FF: All is Fair in Love. (NEW! Chapter 17!) - Page 21

Originally posted by: paridhi9797

Read both chapters(10 and 11) in one go... finally!! 🤪
I will comment for both chapters here as I hadn't done it for chapter 10 😆

CHAPTER 10- I NEED YOUR RISHAB...I don't know how ok 😳 . Suraj is so damn lucky to have such a companion really 👏
Loved Chakor's confession...it was so beautiful 👏 😳
All in all a wonderful chapter 👏

CHAPTER 11- THIS was downright funny 😆 I was laughing at some point 🤣 the part where Yuvi asks Suraj if he was going to drop him school and Suraj's proud feeling on being a father to Yuvi was so touching and beautiful that I really felt emotional
👏 n the dream proposal...it was just MAGICAL
Loved loved loved the chapter ❤️

P.S- my comments are always so long...you might feel irritated someday but I can't help it... 😆

P.P.S- thanks for such regular updates ❤️

Originally posted by: Radhika_r

awww!!!! chapter 11 was simply awesome!!👏

loved suraj-yuvi interaction!!! want more of these cuteee scenes😳

loved rishab's reaction to suraj's stay over at chakor's😆

awww!!! the last scenes with the dance was beautifully written❤️

pls pls update soon

your updates helped me get through the whole of this week as the show was a let down from point of view of suraj and sukor scenes😃

Originally posted by: ..chotu..

What a fantabulous update haan!! Tumko hazar pappiyan!!!! (why dont we have a kiss emo in IF?😡)

It was so long but worth reading and Sukor rich too. Loved every bit of it!

Suraj watching videos of proposals was so funny. Its so like me too. Kuch bhi hua, I crash on to google or youtube.😆

Ragini...she took my Rishabh. Unwaaa unwaaa😭😭

I started doing this weird thing after readingvyour update. Whenever I see Ragini now, I try to find her khoobiyan...to picture her with Rishabh. 🤣 I know, she right now plays my sautan...but kya karein...to love is to sacrifice!!😭

Loved the scene where Yuvi is excited when he knows that Papa is dropping him school. And Chakor is too cute. Not very much the teekhi mirchi types...but she has got shades of the teekhi michi...I like it.

I love the dresses too dear. Why couldnt you upload Chakor's dress? It didnt work with tumblr?

That scene where Rishabh and Yuvi run towards each other when the meet in the party...yaar baja deti TERI MERI PREM KAHANI...🤣 Hojata perfect BAAHON KI DARMIYAN...DO PYAR MIL RAHE scene🤣

Finally the dance and the dream proposal...hayee... *brain goes to sing kaash koi Suraj (ladka) mujhe pyar karta*🤣

Last main mera bada saa jaadoo ki jhappi...🤗

Jug jug Sukor likho...jug jug jeeyo cyber jaaneman!🤗

No get well soon for you...mere jaado ke jhappis are the best wishes and meds❤️..better than crocin😆

P.S - *Finally chotu arrives with a bindaas comment*🤣

Originally posted by: sriarshi

Akhila how r u feeling now 🤗

Thank u so much for long long update.. superb chapter.. loved it..u did a great job as usual dear 👏

Suraj how sweet he is.. he is taking care of chakor.. awesome ❤️

Loved his bonding with yuvi.. such a cute bonding of son and father.. hope we get such cute scenes..

Loved ur dress selection for party.. they r beautiful... rishab not leaving any chance to tease Sukor.. hope Sukor teases him with ragini in future 😆

Loved the song and ur description.. so cute.. and proposal❤️... so dreamy like how chakor wanted 😆...so beautiful

Forgot to mention Suraj searching for YouTube for proposal videos.. so apt for Suraj.. hope something like this we can get in serial too😆🤣

Take care.. write when ur well.. don't take too much stress.. 🤗

Originally posted by: maithu_

Had fun imagining Suraj seeing those videos!

Thanks a lot for this ff!🤗

Originally posted by: bluecool

Hi,

I m generally a silent member here. I read all the parts in one go. Very well written. I like it so much.

Character consistency, gripping story, all happy vibe moments..all in all found ur story perfect. 👍🏼

Please do continue.😊

Originally posted by: srividhya68

wow
great upt
loved their dresses
rishab is so damn cute
waiting for next upt
cont soon