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Naya

@Thahaanfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

hi guys it's Naya, it's been ages scince I've come here but it's feels good to be back , and I'm back with a few new story's I will post them and I hope u all enjoy them too .

A new era

This story has the same udaan characters but no one is like their udaan character, this story revolves around 5 sisters and their dad bhuvan sareen unfortunately kasturi died when giving birth to Chakor. Chakor, Imli, Ragini, Chunni and Alisha are the 5 sisters . Ragini is married to Chagan, Alisha is married to someone called Rahul. Chakor , imli and Chunni are not yet married. Then the Rajvanshi family are introduced and there's Suraj Rajvanshi and vivaan Rajvanshi and kamal Narayan and tejaswani and ranjana(who has a secret that no one knows about will be revealed in the upcoming episodes)

Chapter 1- The Entry

Imli, Chakor and Chunni are sleeping in one room and Chunni wakes up first an tries to wake Chakor and imli but they are too busy sleeping so she goes to get water to pour on them but ragini comes and pulls her ear for fun and says to her "having fun without me" Chunni says "sorry di, get some water and help me wake these two up" ragini goes to get water and then they both pour water on Chakor and imli who wake up but roll off the bed and pull out water guns , they already knew that they were gonna pour water on them , they have a water fight and everyone is wet apart from Chakor and imli because they didn't let water get on them then Alisha walks inside the room and everyone attacks her with water they all run outside when they see that kamal Narayan is present with his 2 sons Suraj and vivaan all the sisters run back inside but imli and Chakor run out of a different room and into the hall where bhuvan is showing kamal Narayan family the house , kn and bhuvan are close friend and they want to become relatives , Chakor and imli go to look for the sisters and don't realise that kamal Narayan is there and he goes with bhuvan to another room but Suraj and vivaan come out of the room and go to look for their dad however Chakor is about to slip and she bumps into Suraj and he holds her with one hand wrapped around her waist and the other holding her hand they have an intense eye lock and for Suraj it's love at first sight, imli also comes but trips and she stumbles vivaan holds her but slips due to water and they fall on the floor and have an eye lock.

Edited by Thahaanfan - 8 years ago

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Chapter 2

Suraj is holding Chakor and staring deeply into her eyes and so is Chakor , imli and vivaan get up after their eye lock and they part , Sukor realise the position and Suraj helps Chakor to stand straight imvaan go somewhere to talk and then Chakor then says to suraj "who are you"(Chakor doesn't know that he is kn son) Suraj says "Suraj Narayan Rajvanshi" chakor bursts out laughing Suraj says "what are u laughing at" Chakor says "you, you are Suraj Narayan Rajvanshi, no way your his duplicate, a handsome , kind loving, caring, strong person like Suraj Rajvanshi won't be at my house" Suraj says " look , I am Suraj Rajvanshi " Chakor says "listen mr duplicate, don't try and act smart with me", Ragini and Chunni reach to the terrace and they shout "oh my god, Suraj Rajvanshi" Chakor says "what's wrong with you guys , he isn't Suraj Rajvanshi he is his duplicate" they say "no he is Suraj Rajvanshi" just then kamal Narayan comes to the terrace and says "Suraj" everyone turns and Chakor realises that she made a big mistake , everyone goes downstairs to eat dinner and Suraj goes behind her and says in her ear " so now do u believe that I'm Suraj Rajvanshi janglee Billi" he smiles and Chakor smiles and gets shy at this she pushes him and makes her way down Suraj follows and they sit opposite each other when they are eating their dinner, Suraj stares at Chakor and eats a chilli and he starts coughing Chakor offers water and Suraj takes it and then everyone finishes eating and they go to the living room and in reveals that imli is to get married to vivaan and Suraj to Chakor but Sukor do not know this as they weren't present, Suraj is following Chakor and teasing her as she thought he was duplicate , he says "so u think I'm a handsome kind loving , caring , strong person" Chakor says "listen mr duplicate" "I'm not a duplicate" "ok fine , look I didn't say that.. I mean ... Well...Actually" Chakor couldn't form a sentence and Suraj hold her from behind and says " say it straight that you like me" Chakor says " oh really" Suraj says " yes really , shall I tell you something" Chakor says "what" and he says "I really like you" and he kisses her cheek" Chakor is shocked she gets shy and hugs Suraj then she runs to her room, Suraj smiles at this and vivaan comes to call him to say that they are leaving , but kamal Narayan announces that they will be staying here for some time till vivaan and Suraj go back to College, imli and Chakor are happy and watching from the balcony above and then their dad says "Chakor, imli go to sleep as you have college tomorrow and make sure Chunni is asleep too , it's already late" "yes papa, goodnight" Chakor says and they smile at the boys and leave to go to sleep but Chakor doesn't sleep she goes into her study and reads her book, but Suraj is wandering around the house and sees the study room light on he creeps inside to find Chakor sitting on the sofa with a book in her hands and she's eating crisps, suddenly her dad calls "chakoriya" and Chakor jumps from the sofa and hides her crisps and book and runs as fast as she can to her room and gets into bed her dad sees that she is asleep and goes , Chakor goes back to the study to find her book gone , Suraj comes and says "looking for something" Chakor says "yeah my book.." He holds it up and says "this" "Suraj give it" he holds it up so high and Chakor trips and falls on the sofa on top of Suraj and they have an eye lock , Suraj says "your really beautiful" Chakor says "shut up and give me my book" " oh not very romantic" Suraj gets up and helps Chakor up but he doesn't let go of her he says "I will let u go when u say that u like me too" Chakor says "listen , mr duplicate" "oh god, again with the duplicate" Chakor says "listen mr duplicate , I like you " Suraj is shocked and happy he hugs Chakor and she hugs too and then Ragini is at the door and says "Chakor don't you college tomorrow" Sukor jump at the sound of her voice and Ragini tells Chakor to go to bed " Suraj and Chakor say goodnight to each other and then they go into their rooms and start to talk on the phone and they talk all night.