Kidnapped Lover Sukor part 14 pg 29 - Page 12

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

Brilliant updates...

Yr u r awesome writer...❤️
Those emotional scenes i just love them...😳
Sukor connection OMG killing...
I m very curious about what is inside that place that SR was giving so much precautions...😲
He saw his family's murderer...OMG...waiting anxiously for the next update...plzzz give update soon yr...😳


Hey Haya thank you , i dont know about awesome writer but am a damn lazy writer and m sorry for that
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: malarmia

Blushy, I am a fan of yours.

Loving your updates.
Both your stories are great.
You came back with a bang!
Please update soon.


Thank you Mala🤗 i'd kick myself if i was a reader though but thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maithu_

After almost 1 month! I'm reading this LOL

Lovely update dear!
The war of words and actions is just amazing as always and getting better each time!
Love it!
Waiting eagerly for the next update to see what Suraj is upto and how Chakor will react for the situations!
:-)


You're reading it after 1 month and i am updating after a month so we are even i guess😆

Thank you for having read and liked
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 8

The lighting inside were luxurious but the dim light of the mansion made them feel safer than there it felt like something badly sinister in the air and just like he felt , Suraj saw the person he expected the least infront of him, his eyes fixed on Chakor, the man who ruined his family, the man who actually defiled his mother when he was just in the next room, he felt like the ground slipped from his feet , his face pale like he's been sucked off all his blood and his grip over Chakor's back tightened, "NO WAY" was all what slipped from his mouth

Chakor wanted to wringle out of his grip but then as she followed his gaze , her eyes fell on the man who had his eyes staring at her with an evil smile... not just evil but it was something which made her shiver unwantedly. Without knowing she advanced further in Suraj whom she could feel had gone stiff next to her

"Suraj my boy what a pleasant Surprise i did not know you'd be here" The man who seemed to be around his sixties spoke but something about his tone told to Chakor he'd know Suraj would be there

It took Suraj a moment to get over the painful flashbacks occuring in his mind perhaps the certain person who kept on digging herself in his embrace helped calming him in ways he wasn't known of

"Malhotra i thought this meeting was going to be held by Mr Khanna" He knew better than to let the enemy know his feelings, Mr Malhotra was the father of his aunt Ranjana who married his poor weakling of an uncle for reasons best known to her before she was killed by the not soo weakling for sleeping with his brother , he did not know who was greater criminal there Mr Malhotra, his father or his uncle... definitely Malhotra who was tapping on his nerves by licking his lips while looking at Chakor, the more reason for him to curse himself for bringing Chakor to that Party

He knew that place was going to be dangerous but with that monster in disguise the danger was multiplied by a thousand times

"who is this" Malhotra shamelessly ran his eyes over the new fun find of Suraj , he knew that guy was too smart for his own good so everyone knew about him hosting that party everyone except Suraj for the one who ruled most of the underworld he had to be protected

His low tone almost a moan made Chakor want to throw up directly at the man's face , she had had faced sexual assaultion in the past and the man was driving past bad memories back, without him even touching her she could feel his dirty hands on her and she turned her face to Suraj wishing she could scream to lets leave at his face

"She's my woman for the night" He said looking down at Chakor with a lustful gaze tightening his hand on her waist almost telling her silently to go with the flow but not being experienced and being used to his crude language she took the worst out of it and wished to be broken apart

"she's quite Fiesty may i say must be really good in bed" as soon as his words reached Suraj's eyes his hands ached to smash the face of the spoker but he calmed himself knowing the plan he had , it was much bigger than throwing a punch at the bas***d's face

"She is" He said smirking and dragging a reluctant Chakor to the dance floor where a slow tone was playing whose face said she was about to burst at both him and the pervy oldie

"the heck you think you are doing?????" she said attempting her hand out of his but he only pulled her in his arms digging his face in her neck

"hold still and pretend you are dancing" He whispered in his ears for the audience it may look as though he was kissing her and her flushed face crossed the doubts if any

"Stop it , i would have killed that jerk hadn't you pulled me out the hell he thinks of himself that tumbling old monument" She cursed making him grin, only she can abuse a gangster to be a tumbling old monument

"Shut it and play it along you promised to make it up just be calm Chakor" He said authoritatively, he hated the girl but if she was to die it would be by him not by that filthy pedophile

Soon he moved to the soft ballroom music syncing himself to Chakor's body along with it , twirling her before dipping her down letting his hand caress her hairs to her ears, Chakor could only gulp at the swiftness of his moves, she wasn't a dancer but he seemed like an amazing one for making up for her clumsiness and lack of grace along with his moves , she could only admire his sharp jawline as he dipped her but soon her admiration vanished as she felt a pinch on her ears

"you better let your hand go off me before i kick your junk point infront of all these people" rolling his eyes he chose to ignore her glaring face who inspite of angry seemed like an innocent little girl amongst a pack of wolf

"Adi???? Do you receive me" he spoke against Chakor's neck again to others it might seem he was nuzzling in her neck , he relaxed as he heard Adi's response in his ears

"Adi listen to me, this was a mislead it's not Khanna's dispatch... it's Malhotras" He said expecting that gasp which came in return

Chakor stayed calm for once noticing the faint blutooth in his ears but she was still dying with curiosity on the inside, who was these people , who was that Malhotra and why was Suraj so comprehensive, he seemed to be more tense than her at that Old sac of shit's appearance

"Abort the whole damn thing Suraj , Chakor is still there with you right???" Adi asked hastily knowing the exact scenario of that place

He raised his eyes looking at the girl in his arms who moved clueless to the danger awaiting and unwantedly his heart skipped a beat why? he had no idea , when Malhotra looked at her with his sinful gaze he wanted to drag her out of this place and protect her from every trouble something he experienced only for his mother and sister that too it's been 10 years since he actually cared , this girl was reviving his dead heart and it was a change he wasn't liking at all

"i can't do that adi... it's hard to get my grip on Malhotra i am not risking it we are going with the damn plan just get your team ready" As he spoke a third voice cut in

"May i join you?" A girl gladly dressed in a blood red balldress to Chakor it seemed why did she even bother to put on the little cloth, she could have walked naked and not make a single difference

"Tina!!!" Suraj acknowledge with a tight lipped smile , the girl approached him ignoring the presence of Chakor wrapping his arm around his letting him get a wiff of her expensive perfume which felt not soo appealing compared to the natural fragance of the adamant girl named Chakor

"You mind if i borrow my ex lover in bed??" She finally acknowledged Chakor who only shrugged in return leaving the dance floor showing she cared the least while she did... why will she care for that half naked model to dance with Suraj? that tina could strangle him with her soo called skinny dress and see if she cared

She crossed her hands looking at the two dance on the floor cozily, Convenient Suraj must've had forgotten about his plan too while dancing with his ex lover in bed, she was frustrated and it turned into a raging fire when the jerk in question stood next to her almost trying to grind into her as she moved away almost immediately

Suraj could see all of that from the dance floor but if he left Tina for Chakor they'd know she's important and it will endanger her even more than she's already so he pretended to be least bothered

"I'd be glad if you kept your hands with you, i'd be heartbroken if i happen to raise my hands on an old man, you see i wasn't raise to disrespect oldies" She replied sassily maintaining her distance from the old man who only chuckled in response

"I may be old hun but i can rock your world better than that kid can" Malhotra said running his finger along the gold rim of his flute glass causing her to cringe in disgust , did that old man really say what she think she heard

"You Eff..." she was about the curse his arrogance off his filmsy body when Suraj interupted her wrapping his arm around her waist

"May i join the fun??" Suraj replied acting unknown to the scene

"Yeah i was actually proposing something to your date, she reminds me of someone you know, someone who used to be as fiesty reluctant and desiring" Malhotra smirked looking at the boy's face paled, soo much for acting like the big bad gangleader, Suraj had soo much to learn , he was still a kid

" Oh i am sure this case shall be different since This woman here is a woman of her own" Suraj replied knowing very well of whom did Chakor reminded him of much to his displease

"what about the assignment for which we are here??" Suraj asked diverting the issue

"The assignment Suraj will be given to the one who has a much more important asset to trade" Malhotra said keeping his eyes on Chakor causing Suraj to curse himself harder, he still had time he could have given up everything and left the premises with Chakor while things was still down but blinded by his past and anger he chose to stay

"I can give you the amount you ask for don't forget i have the whole azadganj in my grip... what do you want??" Chakor looked at him in disbelieve , was that assignment soo important?? He was ready to give up any amount

"Any amount you say???" He asked temptingly licking his lips

"yes" Suraj replied confidently

"then let's go to the meeting room i shall decide who has the most to offer me" Malhotra moved to a door expecting them to follow him along with some men who looked as sinister as he did

Unable to feel her feet move she watched Suraj advance infront of her, arching herself she held his hands back tight stopping him, she was frightened it was strangely reminding her of the night she lost everything except that night she was alone but this night she was with someone his heart wanted to rely on

He turned and looked at her hands gripping his tight almost as if it was yelling for him to protect her , locking his gaze with hers she wanted to hear words like they'd get out from there safely, she'd still be kidnapped and torturing him in his mansion , she missed the comfort of his bed even though of her nightmares

He couldn't promise her what she was asking for without uttering a single word so he broke himself apart and asked her to follow him rudely

"For your own sake, shut your mouth and don't say anything which will land you in trouble"

"i feel like i am already in trouble and its thanks to you... you're the one who brought me here you monster knowing there'd be people like that old sac of junk" She said angrily placing her hand on the cut of her neckline , she felt exposed and humiliated and he was aware of that , never in life he had made such a wrong decision but it was too late to turn back , he walked in room with Chakor trailing behind him , fixed eyes on them who belonged to people who knew about his past and was just waiting to be entertained with a repeat of history.

Edited by Blushy_Auntacid - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the lovely update
It's so so interesting and suspense filled.

The bold and beautiful with the timid beast ..

Excellent
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Posted: 7 years ago
Brilliantly dramatic.. I m loving it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome awesome awesome!
It's good to be back to forum after two weeks to read your beautiful updates, Blushy 😊😳
This is my second favourite FF, your "Not all roses" being number one!
Keep writing, dear 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update👏
Suraj's past is so dark & scary😲
Loved Chakor's attitude, Suraj is so scared for her
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update
Suraj's past is so painful
Chakor was harassed in the past too 😲
Loved feisty Chakor but the situation is very dangerous.
Hope Sukor will get out of there safely.

Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
full of thrill and suspense like a movie👏
loving it😊

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