OS: Daddy Cool. - Page 2

Akhi 🤗

beautiful OS , Akhila!!

Amazing OS 👏
Suraj would be a cool father I can imagine from now 😆
The cute family scenes just added the charm to this

Write another one soon Akhi(LOL I am so greedy 😆 )
Love you ❤️

amazing os
loved it so much
keep writing more

This is the best os I've read till now on this forum seriously loved every bit of it. No words to describe my appreciation for u 🤗

The way kids were troubling suraj and he was handling them was so sweet and cute. Suraj's dialogue about the gun was making me smile even wider (anyways i was smiling while reading full os)

Looking forward to read more os from you 😊 😊 😊

This os made my day 🤗

Sorry can't note more parts of this os in this comment because the whole os was incredibly written

Originally posted by: ..chotu..

Reswa🤣

unreswa😆

Hayye Akhi! Beautiful one it was I love Daddy Suraj so much❤️

Chakor is the typical commanding wife...but caring too😳. Rajath and Raima...cute little SuKor😆. I loved taht scene where Suraj tells them a story. I was imagining everything andvthis is the one I replayed again and again.😳 And last line...yaar tum galath jagah cheezein lekar chod deti ho🤣

Very well written dear. Happy one month anniversary Jaan!🤗 May you forever stay in the forum and forever stay as my cyber Jaan! Lots of love for youu. Muaahz❤️

Well I have edited thsi for 3 times now. And now it is the 4th time.🤣

Now ask why? I wanted to give you special hugs for you had to suffer your bad day. And I forgot about. I am soo sowwiiee. 😭

Time for some jaado ki jhappis...

Originally posted by: sriarshi

Akhi 🤗

U know Suraj and his kids r my most favorites and that too it is one of the best of ur writing 👏

I always love these kind of stories.. that too Suraj and his kids.. Sukor nok jhoks after marriage.. I can't tell which scene is may favorite.. Everything is so good.. so funny scenes.. poor Suraj loved how chakor gets romantic and make him to do work...daddy cool.. really he is one...

Raima and Rajat r naughty kids to naughty parents.. supermarket scene, Suraj lifting children, chakor possessive ness, suraj finding for chocolates..and bed time story wow hope I can see one day same type of scene on Suraj with his kids in serial too.. so beautiful

Please sometimes give these kind of os.. when ur free.. I always love to read without getting bored.. you know as many as u can 🤗

Thank u

Originally posted by: paridhi9797

Amazing OS 👏
Suraj would be a cool father I can imagine from now 😆
The cute family scenes just added the charm to this

Write another one soon Akhi(LOL I am so greedy 😆 )
Love you ❤️

To everyone who commented, THANK YOU SO MUCH! ❤️

Originally posted by: sumaiya10

This is the best os I've read till now on this forum seriously loved every bit of it. No words to describe my appreciation for u 🤗

The way kids were troubling suraj and he was handling them was so sweet and cute. Suraj's dialogue about the gun was making me smile even wider (anyways i was smiling while reading full os)

Looking forward to read more os from you 😊 😊 😊

This os made my day 🤗

Sorry can't note more parts of this os in this comment because the whole os was incredibly written