Missing. Missing. Ra(a4)gKor ..

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Missing... Missing... Ra(a4)gKor ...

(Girls... Today I am totally down, upset, missing MeeJay way too much, missing my fictional family I have named them as Ra(a4)gKor. Am off insta and twitter too as I just don't want to read anything about my dude with that new_______. No No its killing me... I am missing... am sure you all will be too ... A small OS to ease me)

Six Months... No No its impossible... Literally Raaghav was in tears.

Raaghav : Shyaam Kaaka... please should I go for this... I will not understand anything. Yes I learnt the business, but this will be difficult for me. And I can't leave the family ( I just can't leave Maidam) and go. Kaaka why can't we find somebody else for this.

Shyam Laal : Raaghav I can understand but this is very important for the deal that we have entered into with the UK company and as you know our expert Mohit has just got married and you only had given him a month off for his new life to start. This is a special course with regards to the latest technology of the tea processing and this course is just for 6 months and starting next ten days. We have your passports done and will apply for the visa. We cannot send anyone else as this is critical for the company. Rohan also cannot go as his mother is not well. Only Mohit and Rohan are the experts in processing and you know everything, which you have learnt from me and also with your experience you know the nuances. With this additional knowledge we will be in a better position in executing the order as the plucking will start in another three months and this will help.

Once you get expertise in this you can then transfer the knowledge to both. In this way we will save our cost and as we cannot send them again for training to London and the next course will start only next year.

So Raaghav its better that you go. Tell bitiya and get yourself prepared. Raaghav has never gone against Shyaam's advice. He always treats it as his order and always accepted, but, going to London for six months ... is jittering him..

LONDON oh god ... bajrangbali how will I manage... Raaghav was petrified and more than London I just cannot leave the boys, my princesses and my Queen.

Its been three months now, it was hard but Chakor had to make herself hard in making him accept as it was for the business and also he did not want to call back Mohit or disturb Rohan. Aayansh was so excited, my cutie pie he is true to his age he was excited that daddy was going to London... overseas. He prepared a list to be bought...

Ar was initially upset as he is too attached to daddy but then said that as it is needed he will help mummy to take care of the roses and the boys promised to study well... the roses did not know much but was crying when he started for the airport...

He was managing though many of the terminologies were new to him but he would speak to Chakor on a video call everyday to update her and also pass on what was taught and she helped him... Holding her tears back... not showing her emotions...

The A4 would eagerly wait to speak to him (thanks to the 4.5 hours difference that they could speak before going to bed) and the roses would kiss the screens wanting to go their daddy..

Shyaam Laal was taking care and he was training Chakor too into the business and Arjun would stay with her when needed. Chakor was so so proud of the maturity that he had and infact asked him without realizing... you are so brilliant Arjun and so matured... I want you to be very good in your studies and also be a good human being. ...he said mumma...I love daddy and I knew how much he loves you when you were away from us... He has told all about you, tearing holding her wrists... mumma you were a bandhuva... how much you would have suffered... she teared... Raaghav you told the boys everything about me?? He said, you though being a bandhuva still grew with confidence and righteousness so daddy always spoke about your braveness and how you always helped others at the cost of your happiness too. He hugged her, mumma I love daddy but indeed you are my role model... Daddy has struggled so much when we were too young. He has never been angry or scolded us always made us to understand everything.

I promise you mumma, when I grow I will learn all that you want me to learn, be a good human being and will ensure that I will help daddy in his business and also in taking care of my roses... she kissed him on his forehead... She said I am so blessed, she teared. Mumma please donot cry, We love you so much and daddy doesnot like you crying...

True she said he is a pure soul... I miss him too much... (she spoke within herself)

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Raaghav was doing well in his crash course and developed good contacts and infact was getting another deal to sign but he said that he will need to get the consent of his legal team and then only will go ahead.

In his absence the workers were gearing up for the plucking which will be soon starting and they had prepared themselves and was working cautiously with Chakor.

The plantation was gearing up for meeting the deadline as when Raaghav comes the new machineries will be ready for the processing.

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One afternoon... After the roses slept she went to the plantation and was overseeing the work and also was going through the school, hospital and the recreation centre in the plantation. Kaaka showed her and she was surprised to see two new shuttle cars and also two new big swings and a rocking chair and also a crche there...the lady workers who were in the plucking came to her hugging her and saying they are so blessed as the shuttle cars are helping the pregnant ladies to go to the plantation and also was telling Chakor that it's so heartwarming that the pregnant ladies are given the privilege to work as per their convenience and to rest in the wooden swings and rocking chairs and their new borns are taken care of in the crche attached, so they are able to wean the babies.. They were blessing and was surprised that Raaghav knows the difficulties of the pregnant woman and infact the rival companies were eyeing them too much...

Chakor smiled to herself... Kaaka looked at her and said bitiya you have shaped the diamond beautifully.

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It was five months... just a month more but she was literally missing him way too much... Infact she could not manage his absence...

It was the usual evening and the boys spoke to him and asked him to buy so many things and his princesses were calling him and kissing the phone screen. She put the kids to sleep...

She spoke to him holding on to herself, asking him to take care of himself. She realized he was also breaking down...he got another call on his room landline.. the mobile signal was getting disturbed... He could not speak to her but put his call on hold but which was actually recording and went to attend the other call.. She thought her call was disconnected so left the phone without her switching off...

It was two days after her call...

the boys were at the school and the girls were playing with Girija and the Mansion staff

She was in the terrace... looking at the sky and the trees down...

Though being bold, brave but sometimes the missing of the loved ones breaks one way too much... Eversince she came back Raaghav had been just too too glued with her and had never left her even for a day but to go to the plantation. She knows she was the one who had sent him for the business purpose but ... The absence was somewhat making her depressed... feel low... Something was cringing. As months went by it was becoming difficult for her.

She was overwhelmed in his love and also with the boys but this distance suddenly brought her unknown fears... something missing... she was crying, unable to control...Its been just two years now after her return but unknown fears were setting in... she was getting scared though everything was fine...

Closing her eyes. she said to herself, Raaghav please come back fast, I don't know how I will manage the next month... I am missing you so much Raaghav, I know I may sound stupid but I am unable to be without you... She cried a lot.

She went closeby to the picture in their room rested her head on his chest with tears flowing down...

Raaghav, please come back...

Came those strong arms around her holding her tight... embracing her...

Maidam... She jerked, she opened her eyes to see the picture... But lo He was there. Her Raaghav was there... She blinked her eyes... No no how can it be... am I dreaming... But yes its him, she saw him smiling looking into her eyes...

Raaghav, she hugged him... touched his cheeks... is it... is ... It really you!!! Am I hallucinating... She cried smiled... Really Raaghav ...

He smiled kissing her forehead, yes Maidam, my Queen its me, your budda, your Raaghav, your paagal... She went into him crying more... I missed you too much Raaghav... she just jumped and hugged him. Hugged him crushing him. She was hugging him as though if she leaves him she may wither away... I love you Raaghav... she cried... Kissing him on his cheek... Smiling...

Coming to reality she asked but how come you are here, how did you come? When did you board the flight...

Why???

Arey Maidam... How did I come???? And Why???

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She spoke to him holding on to herself, asking him to take care of himself. She realized he was also breaking down...he got another call on his room landline.. the mobile signal was getting disturbed... He could not speak to her but put his call on hold but which was recording and went to attend the other call.. She thought her call was disconnected so left the phone without her switching off...

He switched on his phone...

Her eyes was opening wide, tears, feeling shy, crying as she heard it.

She was lying beside the phone crying...talking

Raaghav I am missing you way too much!!! I am unable to even live properly. I may sound stupid but I am feeling so scared and depressed too... Kaaka is taking care of everything, the workers are doing fine but, I donot know, I am unable to express, I am feeling so low without you.

Raaghav I realise I just cannot live without you even for a temporary period of time. She cried. Every day is becoming difficult for me, I suddenly feel I am loosing you. May be this is psychological as I was away from everyone for the past ten years. But sach mey I am unable to be without you Raaghav. I am feeling scared that somebody is taking you away from me... I know you have a month more I know it is important but I am unable to hold myself...I am so sorry!!! I know you cannot hear me... But I want you back Raaghav...

Raaghav please come back to me... I love you too much she cried...and slept on the phone...

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So... she asked him...So you left everything and came... why didn't you tell me. You are very bad, how can you leave the course like that and come... what will kaaka think? How will we manage the business norm...what will happen to the new process? Is it the way you behave... on on on went the Gyandevi...

Arey Maidam... He said... arey listen to me... arey... he just held her close to him tight, holding her cheeks and just placed his lips on hers...kissing her, rubbing her back...drawing her close to him... hmmm ... she sublimed... Looking into his eyes... Drawing her lips...

Budda she said...

I come all the way running and you are going on and on like an All India Radio...

Pulling her close, lifting her chin.. after listening to my Queen's cry, how can I be in that Queen's Land. Spoke to the Course people, they said the main course is completed and the next one month was only training and as we are having our own plantation, they said I don't need training and that I can follow the CD that they have given and call them for any trouble shooting online...

So spoke to Kaaka who sent my tickets... told him to keep it as a surprise... caught the next flight waving good bye to Buckingham palace to come to my Palace to meet my Queen...

He looked at her... holding her... Maidam... he was tearing himself. I too cannot be away from you. I went because you told me... I was finding it very very hard there.. I cannot live without you...

She hugged him and said Raaghav please please donot leave me hereafter. Crying into his chest. Hugging him close...

He said I will never ever leave you for when I left from here I left my soul here so was not living there but breathing there.

I love you Maidam he said...

I missed you too much they said to each other... Kissing deeply...

She said Budda never leave me!!!

Yes Maidam, I will never leave you!!! Crushing her more... Shall we he asked lusting!!!

Yesss... pushing him away...lets go bring the boys she said winking wickedly!!!

Hmm Maidammm...

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Dadddyyy came the boys running looking at the Rover... the girls had come to pick them up...the boys jumped on to his biceps for a swirl saying our daddy strongest!!!...

They were back at the mansion, Raaghav went to the plantation to meet Kaaka who was extremely happy that process could be implemented without any glitch. Chakor called Kaaka and thanked him..

The boys were so overwhelmed with their gifts and Ar hugged Raaghav and said daddy I love you, was it too cold there in London, hope it did not affect you much. He went close to his ears and said something. Raaghav felt very emotional, kissed him and said promise my son... Chakor was watching it...

The family was in their Master bedroom which was huge on the top floor...

Raaghav was in the centre of the bed while the boys were in his sides hugging him asking him various questions about London and the roses both were on him sitting on his stomach and kissing his face smiling giggling playing with their soft toys... While the Queen was looking at this bliss sitting beside them on the bed...She was thanking all the gods to guard this happiness of her family...

She was looking at him with all smiles... he looked at her asking her to come closer... she came closer sitting on the head of the bed, placing Raaghav's head on her lap... kissed the boys and the girls and him on his forehead...

It was a happy night... the boys slept on him and he carried them to their rooms kissing them goodnight... Placed the girls in their mini beds in their bedrooms...


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(PS: edited as few had asked why not a peep into the demo so just added a little to spice up...😉😉... Feel free always to hammer me if need to change/edit go back to previous version)

They both went to the balcony sat on the diwan, she was resting her head on his chest, closing their eyes to enjoy the tranquility...

What did Ar say... she asked him... he said , Not to leave you all again and especially not his mumma...

He was priding holding his Queen, snaking through her waist, holding her tight and kissing her nape...

Thank you Raaghav she said...

He smiled ... Thanks should not be told by words...

Haan then how should I say she asked turning around garlanding his neck very innocently, knowing her man was lusting...

Hmmm, he lifted her holding her close to him eyes to eyes...

Placing her on the bed... kneeling beside. Eyes lusting... I will demonstrate you how to say thank you...

hhhmm..she looked at him...

Switching off the lights... pressing their bedheadrest button to pull the curtains around...and with those special dimmer lights from above it was warming more...

In a jiffy he threw away his T and scooped her tops out. she jerked...

She blushed... His adrenaline rushed... Buddaaa!!! She could not hear her own voice as her heart was fast beating... Am I ? he asked going near to her ears...You are so dam beautiful.and I missed you way too much he said brushing his lips over her neck.. teasing her a bit.. he asked am I budda? subliming in his hold she said no, My handsometa.. that made him more craving...

Kneeling beside turning her to his side... He raised a bit, pulling her up towards him... starting his demo... he invaded her mouth tilting her head with his left and holding her back with his right...and she was surprised... He was not smooth but dominating... this is something new...her eyes were closing while his tongue was taking full control of hers. She was holding on to his head for support...

Her body was heating up terribly... she saw his eyes which was fully of lust, passion and desire, red and dark...

His wanting was evident. His torso was squeezing her hard, hands brushing her back. She felt eclectic... She has not seen so much of desire in his eyes... She soon realized that the poet this time is not going to write a melody or a meloncholony but going to be Rustic and she was wanting it... something new... she wanted him to love her in his way... Not the usual way where her comfort was his priority. This was electric, eclectic...

The distance and the missing was making him go crazy about her and that phone call made him proud that his maidam wants him, loves him, crazily, madly and he felt happy about it...

She was wanting breath but she did not push him for she allowed him to love her his way. He realized it and slowly brought her down... placing her on the bed... Eyes straight into hers... His voice so hoarse and aroused... I love you, love you loads loads Maidam he said...kissing, sucking and biting her.. I love you too Raaghav she said... Is it hurting you..he asked... she placed her lips on his and eyes half closed... Nooo... have me in your way... she was liking this aggressiveness.

He smiled at her with lust... How is my sample demo he asked very seductively.. Rustic...Rowdy... she said...but..she tried to say something... he closed her in getting into his next action...saying...don't worry for this Rustic Rowdy has made preparations to be responsible too... Winking, kissing her harder...turning her around the ways he wanted to...and she was yielding into his ways ... I know how to handle our MOODS..😉

For sure the Rowdy was writing his new poetry but this time it is not a melody or melancholy but rustic, spicy with responsibility..😃.

The curtains were completely closed around...😳

All I could hear was their moans and kisses...as things was becoming too hawtie 😉 It was fire, passion, the missing taking over them...he was devouring her in his love...

Distance makes love more stronger, harder more and more... Let them sublime in that...

(He was way too happy, feeling proud of him as he realized that his love has overwritten her past love for he vowed himself to give all the happiness in life that she deserves... He promised to himself... I will never ever leave you Maidam for you are my life...and I have no life without you...)

Tan tan tannn.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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God bless you sumi!!!!😳
After all the crap today, this was so much needed👏👏

It's like an oasis in the desert... loved this simple story... was missing your fictional family way too much.

His surprise coming back is the best of the lot...

Not to forget the demo... even I want to see it😭😭

When will we get meejay together yaar!!! You keep writing dear because other than that there is no solace.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you so much dear...
For me..its my new udaan...
U know the heart of meejayians very well ..
So please update chapters when you get time dear.. 😊👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear 🤗
I knew its Mean on my part to wish you write more on them, knowing that you write only when you miss them a lot.

but thanks for this dear.

Loved it.

when phone was on recording and she thought it got disconnect, we knew something is going to brew up there, he going to land up before her but then I wanted to read the emotions of them and how you had make them travelled to that stage and as always it was beautiful.

When his Queen needs him how can he be in Queensland, wah, rhyming one Sumi, I miss your mast titles and post on Sukor/Ragkor dear.

chakor scene with Arjun. lovely, first time I visualised this more than RagKor.

And then coming back to RagKor scene, do I have to say, you know I would love it. the surprise, the emotions, the terrace scene everything.

And then the final family moment in bed to their own world moment with curtains closing😉 i loved all.

I like how you blend and have both family moments and personal Ragkor moments in your writings.


Edited by LuvSSever - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sritama for the insta comment

Amidst all d heartbreaks n gloom&doom a beautiful,blissful solaceo 😳😳😳oved it immensely❤️thank u so much Sumi di 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks so much Sukor 123 for your lovely comment on Twitter

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Hi just read ur new RagKor story on India forum it,s short but so amazing & sweet and it was much needed because after watching tomorrow flashback I am really disturbed but thanks to u for this amazing RagKor story plz keep writing dear


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 77nikita

God bless you sumi!!!!😳

After all the crap today, this was so much needed👏👏

It's like an oasis in the desert... loved this simple story... was missing your fictional family way too much.

His surprise coming back is the best of the lot...

Not to forget the demo... even I want to see it😭😭

When will we get meejay together yaar!!! You keep writing dear because other than that there is no solace.


Nikkiii 🤗

thanks for your blessings😊

yes my misssing blended with my fic family tooo... my head was pounding yday so just middle of night did this posted without rereading ...

Yes Budda has always surprises na when she thinks he has to be there na!!!

Demo 😆😆 shhh !!!!!

Meejay together oh god dont tell me my had starts

never been so crazy about anyone ...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayur123

Thank you so much dear...

For me..its my new udaan...
U know the heart of meejayians very well ..
So please update chapters when you get time dear.. 😊👏


Thanks so so much Ayur

We Meejayans are always . Loads of love to you sweetheart 🤗

Sure will update atleast to bring some solace but emotional me (you know me by now) 😃

Me dumbo about ideas... share some if you have let me rake my brain around... 😆

thanks for that lovely line which makes me feel proud too (hehe) NEW UDAAN .




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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi dear 🤗

I knew its Mean on my part to wish you write more on them, knowing that you write only when you miss them a lot.

but thanks for this dear.

Loved it.

when phone was on recording and she thought it got disconnect, we knew something is going to brew up there, he going to land up before her but then I wanted to read the emotions of them and how you had make them travelled to that stage and as always it was beautiful.

When his Queen needs him how can he be in Queensland, wah, rhyming one Sumi, I miss your mast titles and post on Sukor/Ragkor dear.

chakor scene with Arjun. lovely, first time I visualised this more than RagKor.

And then coming back to RagKor scene, do I have to say, you know I would love it. the surprise, the emotions, the terrace scene everything.

And then the final family moment in bed to their own world moment with curtains closing😉 i loved all.

I like how you blend and have both family moments and personal Ragkor moments in your writings.



Umaaa need the huggs yaaar!!!


No you are not mean... but you know me very well... sumi and her emotional baggage.

The thing I love the most in you is that you pick which I wrote with my heart in yes right the ChaArj scene... thanks for that

sumi and titles he he you and nikki always like my wierd titles...

he he about the phone call... hope it was logical...

yes I love the ficfam so much now... I have a poster which I love the most in my room... If you love somebody show it! its a small boy surrounded by four lovely puppies ...

Image result for poster if you love show it



i am not sure if it is visible.. Uggghhh its not showing... 😭. so I imagine my budda with these four puppies around...but with his Queen its always behind the closed curtains😊😉


Thanks for loving it dear...

Love you loads Big beary hug...


Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello dear. ..
Can u write about raghav loving caring play time with his two princess . .Along that sideway romance with his queen
Edited by Ayur123 - 6 years ago

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