a new sukor ss:love at first sight

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi everyone! My name is nevadedhia

I have read many sukor stories and decided to write one myself. I hope you like it!

p.s:please do not hesitate to write any comments which are rude.This is just the beginning.

Love at first sight

It was a typical day at the Rajvashi household and Ranjana and Tejaswini were fighting over small things.Vivaan couldn't contain his excitement .He was going to ask the love of his life, chakor,to marry him.On that same day,Imli asked vivaan to marry her and suraj was ready to marry chakor and chakor was ready to marry vivaan!what a strange love triangle!

chapter one :the wedding ceremony

Chakor being chakor,decided to marry suraj for imli.But, on the other hand,Imli thought that she is marrying suraj whereas vivaan thought that he is marrying chakor and suraj thought that he is marrying imli!

At the ceremony, chakor came and saw suraj and vivaan .she sat near suraj and then imli came. She thought chakor was sitting near vivaan so she sat near vivaan (actually, chakor was sitting near suraj and she was thinking that she is sitting near suraj but she was sitting near vivaan).they took the blessings and went to their rooms. What would by the reaction of imli and vivaan once they get to know that they are married to each other! Stay tuned.

Chapter 2:confusion about marriage

As soon as chakor entered suraj's room,suraj said,"aao,humara nokerani ."chakor immediately showed her face and said,"nokerani! kon hai nokerani !"
Suraj was stunned to see chakor."chakor!tu yahan...
"Ha."
Suraj quickly ran to vivaan's room
"Imli!"he shouted.Vivaan said"imli?Chakor humari patni hi hai aur imli imli tumari patni hai."
"Nahi,imli yahan hi hai."then imli showed her face.imli was surprised to see Vivaan as her pati.
What will happen next?stay tuned to find out!😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi ! ! welcome to the forum!!!pl do update ... waiting


Edited by Radhika_r - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi!😉

Looks interesting, please continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhika_r

hi ! ! welcome to the forum!!!pl do update ... waiting



thanks...shall update tomorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SofiaIshVeer

Hi!😉

Looks interesting, please continue soon... 😊


thank u😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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chapter one:the wedding ceremony


Chakor being chakor,decided to marry suraj for imli.But, on the other hand,Imli thought that she is marrying suraj whereas vivaan thought that he is marrying chakor and suraj thought that he is marrying imli!

At the ceremony, chakor came and saw suraj and vivaan .she sat near suraj and then imli came. She thought chakor was sitting near vivaan so she sat near vivaan (actually, chakor was sitting near suraj and she was thinking that she is sitting near suraj but she was sitting near vivaan).they took the blessings and went to their rooms. What would by the reaction of imli and vivaan once they get to know that they are married to each other! Stay tuned.

Edited by nevadedhia - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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looks very interesting
waiting to read more
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very sorry if my chapters are short ...will try to expand them in future
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 2:confusion about marriage
As soon as chakor entered suraj's room,suraj said,"aao,humara nokerani ."chakor immediately showed her face and said,"nokerani! kon hai nokerani !"
Suraj was stunned to see chakor."chakor!tu yahan...
"Ha."
Suraj quickly ran to vivaan's room
"Imli!"he shouted.Vivaan said"imli?Chakor humari patni hi hai aur imli imli tumari patni hai."
"Nahi,imli yahan hi hai."then imli showed her face.imli was surprised to see Vivaan as her pati.
What will happen next?stay tuned to find out!😊
Edited by Nevathegreat - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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sorry if my 2nd chapter is from Nevathegreat...it is the acount on my ipad so i wrote it there

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