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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry for the delay..had some work so did not get time to write...hope you will like the part 😊
Part 2

Pakhi walked aimlessly, she was dumbfounded. Her mind was blank. "The person who's face I did not want to see again was in front of me!" she muttered as she walked with a slow pace.Her eyes were swollen with tears,but still they did not stop rolling down her cheeks. She did not even bother to look at the people who looked at her. She wanted to shout,to cry loudly.She wanted to go to her mom and comfort herself.

On the other hand, Anshuman searched for Pakhi. "God knows where she is? I hope she won't do anything wrong". He thought as his eyes scanned the crowd. "How to tell her that I was wrong,that I regret my decision and have been looking for her since I realized my mistake?Please God help me." He wanted to find Pakhi once again and tell her everything.As he was going, one of his colleague came in front of him and he stopped. "Hey Anshuman what are you upto?Looking for someone?" The guy winked. At that moment Anshuman felt like breaking his jaws but he only said,"Yes." and made his way without listening another word from him.

Pakhi was standing on a deserted corridor,her tears were unstoppable.All the painful memories gushed out.she cried inconsolably. 'Stop it Pakhi!",she chided herself but it seemed that today nothing could stop her tears.She remembered how when she used to feel sad Anshuman would come there like an angel and would wipe away her tears.angel!Huh!he was a devil in disguise,thought Pakhi. Her cheeks were red with anger and pain.Suddenly she heard footsteps behind her."Oh God!maybe Shikha has come", Pakhi thought and felt tensed. "She might have been looking for me,I must not show my tears in front of her, otherwise she will start shooting dozens of questions at me." She hastily wiped her tears and turned to go and was alarmed to find Anshuman standing there!

Pakhi was flabbergast.He was standing and smiling. Pakhi felt her knees go weak.She lowered her eyes and muttered,"How did he know I am here?" Anshuman came forward and replied,"Just like I came to know where you were when you were a kid". She looked up at him and glared.He quickly said,"Ok Ok when you were a teenager.Happy?" Pakhi still did not stop glaring at him but he answered her by giving a pleasant smile.

"What are you doing here?" asked Pakhi. "Oh Lord,I should have asked this question,ok when you have already done that then will you kindly provide the answer for it". Anshuman said and grinned. "That's none of your business, Sir". Pakhi said brusquely and was about to go when Anshuman asked with seriousness,"Why were you crying Pakhi?"

Pakhi stopped, she clenched her fist and looked at Anshuman. Then said in a quavering voice,"You will know that better". Anshuman came closer and Pakhi stepped back.He could see the tension build up on her face.He moved back and replied,"What's this Pakhi,you think I am a fortune teller or something.How will I know why are you crying like a nursery kid. Are you missing someone?"

Pakhi looked at him with astonishment. Pakhi thought with disgust,"Its so difficult to get rid of me". She finally said nothing and ran from there but could feel Anshuman's eyes on her.He stood there for a while, then sighed,"She still hasn't changed. She is still a kid". He said to himself and smiled.

Edited by mishti_brishti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u for the update first of all... I liked the update but how i wish it was a little longer... And i m glad that i popped up here begore ur pm... 😃 pakhi was upset on seeing anshuman while he seemed different at times... Yes he wanted to meet pakhi n talk to her but his reaction on catching pakhi crying was strange... Does he really not know that she was crying bcos of him... Im kinda confused... Will wait for next eagerly 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: naina927

thank u for the update first of all... I liked the update but how i wish it was a little longer... And i m glad that i popped up here begore ur pm... 😃 pakhi was upset on seeing anshuman while he seemed different at times... Yes he wanted to meet pakhi n talk to her but his reaction on catching pakhi crying was strange... Does he really not know that she was crying bcos of him... Im kinda confused... Will wait for next eagerly 😊


thnx dear😊 well u'll get ur answer in the next update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: khuwahish

Nice... But short... 😎


yeah am very lazy...so that's y mu updts r alwys shrt😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww he thing she is kid n her all feeling abt him is her some kind of infatuation...when will he take her seriously :p...cont soon n thnk u so much fr the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Loved ur update dear!!!!Super like!!Thanks for updating and sharing it!!!!PLzz do continue soon dont make to wait for long!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Ohh nice...love to knw that wt's next...plz update soon..and if possible bit longer update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Nice work...Plz pm me when next update cums
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Fantastic plot i wonder what anshuman did that pakhi shut her self off poor soul...
Oh god he comes after and is smiling... Yaar thode understanding ho na koi tax nahi lega heheheh
Poor thing is upset and hes smiling...
Please update and pm please
Much appreciated xx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome + emotional update , u describe pakhi inner termoil in perfect way , hope in future atleast anshuman understand what h done with pakhi in past , waiting or nxt part , continue soon
* sorry for late comment busy in xam

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