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saniya__

@saniya__

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Amazing update and sorry for the late comments...

And I'm so sorry I would not be able to read your story or comment on it as I'm going out of station for vacations...but I'll surely read and comment as soon as I come back..

*crying* 😭

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SilverLove.

@SilverLove.

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

first part was amazing maithu di .

u r really a amazing writer

u never miss a chance to amaze us with ur amazing writing skills.

i loved the conversation between sukor very much.

but this story is four shot or five shot (i would be happy if it is a five shot)

waiting for ur next part eagerly ...

i dont have any idea how i am going to spend 3 days (waiting for ur next part) it is pretty tough😔

but i hope the next part will be long (very much)😃

you made bhuvan a hitler hahaha🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

thank u for giving us beautiful stories of sukor .😊

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Why don't u update soon sis..it was an awesome story of sukor..pls update it soon

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Sruti

@vs215blooms

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Maithu dear,... U r a sweet heart...❤️ amazing character portrayal... Luving it... Suraj s a gorilla...ohhh... Chakor s sweeto...Big boss... Hitler... Trishna... I luv everyone... Brilliant work maithu...👏 waiting for d update...😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: katheriene
Awesome it was hillarious😆
Loved sweeto & her gorilla😆
A very different version of sukor
Waiting for next

Thanks Katheriene!

You can't say Gorilla dear! She has copyright on it!😆

Will update on time!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: amrutha131
It's FABULOUS 👏
Loving Sweeto and Rajuju 😆
Waiting for next update !

Thanks Amu!

It was a difficult task to find a name which can be used to each other's leg!

Luckily got Raj from Suraj and Juju from calling a ...

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: saniya__
Amazing update and sorry for the late comments...
And I'm so sorry I would not be able to read your story or comment on it as I'm going out of station for vacations...but I'll surely read and comment as soon as I come back..

*crying* 😭

Hey dear!

No need to say sorry!

Glad you liked it!

Will PM you so you can catch up once back!

Enjoy your trip!😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: pershial
first part was amazing maithu di .
u r really a amazing writer
u never miss a chance to amaze us with ur amazing writing skills.
i loved the conversation between sukor very much.
but this story is four shot or five shot (i would be happy if it is a five shot)
waiting for ur next part eagerly ...
i dont have any idea how i am going to spend 3 days (waiting for ur next part) it is pretty tough😔
but i hope the next part will be long (very much)😃

you made bhuvan a hitler hahaha🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

thank u for giving us beautiful stories of sukor .😊

Thank u sis!

I'm just a starter in this writing thing! Your words me feel like on top of Himalaya when I'm under the oceans, taking baby steps to come out of it first.

Thanks for your lovely words!😊

Each part of this story will be pretty long (more than 2500 words) as lot of things to say.

But it will be a 4 shots.

Don't feel bad, I have a surprise for my dears!

Hope I will be liked by you all!

Yeah 3 days is long but I have few works to do!

So sorry!

Bhuvan = Hilter

KN = Sweet BB!

Nice combination!😉