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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#451

Are you still taking questions about CAY?

If so, then here is my question:

Why didn't Suraj tell Imli that he found the girl he loves?

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Are you still taking questions about CAY?

If so, then here is my question:

Why didn't Suraj tell Imli that he found the girl he loves?

Maithu

SOme of your answers to others were to my questions in my mind so i will not ask again. But yes i had the same Why didn't Suraj tell Imli that he found the girl he loves? as meshmesh.

thanks maithu

Hey i know you are busy with so many stories.

But are you still SEARCHING

as I am waiting for that.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#453

Good Morning! Afternoon! Evening!

As I said before; Until the end of August, the sessions are for full week and not just week-ends!

If I end one chat session and you want to add something, you can, no problem buddies!

And coming to CAY!

It's all open until Sunday! LOL

So you can still answer or suggest titles or ask questions!

Whenever I get time, I will come back to you all!

Thank you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Hi maithu

-If I were Chakor and Suraj behaved with me like that, I'll be shocked and horrified. I'd leave the house instantly, if this wasn't possible then I'd tell him to stop and I'd probably end up locked in my room while he's at home to avoid him.

-Shock and disbelief for unexpectedly meeting her, happiness and relief for finally finding her. Then I'd think of what to do next.

-I'd reach the wrong conclusion. I'd cry a lot and blame myself and Suraj and get angry on him.

Hey dear!

Liked all your replies and your views!

I just imagined this Chakor and Suraj doing things as you mentioned and I don't know why but I got a smile on my face about their reactions LOL

Thank you dear for answering!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#455

@meshmesh

Yup buddy!

I'm not only taking questions but also title suggestions and remarks if there are any!

Interesting question and a difficult one!

>> Why didn't Suraj tell Imli that he found the girl he loves?

With Chakor's reentry in his life, I think his full focus was on her and her only.

An example of that is the time when she game to his office to sign the contract.

He even moved all the meetings and did whatever he can to get to be with her and the timing of everyone going somewhere was just perfect for him.

Moreover Imli was so busy in her own life and Suraj in his own.

The interactions between them became more formal with time as Chakor was there(Suraj wasn't in Friend mood but Blackmailer/Lover mood LOL)

As I wrote the story, I just played a small logic of SR in here which is the mysterious MAN.

I can just say what could be the reason for not telling and when he comes here, you can ask him directly ;-)

Reasons:

- Chakor

LOL

I don't even know if this is 10% of what you were waiting to know!

Let me know your view on this reply!

Thank you dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Maithu

SOme of your answers to others were to my questions in my mind so i will not ask again. But yes i had the same Why didn't Suraj tell Imli that he found the girl he loves? as meshmesh.

thanks maithu

Hey i know you are busy with so many stories.

But are you still SEARCHING

as I am waiting for that.

Hey!

Just now replied to that question as the person who wrote the story!

For more details, ask HIM when he comes! LOL

I started to write SEARCHING!

It's just that WWW was on the list and there is XRH that I just wrote 100-200 words and TTW, that I didn't start yet LOL!

So this is how it's going to be :

- TTW with KN's POV for Friday maxi

- SEARCHING before end of next week

- WWW as said on Monday

- XRH in 2-3 weeks and before that SP-2 will be out

A small list but a lot of things to do!

See you dear!

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: maithu_

Hey!

Just now replied to that question as the person who wrote the story!
For more details, ask HIM when he comes! LOL

I started to write SEARCHING!
It's just that WWW was on the list and there is XRH that I just wrote 100-200 words and TTW, that I didn't start yet LOL!
So this is how it's going to be :

- TTW with KN's POV for Friday maxi
- SEARCHING before end of next week
- WWW as said on Monday
- XRH in 2-3 weeks and before that SP-2 will be out

A small list but a lot of things to do!

See you dear!

Thanks Maithu

Take your time.

Thanks for the reply...

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Thanks Maithu

Take your time.

Thanks for the reply...

Hey! It's entirely my pleasure that you are liking my writings!

And it's thanks to you all that I'm going with 19 stories!

So thank you to you all!

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: maithu_
@meshmesh

Yup buddy!
I'm not only taking questions but also title suggestions and remarks if there are any!

Interesting question and a difficult one!

>> Why didn't Suraj tell Imli that he found the girl he loves?

With Chakor's reentry in his life, I think his full focus was on her and her only.
An example of that is the time when she game to his office to sign the contract.
He even moved all the meetings and did whatever he can to get to be with her and the timing of everyone going somewhere was just perfect for him.
Moreover Imli was so busy in her own life and Suraj in his own.
The interactions between them became more formal with time as Chakor was there(Suraj wasn't in Friend mood but Blackmailer/Lover mood LOL)

As I wrote the story, I just played a small logic of SR in here which is the mysterious MAN.
I can just say what could be the reason for not telling and when he comes here, you can ask him directly ;-)

Reasons:
- Chakor
- Chakor
- Chakor

LOL

I don't even know if this is 10% of what you were waiting to know!
Let me know your view on this reply!

Thank you dear!

Thanks maithu, the reply makes perfect sense. Suraj is a person who'll get what he wants, so imagine finding Chakor after all these years and realizing that she too loves him. It's no surprise that he had no time for anyone else.

I like the other reason too, after Suraj helped his friend, there became a barrier between them. It's difficult to share things about his love life with her as that would imply she's a burden to him and the fact that Chakor is her sister further complicated things. I suspect he didn't want her to interfere between him and Chakor, their love belonged to them only.

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#460

Hello Maithu.😊..I will not be sorry for being late.[.dont expect it from me]😛

Ok,coming to this session,I said that I will not ask anything,coz this story has REALLY clicked me,and I have my own theories for everything...😳

so my remarks-😃

I have already posted my comments on the story,[a essay afterall]😆,so will be keeping it here short

Thank you for writing this CRAZY story for a CRAZY reader,giving me my CRAZY Suraj,...

yes,these are the kind of stories that can drive Rabbi CRAZY.😳

I really,really liked this story,for this story is modelled on the concept of BREAKFREE,what is love,if it does'nt gives you a feeling of high,that does'nt compels you to come out from your comfort zone,that does'nt brings out your 'it' side,that does'nt makes you forget the world,that does'nt makes you forget societal norms and logic.

IN MY OPINION IF YOU LOVED THIS CRAZY WAY,THEN YOU REALLY LOVED.

the way Suraj and Chakor[somewhat] has loved in this story.

Do write some more stuff like this...⭐️

very well done for this.👏

coming to your questions-

What will be my thoughts on Suraj?

well one thing is for sure,even if he was an evil personality,I could have never hate him,its very tough to make Rabbi hate Suraj😳

If Suraj had been really married to Imli,then also behaved with Chakor this way,I would have still been impressed with him...😎

marriage to me is not any religious set of rituals or sign on a stamped paper,or just sleeping together in one bed,My only criteria for marriage is THE CONSENT OF HEART,rest does'nt really matters.

Even if Suraj would have been married with Imli,I know that his heart is with Chakor,he has those feelings only for her,and he is just a husband in name of Imli.

So my thoughts for Suraj would have been unchanged,I can never ever doubt or question his love for Chakor.❤️

What would have been my thoughts on Suraj and Chakor?

For Chakor,Suraj and Imli are a married couple,she does.nt knows much more than this,so for her they both are living their life of marital bliss,witnessing all these,if Chakor would have still advanced for Suraj,then it would have been really immoral and disgusting,and inhuman.😡

It would have been a sure-short home breaking,I would not have withstood it.

But if Chakor was somehow well aware of the truth behind their marriage,or Suraj's feelings[just as he was through his diary],then if Chakor would have advanced and do whatever with Suraj,then it was perfectly fine..😳.In fact I would have enjoyed it.

It would have been really interesting to read,a girl hearing her inner calling and making things fall in place,her way...😉

For the second set of questions-

[very tough to answer from my perspective,coz never in my life I have encountered even a fraction similar situation that you mentioned]😆😛

What would be my reactions and actions?[being Chakor]

first of all,that scene was really very amazing,the game began from there

Ok,If I would have been Chakor's place,at first everything would have been gone blackout for me,then I would have felt very nice[after all he is my dream man],but that would have been for less than a minute.😕

Then I would have pushed him hard,went straight to my room and cry my heart out...😭

It would have been a battle inside me-the feeling would have been of-

PEACE-after all the world in his arms is a different world altogether,and it feels magical,and I always wanted this.

PAIN-but this was really not meant to happen this way,and after all he does'nt belongs to me,so what if want to be his belonging.🥺

What could be my thoughts?[being Suraj]

I am like Suraj in many ways...😎

So my thought on seeing her would be-oh fate,so you are not as harsh as I think you to be,finally she is here,and this is my chance to 'DO OR DIE',and being the person that I am,I am certainly not going to die without her,so I will definitely do,...😉

do things my way,which has to from an unconventional method..

The game of love has begun,and I have to win it...Its the almighty way of telling me that she belongs to me,otherwise she would'nt have been here...😳

What could have happened If I was in Chakor's place the moment I got up with headache and see the disaster in the room?

I would have only cried,cried as if there is no tomorrow,with all my might..teared my hair,banged my head on the wall

And I would have definitely planned his murder in that very moment.😈

coming to the title-

I have thought of two,[and I really did'nt liked the one you said,its just not feeling good]

my titles are-

1.BEING CRAZY TOGETHER

2.LIFE IS CRAZY WITH YOU

so,did I made myself clear😊

Edited by KUTUR - 8 years ago