur. Tell me he shouted….

Who are you to ask me… leave my hand she shouted… You are real Gundaa…

Shut up he said…I am Suraj Rajvanshi ….. her eyes froze…..

Whaatttt???? Su…rajjj….babu….. sabkuch (she mumbled within herself)……

He held her head…. Tell me who you are????? Don’t ignite my anger he said.

She bit his wrist and said I am Chakor………………..

Chak…oor….. bandhuva ……………..Mine he mumbled.

So you ran away from Amarpura… six years ago…after bringing embarrassment to my father, Kamal Narayn Rajvanshi..

I will not leave you now…. Come with me to Amarpura he said….How dare you ran away.

She was angry and at the same time shocked.

What??? embarrassed your father… Who??the so called Maalik who is none other than a cold blooded murderer.

What ???he murderer, mind your words. You asked him to provide you with studies but you did not want to and you embarrassed him by running away and all the media were hounding him.

And god knows what happened to that media guy,he went missing… and was found in the woods. Because of his death my father was targeted for no reason. He was constantly troubled and pulled up by the opposition and he was so much depressed and one day he drank poison and my mother drank the rest and she died… luckily he survived.

You killed my mother he shouted.

What your mother is dead… Maalkin is dead?… she drank poison?… your father drank poison?. Are they such a coward to drink poison….No I cant believe… can you believe.?

Yes !!! all because of you…. I lost my mother and my father worried so much that I was left all alone. He searched for you everywhere so that he could keep his promise but you….

Stop it she shouted… she grabbed his collar stop it.. I did not run away… and the media guy Kaushal did not fall in to woods.

HE WAS KILLED I saw with my own eyes….. he was brutally killed and your father and your men saw me so they chased me to kill me too, but I ran away and escaped in the bus.

You are lonely you claim… what about me… at that small age I was like an orphan, in this new city… she cried….luckily the event management bhaiya and Masterji helped me.

Your father did not search me to provide me with studies…. He searched to kill me…

No I cant believe this he said…

Yes I know no one will believe,even if I had told that day no one would have believed me. I have no proof but I saw that bhaiya was talking to your father when they held him and he started to run when he was caught and stabbed… he shuddered.

He was completely confused….

I cant believe this…..

Don’t believe but that is the truth she said…..

Just imagine, Suraj Babu I was too small to know anything and I wanted to study…. Why would I run away…I was in the shed

Yes I searched for you in the shed…. You were told Mine.

Yes I was told that Maalik and you were sabkuch… but your father is selfish…he made everyone his bonded labour and made their life miserable without any development.

But my mom….

She said I know Maalkin is also very bold lady why will she drink the poison unless she was misguided.

What do you mean he was still raging.

I don’t know but think…you said KN was pulled by the opposite party and also by his party and by the media… and he is not a coward to drink poison, may be to divert the attention did he sacrifice your mother? I wont be surprised as he is capable.

He was shocked….. she is just too young but she is thinking so deep..Well he remembered the way she solved the puzzle at the young age....

He sat on the stone nearby…. I just cant believe… Will he do it…..How can I believe you….He always told me that he was embarrassed and felt bad that he could not keep his promise. He wanted me to follow like him…. I did not want to study but wanted to get out of Amarpura, out of the lonliness…

And why did you not come to Amarpura he asked… His eyes was eager to know. Why did you leave he thumped the tree…. Leaving me…. Alone……. You are Mine they said…I searched for you…..

I ran for my life and I felt my voice will not be heard She said. I will come when I reach that time when I know my life is safe.

She was completely shocked.... You searched for me??? Did you know???? I saw you only few times…

He was in tears, he was banging his hands when a small piece from the bark pierced his palm…

Suraj babu she got up stop it … you are hurting she said, quickly holding his palm sucking it….. she tore her dupatta and tied it around his palm.

Please….. you can always pull me to Amarpura but just think and try to find out about your father…. Why your mother had the poison…. If she had it after he had, how come he survived???

His head was pounding ……you are confusing me too much he said

No!!! please she held his hands and said just think through….

I have my national marathon close to the kite flying ceremony….

Just believe me…

Her hold was making him calm…. Her hand is firm but tender he felt….. When she sucked his palm he had the feel of her sucking his thumb as the baby…..

Is my father so selfish that he killed mom for his benefit????

Does he not love anyone…even his own family????

His phone was ringing…..it was Raam Singh…..

Chota Maalik where are you????

Maalik is waiting for you…..

He looked at Chakor…….

I will try to find out the truth but if I find what you say is not true…

I will come myself as a bandhuva to you She said without a word more.

Vaadha…. Pucca

She had a call from Masterji….

Chakor what happened I am at the ground where are you.

Masterji there was a small accident I am fine…. My friend helped me….. I will be coming she said.

Friend he said……………hmmmm lets start friends……………

Ok… it was new the furnace blew emitted the lava but still was trying to rise from the ashes…

She covered herself with the dupatta…… he wore the helmet… tied his band…. Took his bike..

He took her phone and dialed his number… save it he said….

She saved SabKuch

He saved Mine…..

He left her well before the ground…. When she ran to Masterji……………….

The bike was raging towards Amarpura with a new determination to deal with the selfish to find the truth….

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You have to study.., the evil said...

She stepped into the 11th he stepped into the Engg college....

She was gearing up for the marathon.

The evil was planning the kite flying ceremony…

Raam Singh was high arey Suraj Baabu……………… you are drinking with us……………

Daddy is very smart hainnaaa Raam Singh ……….. Yes he is indeed……………….. he is the ruler……………… he knows how to shut everyone to achieve what he wants……………………

He dusted the attic……………………..while a pair of eyes was watching…………………

No No it cannot happen….I will be completely lost… I cannot loose………………

They drove together ………………………….She came running………………………….

The car turned ……………………Booooomup it went in flames……

Suraj Babu…………………………………she froze………………………………..

Amazing updates 👏

The PT room meeting was 🔥🔥🔥😍😍😍.

Lokmaata and Gunda 😂😂❤️️❤️️

Both of them kept thinking of the other

So now they're even, Chakor first saved Suraj and now he's saved her.

The revelation scene was intense, now Suraj will investigate his mother's death.

Precap sounds scary.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Originally posted by: nemo316

Amazing updates 👏

The PT room meeting was 🔥🔥🔥😍😍😍.

Lokmaata and Gunda 😂😂❤️️❤️️

Both of them kept thinking of the other

So now they're even, Chakor first saved Suraj and now he's saved her.

The revelation scene was intense, now Suraj will investigate his mother's death.

Precap sounds scary.

Eagerly waiting for next.

🤗thanks so so much Mai. You dont know how relieved I feel as I lost what I typed initially so had to rewrite it and syncing with already written so a bit of wary too.

and posting on IF is becoming so frustrating to reedit my essays😭.

happy you liked the lokmaata and Gunda 🤣

The revelation scene happy...

Actually I got a mixed up with the classes as as per the eye my girl post he is in third year when Chakor enters 1st year and going by that he has to be completing 12th when she enters her 11th. so sorry about that.

I will change that he completed 12th so that it syncs.

And who pointed out you guessed my bossy... though I try to be logical... hmmmm

Lets see how SR unravel his moms mystery and now that they are Friends... will he just remain friendly😛

Fantafab dear👏👏👏 and don't worry so much... you always write logically... once in a blue moon if there is a slip it's not a big deal😍😍😍

Lovely lovely the story is going, the hayabusa save is so filmi....just loveddddd it and how I had wished even then that in udaan they would have a bike chase with sukor on the bike😍😍🔥🔥... infact i had written in the forum also about it long back..... but idiots always gave a car 😜😜

So thanks for fulfilling my wish❤❤

Liked it when he listened to her and atleast considered investigating about his father👍👍

Baap re, like mesh says, indeed precap looks scary... want to read how suraj will unravel everything.....

WAITING WAITING 😚😚

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Fantafab dear👏👏👏 and don't worry so much... you always write logically... once in a blue moon if there is a slip it's not a big deal😍😍😍

Lovely lovely the story is going, the hayabusa save is so filmi....just loveddddd it and how I had wished even then that in udaan they would have a bike chase with sukor on the bike😍😍🔥🔥... infact i had written in the forum also about it long back..... but idiots always gave a car 😜😜

So thanks for fulfilling my wish❤❤

Liked it when he listened to her and atleast considered investigating about his father👍👍

Baap re, like mesh says, indeed precap looks scary... want to read how suraj will unravel everything.....

WAITING WAITING 😚😚

Thanks so much Niki 😘😘😍😍🤗🤗

Happy i could fulfill your wish... Yes me too love the bikes.

Precap 😜😜 let's see what he does and now that he has her number too. Hehe though friend 😉

Thanks so much Smita for the lovely words 🤗🤗🙏🙏

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Part 6:

What a fabulous update Sumi, so exciting & dramatic 👌👏👏. KN's planning to use Suraj for his political gain, HM's worriedness was so obvious, as this type of contention between students & their misconduct causes concern to the School Principal. Loved Sukor were thinking of each other 😊❤.Chakor's remembrance regarding the brutal murder 😔 but the flashbacks of Chota Malik & his arrogance 😊😊. Chakor's preparation to take part in the National Marathon, Rahul & gang's waiting for her to get a chance to harm her, SR overheared & the way he picked her up & blew away like a breeze👌👌💘💘, what a fantabulous entry like a super Hero👏👏. Their Jungle mein Mangal was so startling😍, finally they came face to face & actually it created the sparkles🔥🔥😍 😍 their cute banters ,the disputes, made me reminisce the old Sukor days 😍😍, his losing himself to her innocent beauty, simplicity, pinning her to the wall, shutting her mouth up 😍😍, the way their identity was revealed first as Lokmatha & Gunda, then SR, 'her Sabkuch' & Chakor, 'his Mine' 😍😍 . All were so beautifully written👍👌. Then her trying to break his misconception about his father's goodwill, & disclosed the truth which was undeniable but unbelievable to Suraj but it's good that atleast he agreed to find out the truth. Loved the portion when he thumbed the tree, his own way to express the frustration of being lonely without her & sucking his palm was reminded of her sucking his thumb as the baby ❤❤. Over all a superb, awesome update, precap was very thrilling & tensive. Can't wait to know will Suraj be able to uncover the truth? Thank you.

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PART VII

Anise from the Ashes???? Flower from Furnace??

Suraj: I will try to find out the truth but if I find what you say is not true…his eyes still confused and raged.

Chakor: I will come myself as a bandhuva to you She said without a word more.

Vaadha…. Pucca

Friend ????he asked……………hmmmm lets start friends.. she said……………

He took her phone and dialed his number… save it he said….(uggh what attitude she crossed her nose)

She saved SabKuch

He saved Mine…..

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Towards realization of the bitterness

He was riding his hayabusa towards Amarpura to find out those who have become Amar…. His mother…. The journalist…. With so many thoughts he rode the bike…

Is my father so selfish… but how….. why…………. He drank the poison and afterwards mom too drank from the same glass… but…. how is that possible…..

A sudden thought he stopped to the corner of the road and took his phone.

Saw the saved number Mine…. He edited to save as AA Mine… to always be on the first in his contacts. ……….He closed his eyes…. Her innocent face with that pony tail…he looked at the piece of dupatta tied around his palm. Friend.. hmm…. A new feeling… A friend he never had one who was genuine…. Had few who were with him out of fear… Ram… he quickly called Ram…. Hi Suraj… please tell, his voice was shivering. Suno! SR said.. where do you live…… Ok listen tome……. He gave few instructions. Ram was so confused but just said ok Suraj.

He wanted to call her but just contained himself. Just the thought about his mother made him determined and he revved his haya……………….

He reached Amarpura…..

Suraj….. Hamara Beta …Aaayeeye , came the evil running hugging…..

How are you? How was the exam??? Don’t worry you will pass… I have spoken to my friend for you to do Engg in his college as Rahul also will be doing….. KN was on and on…

He just hugged him and said ok…He did not want to do college but the thought to be away from Amarpura and to watch HIS new Friend made him nod to the selfish one.

KN asked him what happened,the bungalow workers said you got into trouble? is it due to Rahul? You need to be careful he said and why did you come by bike now he asked.

Suraj, hugged him mechanically looking at his mom’s pic…. Mummy…………

KN too cried…. haan beta…. I am very unlucky…. I should have died but she died and I survived. All because of that little urchin….

For the first time…. he looked up and said but you drank from the same glass na papa… Haan haan he said… he felt Suraj’s look very different…

He said Suraj you get refreshed we need to prepare for the kite flying festival which is going to happen after six years…

Suraj : haan after six years… that journalist also died on that day na….

KN : Haan all because of that girl… he fell into the woods. Don’t know how he fell there.

But beta why are you asking all this now….

Suraj : Kuch nahi papa, just mummy’s pic and kite festival just brought back the old memories.

Haan::: Need to catch hold of her….And also this new national marathoning news is all over.. Media is all ha ha about it… we need to divert them to talk about our kite flying….

Suraj: haan papa…. He went to his room.

KN felt weird about Suraj but told Raam Singh to keep an eye on him.

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She saw her phone Sabkuch… ugh what attitude??? SAVE the number ugh… but why did I say friend, Gundaa…thoughts were pondering….. she edited to save ZSabkuch as she did not want it to be identified as Anjali sometimes uses her phone.

She ran to Masterji….

Dhrona: Chakor what happened??? What accident??? Did you get hurt??? Who is your friend??? You never had any… so many questions were aimed at her.

Masterji …. I am fine… please don’t worry and don’t tell Anjali Ma she will worry. Hmmm she just swallowed herself as she did not want to tell about Suraj but at the same time she did not want to lie to Dhrona who had taken care of her.

She looked up to him and said. Masterji… I cannot lie to you, but, she narrated what happened at the School and in the morning. He was shocked.

D: Why did not you tell me he said…. and how can you say that evils Son as your Friend.

C: No Masterji but he said he will check out about his father… and his eyes were not lying. His powerful eyes just came in front of her and the way he saved her, the way he banged his palm against the tree brought in her a different feeling.

D: You are too innocent. How can you trust him… What if he goes and tell the evil and come for you?? And Why did you give your number erase it he said…. give me your phone … He could not identify and said good you did not save it… We have been masking your name in all the earlier races and the National Marathon is very important. So be Focused he said.

She quickly said no no I have not saved it but just cringed herself for lying. Will he change and tell the evil about my presence??. But his eyes did not lie. He searched for me in the shed…. He did say he missed me and felt lonely.

D: Chakor where are you lost… don’t deviate and concentrate on your practice he said.

Haan Masterji.

The phone rang…… ZSabkuch…..god why is he calling….a quick palpitation.

Hello…… Chakor …. Hmmmmm …..You are ok he asked… hmmmm. Kya hmm hmm. Oh your Masterji there.

Hmmmm…. She was running…. Ouccchhhh!!!

S: What happened…. There was ajitter…

C: Kuch nahi…..

Dhrona was calling out…… Chakor…..be careful… you may sprain yourself. I keep telling you that you need to change your sneakers…. You don’t allow me to buy and this is going to be difficult for the marathon…

Ham teek hai… Masterji…. Suraj was on the line……………

She said Hello…Hello….. She realised the call was disconnected. Hmm Gunda must be angry...

I need to get a good sneakers but need money too as I cannot make Masterji buy… Anjali ma is also not keeping good health and they both will overlook her health for my sake… she spoke to herself.

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Suraj was trying to figure out things at Amarpura.. too many questions within himself... He could not understand anything….

Chakor was busy preparing for her sprinting………………..

Days passed by ………………..she felt as though someone was watching her. He would sometime call her but she would not be in a position to talk as either Anjali will be there or Keshav will be with her. She would just disconnect the call.

It was another day as usual…. She was going to the ground when she found a person watching out on his cycle and would speed fast when she reached the ground…. Who is he???? Is it those boys again??? But he is just following me and goes off??? But wait a minute why is he going inside the ground today and keeping something near my practice area bench….

He sped away seeing her…. She went very slowly to the bench where she would keep her bags… there was a big paper bag….

Her eyes opened wide in surprise….

There were two boxes……………..

She opened to see two pairs of Adidas Sneakers in it…

A Note….

Lokmatha….dont know your size, so got 4 and 5… take the one which suits you and leave the other. Tell your Masterji you bought it….. Gundaa….

How did he know, she did not realise when Dhrona was calling out to her about the sneakers Suraj was listening before disconnecting the call. He had instructed Ram to follow her daily and keep him informed.

She smiled, but why is he buying…. Did he find out anything…. He called but I could not talk….. but there is no missed call yesterday…. Hope he is fine……But why am I thinking of him.

She took her size which was fitting her perfect a pink one….. and left the other behind…..

It was late night……………. She went to the terrace…… for the first time she dialed his number….

An unknown palpitation……

Hellooo!!!!! The voice was so masculine…………but just stopped

He…lllooo….. Are you ok??? There was no noise on the other side…..

Yes he said…. and you…..

Hmmmm….. thanks for the shoes………and how do you know????………

He said , I know sabkuch about Mine….

Did you find out anything…she asked

Hmmm….Nothing much he said… in a bit of despair……

Chota Maalik… aapka Dhoodh ……

He drank and shouted at the cook, the milk is plain you know I don’t like plain milk…Why no Sugar and Baadaam he said.

Maaf keejiye!!! . The sugar is below I forgot to mix it proper he said fearing terribly….and he stirred the mixture properly….

She heard and her face grew bright……. Can it be this way???? Oh My God!!!!

Hellooooo!!!!

He went to the shed and said bolo…………………..

She spoke what she could understand and decipher when his eyes grew surprised and realised how evil and selfish his father has been…………….Can it be that way!!! And my god that little brain thinks so much...Wah

The call got disconnected….

He was readying to find out the ugly truth………………but how to get the proof???

He just closed his eyes and was playing the kite flying day six years back…..

He was there in the same shed….Thumping when he fell down………………… Something struck him…

He ran to his room…. Searched the attic….

Two eyes were watching him….

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The whole Amarpura was gearing up for the Kite festival.

She was getting ready for her marathoning….

He called her before a day……………….Her phone rang

Hmmmmmm…..

Suraj: All the best…..Tell me you have won so many races but how is that your name is not there at all in any of the papers or on the internet too….

She said…. Masterji and Keshav bhaiyaa masked my name for the fear of my life and never shared my picture. I never collected the trophy in front of the media and Masterji would collect it later as they were only district and state level which did not make to the front page. My number was displayed 501 and my name was always Lal.

He realised how much that innocent one had been hiding and had been protected by her Masterji and no wonder his father or his men could find her.

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She was surprised……

He was there…..

She slipped, when he held her...unintentionally his........... touched her cheeks ………………..

I ………………… he said.

I want to ……………… she said…………………..

I promise………………….

She stepped into the 11th

He stepped into the Engg college……

This cant be ……………………..

The media was hounding him.

The little urchin……………………. The evil’s eyes flared in anger……..

Power, Greed, makes one forget ones own kith and kin……………..

I need the power…………………….

Go ahead only this way I can win and I should win………

They both were in the car………………He got down……………..

She ran towards the car…………………….

Boom the car boomed up in flames.

Suraajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj…..she froze….

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Superb 👍🏼

Suraj adding AA and Chakor adding Z 😆 just like them

Chakor can't stop thinking about her Gunda 😉 and Suraj kept calling her ❤️.

That line by Suraj "I know sabkuch about mine" he's flirting without knowing 😳 but Chakor didn't realize.

It was so sweet of Suraj to buy her the sneakers, good that your Suraj is a better judge of size than our Suraj 😆

Smart Chakor, she figured out how KN saved himself.

Eagerly waiting for next.