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Posted: 20 years ago
#81
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tat is all I can say 2 explain ur story😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#82
ur story is excellent continue writing plz
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Posted: 20 years ago
#83

heya rang

wowww just got arround 2 reading it reall good been buzy with exams 😭

wooww seriouslly the bush sence .....runnning with dk alll real good 😉

keep it up

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hi rang

where are you?????????????

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz write the next part soooooooooooooooon 😭

anyways keep up the good work 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#85

hi rang

plzzzzzzzzzz write ssooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn

waiting 4 your next part 😭

Cont soon,plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 20 years ago
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As Dk & Disha were having their meeting, Sumitra was thinking of away to bring them back together. So she decides to go to Suhasini first. So she calls her up.

Suhas : hello!

Sumi: Hello Suhasini ji?

Suhas: yes, who I that?

Sumi: Suhasini ji namaste. This is Dk's mother this side.

Suhas: namaste! Khiye kese phone kiya?

Sumi: I know Suhasji u must be really annoyed with me. But I apologies for what I did to ur daughter. Please understand no mother would stand her son betraying his wife.

Suhas: But Sumiji……

Sumi: I know it was my mistake because I was not aware of the truth then. But I know everything now & want to rectify me mistake.

Suhas: What do u mean?

Sumi: I mean, I know Disha is my real bahu & she was the one to take care or me & my Sunny & this house. Suhasji I want my Greh laxmi back. I've understood why my sunny was so upset all these days.

Suhas: Disha would be so happy to hear this Sumiji. Thank u so much. I'll just tell Disha bout this.

Sumi: No, no Suhasji, not now. I want to bring here back with full dignity. Before that there r certain things I need to do. For that I need ur help.

Suhas: Ok as u say. But what help can I give u.

Sumi: for that can we meet.

Suhas: where?

Sumi: can u come to the mandir at 9?

Suahas: Sure, I'll be there. Sumiji aaj ka din kitna shubh hai. Meri beti ki zindagi mein phir se khushiyan lot ayengi. Thank u so much. Namaste.

Sumi: Namaste!

AT the mandir:

Suhas: Sorry I am 10 minutes late.

SumiLsad) its ok Suhasji, I'm 25 years late & then I delayed my sons happiness too

Suhas: No, no sumiji, its ok. Even now if Dk & Disha r brought together it won't be that late.

Sumi: ur right.

Suhas: What is it u want to do now?

Sumi: Suhassji, this is true that I committed a mistake, but the basis of that mistake was Dk & Disha themselves. Had they told me the first day itself the truth things won't hv become so complicated. So now we'll get them together only after making them realize that they r very important for each other & should never make foolish decisions or else they'll loose each other once again.

Suhas: I understand that but what do we do?

Sumi: we hv to make them admit their mistake in front of us first. Then I'll throw that Poori out of the house. Only then will me Bahu come to my place so that this time there is no confusion.

They discuss their plan & then leave.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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As Disha promised DK that she will make Pori leave the Kanaka house or a day so that DK could talk to his mother Pori leaves. Now Dk decides to go to his office for abt an hr. & then come back & talk to Sumi. Meanwhile Sumi has other plans.

Dk comes back home to see that all the people who were the witness that Dk & Disha were married & Disha was the one to take care of Sumi were present in the drawing room as Dk enters there is complete silence & Sumi standing in between with a stern face. Dk is shocked & confused.

Dk : Ma what is all this?

Sumi: Shut up don't call me Ma. I'm not ur Ma.

Dk: Ma what r u saying?

Sumi: yes had I been ur Ma u won't hv hidden such abig thing from me.

Dk: MA wo…….

Sumi: I said keep quiet, I'm not going to listen to u any more now that I know the truth I've collected all these people here as witness for what is going to happen today.

Dk: what do u mean Ma?

Sumi: I mean is it not true that Disha is the Bahu of this house?

Dk: Yes Ma, I was abt….

Sumi: I am not asking or explanations I just want answer in yes or no.

Dk: Yes!

Sumi: U forced me to throw out my bahu & feel small in front of her. But now that I know the complete truth I'll bring her back so that she can live happily with her husband. But before that two people hv to leave this house.

Dk: who Ma?

Sumi: Pori………. And………..U.

Dk: what Ma? If I leave how Dish live with her husband?

Sumi: U didn't hear me I said u r not my son, he is, Sunny come out.

Naqli Dk (NDK): Thanks Dost for taking good care of my mother for so long because of her illness I couldn't tell her that I'm her real son.

Dk: what? What is happening? Ma,Ma he is not ur son I am what's wrong u don't recognize me?

Sumi: NO! ur not my son ur an imposture.

Dk: this man has told u a false story MA. Believe me I'm ur real son!

Sumi: he has not told any story all these people here identify him as my son & Disha's husband Dk Saigal. Now u get out.

Dk: Ma don't do this Ma, I don't know why r all these people lying what is happening Ma, I've already lost Disha, Kanaka empire, now ur also throwing me away. Ma what will I do? (sits down on the floor & starts crying very badly)

After a while Sumi puts her hand on his shoulder & says

Sumi: Why r u feeling bad that refused to believe that u r my son?

Dk: yes Ma because in a moment u alienated me. I waited for u to get better for so long I worked so hard to get u back & now that ur fine u refuse to believe that I'm ur real son & this guy is? I'm shattered & heart broken.

Sumi: So do u now realize what u hv done with Disha?

Dk (stops crying & ids dumbstruck) : What? What do u mean Ma?

Sumi: had u told me that day itself that Disha is ur wife not Pori all this confusion won't hv happened.

Dk: But Ma doctors had strictly said not to confront u in any way to accept every thing u say.

Sumi: So Sunny had I recognized Vedant as my son u still won't hv corrected me?

Dk: (shocked) No Ma I would hv told u so.

Sumi: Why?

Dk: because u didn't recognize any body & a proper introduction was necessary.

Sumi: then why did u not introduce Disha to me that day? She was the one to bring me back to health. She did so many sacrifices for me, u this house & in the end what did u do to her u alienated her from what ever she built with such difficulty.

Dk realizes his mistake& feels very sorry for what he did.

Dk: Ma, I'm extremely sorry. All this while I was blaming circumstances but the mistake was mine. I'm very sorry.

Sumi: So realize ur mistake?

Dk: yes Ma.

Sumi: so r u ready to give Disha what is rightfully hers?

Dk: Yes Ma, infact…..aaaaaaaaa…..I ……aa…..love Disha very much (blushes) and I had come to talk to u about this.

Sumi: Don't worry very soon Disha would be back. We'll bring her back with full pride & honor. But before that we need to throw away Pori who is now an unwanted guest.

Dk: You r right Ma. Thank u Ma. I'm sorry once again.

Everybody else including NDK Congratulate Dk . Dk & Sumi thank them all.

Watch out for next part to know what happens to Disha in Bhonsle house?

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Posted: 20 years ago
#88

👏👏hi rang

welcome back......

keep it upp👏👏👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
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NEXT PART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE HURRY!!!😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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oh wow wat a gr8 story plz do continue soon!!! will b waitin for next part!

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