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sriarshi

@sriarshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Akhi 🤗

U know Suraj and his kids r my most favorites and that too it is one of the best of ur writing 👏

I always love these kind of stories.. that too Suraj and his kids.. Sukor nok jhoks after marriage.. I can't tell which scene is may favorite.. Everything is so good.. so funny scenes.. poor Suraj loved how chakor gets romantic and make him to do work...daddy cool.. really he is one...

Raima and Rajat r naughty kids to naughty parents.. supermarket scene, Suraj lifting children, chakor possessive ness, suraj finding for chocolates..and bed time story wow hope I can see one day same type of scene on Suraj with his kids in serial too.. so beautiful

Please sometimes give these kind of os.. when ur free.. I always love to read without getting bored.. you know as many as u can 🤗

Thank u

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nycgal

@nycgal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

beautiful OS , Akhila!!

Loved the family dynamics..how cute is Suraj as a dad..

Keep writing!! looking fwd to the next update..

Thanks again for ur beautiful writing

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paridhi9797

@paridhi9797

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Amazing OS 👏
Suraj would be a cool father I can imagine from now 😆
The cute family scenes just added the charm to this

Write another one soon Akhi(LOL I am so greedy 😆 )
Love you ❤️

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

amazing os
loved it so much
keep writing more

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Sumaiya_Scrible

@Sumaiya_Scrible

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

This is the best os I've read till now on this forum seriously loved every bit of it. No words to describe my appreciation for u 🤗

The way kids were troubling suraj and he was handling them was so sweet and cute. Suraj's dialogue about the gun was making me smile even wider (anyways i was smiling while reading full os)

Looking forward to read more os from you 😊 😊 😊

This os made my day 🤗

Sorry can't note more parts of this os in this comment because the whole os was incredibly written

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BreakingBlue

@BreakingBlue

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ..chotu..
Reswa🤣
unreswa😆

Hayye Akhi! Beautiful one it was I love Daddy Suraj so much❤️
Chakor is the typical commanding wife...but caring too😳. Rajath and Raima...cute little SuKor😆. I loved taht scene where Suraj tells them a story. I was imagining everything andvthis is the one I replayed again and again.😳 And last line...yaar tum galath jagah cheezein lekar chod deti ho🤣
Very well written dear. Happy one month anniversary Jaan!🤗 May you forever stay in the forum and forever stay as my cyber Jaan! Lots of love for youu. Muaahz❤️

Well I have edited thsi for 3 times now. And now it is the 4th time.🤣

Now ask why? I wanted to give you special hugs for you had to suffer your bad day. And I forgot about. I am soo sowwiiee. 😭
Time for some jaado ki jhappis...

Aww! Thank you so much Sahas! Love love love you jaan! ❤️

Hehe! This was in series (kind of) with Arriving in Nine Months and 5 Times Suraj threw his pride out the Window I felt.

I liked writing this too! 😆

(Spoiler: I don't know whether you remember my story about the Rajvanshi siblings, but Part 2 may be up soon! 😉)

And thanks for them jadoo ki jhappis! Needed them so bad! 🤗

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BreakingBlue

@BreakingBlue

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sriarshi
Akhi 🤗
U know Suraj and his kids r my most favorites and that too it is one of the best of ur writing 👏

I always love these kind of stories.. that too Suraj and his kids.. Sukor nok jhoks after marriage.. I can't tell which scene is may favorite.. Everything is so good.. so funny scenes.. poor Suraj loved how chakor gets romantic and make him to do work...daddy cool.. really he is one...

Raima and Rajat r naughty kids to naughty parents.. supermarket scene, Suraj lifting children, chakor possessive ness, suraj finding for chocolates..and bed time story wow hope I can see one day same type of scene on Suraj with his kids in serial too.. so beautiful

Please sometimes give these kind of os.. when ur free.. I always love to read without getting bored.. you know as many as u can 🤗

Thank u

Aww! Thank you so much Sri! 😊

Hehe! I'm sure you have a favourite one, think think! 😆

Suraj is now regretting the way he was when his kids are acting the same. 🤣

Aww! Sure! You can expect another one... I don't know when though! (And just PM me if you want one! I need a break sometimes from writing my FF as well!)😆

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BreakingBlue

@BreakingBlue

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: paridhi9797
Amazing OS 👏
Suraj would be a cool father I can imagine from now 😆
The cute family scenes just added the charm to this

Write another one soon Akhi(LOL I am so greedy 😆 )
Love you ❤️

Thanks Pari! ❤️

Yeah, Sukor kids would be fun to watch! 😆

Expect another one (I won't say soon though!)

Me loves you too! 🤗 ❤️

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BreakingBlue

@BreakingBlue

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

To everyone who commented, THANK YOU SO MUCH! ❤️

I would like to reply to your comments individually, but my phone. 😡

I'm glad you liked this piece! I might continue this (sort of) series if an idea pops into my head. 😆

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BreakingBlue

@BreakingBlue

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sumaiya10
This is the best os I've read till now on this forum seriously loved every bit of it. No words to describe my appreciation for u 🤗

The way kids were troubling suraj and he was handling them was so sweet and cute. Suraj's dialogue about the gun was making me smile even wider (anyways i was smiling while reading full os)

Looking forward to read more os from you 😊 😊 😊

This os made my day 🤗

Sorry can't note more parts of this os in this comment because the whole os was incredibly written

Phone problems aside, I couldn't ignore such a huge comment! 😆

THANK YOU SO MUCH! ❤️ Huge compliment there!

Aww! Nice to know you enjoyed reading this piece! I love writing since you guys love to read them! 😃

I hope I can post another one soon for you! Look forward to it! 😊