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Posted: 20 years ago
#51
were are you????
waiting 4 your next scenes 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#52

Hi everyone!

Hoe r we doing? I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY FOR NOT WRITING FOR SOOOOOOOOOO LONG. I was too busy with my work. But thanks for such great response. I hope this next part gives all TD thirst souls some relief. Without any further delays here we r…………….

CONTINUATION OF FIRST STORY.

After about 4-5 hrs Dk & Disha both r in bed with Disha sitting with her back resting against the beds back & Dk lying with his head on her lap. They both cannot help smiling. Disha is moving her finger on his bolding head & the other han Dk is holding close to his chest.

Disha: Dk!

Dk: Hmm

Disha : Dk how did we come so far?

Dk: Our love for each other brought us here.

Disha: Do u think all this was right?

Dk (gets up holds Disha's face in his hands & kisses her fore head) : Don't u think this was an expression of our love towards each other. Hm.

Disha lowers her eyes & smiles & nods her head agreeing with him. They cuddle each other.

Disha (comes out of his strong arms ) :its getting too late Mummyji &aai must be waiting lets go.

Dk (pulls her back) : No after sometime.

Disha: No Dk please I think its enough for today.

Dk: (looking deep into her eyes with a killer smile) Do u really want to go?

Disha: (blushing) yes……(looks up at him) No (laughs & they both fall on the bed again)

Then we hear laughing voices, occasional ouchs, Disha saying Dk, Dk saying I love u Disha, pillows & cushions falling from bed. This goes on for about another half an hour.

We see Disha putting her sari right & trying to fix her makeup, jewelry & hair. Dk comes from behind wearing un buttoned shirt & hold her gently from behind.

Dk: Disha I love you, how can I part from u now?

Disha(touches his face): I wish I had the answer!

Dk: then lets not go we'll make our own world here itself.

Disha: you know Dk this is not possible because u cannot leave mummyji & I cannot leave aai.

Dk: y r u always right.

Disha (turns around buttons his shirt ): so u agree that I'm always right, so like a good boy get dressed & go home. We'll meet after few hrs.

They just cannot lay their hands off each other so they hug AGAIN.

Thy move towards the main door & as they open it, GUESS who is standing there??????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????

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Posted: 20 years ago
#53
Sum????????????????????? rite??? Oh man some1's gonna get in trouble!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#54

Its Vedant:

Vedant : My, my, my. The guess was right I thought since u 2 were missing in the middle of the night where else could u be?

Disha : Vedant u what r u doing here?

Dk: And how did u know both of us were here?

Vedant: brother the smell of ur love has spread in the air how won't I know?

Dk: what do u mean? Has Ma come to know about our secret meetings?

Vedant: No brother but she & Disha's aai suspect that u two r up to some thing.

Disha: Vedant don't make riddles pls tell us what happened?

Vedant : Dish, u r aai called me to ask that u r missing & no where to be found & its late night, u were not even picking up ur phone. & bro I also knew u were not there in the house & that u left the office early & vanished. So I told Dish's aai that she was with me attending an important meeting & will talk to her later & same thing I told Badi Mom. Now if u 2 don't want to mess things up pls first call ur respective moms & then go home.

Both of them talk to their mothers.

Disha: thanks Vedant u saved us or else things would hv gone out of our hands today.

Dk: thanks Vedant u r the best brother.

Vedant: My, my, my what a couple? Anyways Dish my driver will bring ur car & I'll drop u in my car & bro u pls. Go home.

Dk: Ok, drop my wife safely at home. I've to meet her tomorrow.

Vedant: This reminds me u cannot meet her tomorrow.

DkLdisappointed face) why?

Vedant : because tomorrow is Mom's court date & then u hv to take Badi mom for her check up.

Dk: oh!…….. (Moves closer to Disha) I'm sorry we cannot me tomorrow.

Disha: its ok those things r much important.

Dk: oh Disha I L……..( Disha stops him by moving her eyes towards vedant, like indicating 'he's standing what r u doing)

Dk stops & just touches her face & goes. Disha watches him go & Vedant has his back towards Dk. Dk turns around winks at Disha & gives her a flying kiss) Disha smiles at this.

Vedant : what happened why r u smiling?

Disha: nothing! Lets go.

Vedant drops her at her place &saves them from being exposed.

How do u like it till now? Will continue the story tommorow!

Till then hv fun!

Love

rang

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Posted: 20 years ago
#55
AWWW SO SWEET OF VED!!!!!😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#56
gosh its just awesome plz do post the nxt scene asap plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
#57

i don't have words to say. your story is so nice.👏

write more plzzzzz😳

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Posted: 20 years ago
#58

WOWOOWWWW rang ure forward its aboustleyyyyy wicked seriouslyyyy dk giving flying kisses and all......toooo gooodddd 👏

can't wait till the nxt bit 👏

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 20 years ago
#59
yeah plz continue writing ur story is awesome! Can't wait for the next bit. Ved is quite sweet thanks a lot ved for saving them lol. Plz continue writing
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Posted: 20 years ago
#60

its so romanic. plz carry on.

~sweta~

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