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Posted: 20 years ago
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Next day on both of them start going to the office and at lunchtime they meet at he old house of Dk. Disha brings all his favorite dishes. Along with food they enjoy each other's company and discuss their plan of action. This routine carries on for 4 days. On the 5th day Dk call up Disha & says

Dk: Disha! Today I won't be able to come for lunch lets meet at about 5 o'clock. I hope u don't mind?

Disha: (sad tone) No, its ok.

Dk: what happened?

Disha: nothing I was thinking how will I pass 3 hrs without u?

Dk: (laughs) u've started missing me so much?

Disha: yes Dk! Now with every passing day I feel scared that will we ever be together again?

Dk: Don't worry Disha I'm sure we'll soon find a solution.

Disha: how Dk all our efforts till now hv gone futile. What kind of test is this Baapa?

Dk: u hv faith on ur Baapa, I'm sure he'll not let u down. Remember I love u. now give me that sweet dish smile.

Disha: (Smiles) can u see me smiling?

Dk: No but I can hear it in ur voice.

Disha: I love u & come soon I'll be waiting.

Dk: bye.

In the evening Disha reaches the house & sees Dk waiting for her.

Disha: Oh today u reached early, what a surprise!

Dk smiles & they enter the house & as customary they hug. Then they go ahead and make themselves comfortable. Dk starts telling her why he was late & othe things that happened during the day. Then Disha tells him abt her day & finally they start talking abt their plan.

Disha: I've started giving Aai hints of how much I love u. but u know the good news is that Azuba knows that I cannot live without u & he has given his full support. He has also promised to talk to Aai abt this.

Dk: Even I tried to explain Ma, but she doesn't want to hear anything abt u. So, what I with the help of Ved am trying to show what Poori is to Ma. Hopefully she'll understand.

While they are having this discussion the weather outside becomes stormy and suddenly the lights go off.

Disha: I knew this would happen I'll just get the candles Dk.

Dk just then decides to go to his mother's room to see if his old snaps r still lying there. He finds them in the drawer of aside board with the help of a lighter/ match sticks. As he is standingand looking at those snaps the room fills with light and Disha enters

Disha: u r here & I got scared where did u vanish? What r u looking at?

Dk: (without looking at her) my old snaps. Come have a look.

Disha comes closer with a candle in her hand & puts it in from of the mirror hanging above the side board. Starts looking at the picture. Dk tells her abt each one of them. In the middle of the conversation he looks up at Disha & sees how beautiful she is looking in the dim light of the candle. Her radiant face is glowing so much as he's never seen. He gets totally mesmerized by her stunning appearance. His eyes suddenly fill with passion & desire. Unable to control him self he slowly moves behind Disha who is engrossed in seeing the pictures and moves her hair to her left shoulder and slowly kisses her back. Then moves his hand slowly on to her waist. Disha realizes what is going on.

Disha: Dk what r u doing? Please stop.

Dk: Do u really want me to stop or r u just scared?

Disha: (in an uncertain tone) i…..i ….want……u……….to stop.

Dk: (breathing heavily & still caressing her back) why?

Disha: because ………….i don't know?

Dk: Disha look in the mirror.

She looks up.

Dk: what do u see?

Disha : I see myself & u

Dk: no Disha look at urself. Hv u every seen anyone more beautiful? You tell me how can a man like me control himself when he is with such a pretty woman and that too his wife?

Dk has a grip on her by now.

Disha : (almost melting like wax) but DK…….

Dk: Shhhhhhhhhhhh Disha no more buts now its abt time. Don't think now only go with the flow. Trust me we r not doing anything wrong. I love u and will not do anything that is wrong.

Disha surrenders turns around and sinks into his strong arms. The two figures vanish into the dark.

Then what happens cannot be put into words, just close ur eyes & imagine the beautiful journey of love they both travel together for the first time.

To this only thing can be said is:

Bahon ke darmiyan do pyaar mil rahee hain,

Jane kya bole man dole sum ke badan,

Dhadakan bani zuban.

I hope I'm not writing anything offensive. Please comment should I continue?

Rang

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Posted: 20 years ago
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nice story rang, please continue.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow this is cool plz do keep on writing
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Posted: 20 years ago
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woowww rang lollll ............😉 lady d and hottie getting very romantic there heyyyyy lol hehehee...........what can i say its really good please dooooo continue

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey rang

great job once again

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!

love KP

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Posted: 20 years ago
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oh man this is really good.. next ! just dont stop and i will be a happy person!!😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey

rang cool stroy keep it going...

samy😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey Rang😉

Once again you did a great job......I love it......waiting for your next update.....Please update soon.

Love Sims...😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow cool story. plz keep going on. thanx

~sweta~

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi everyone,

Thanks for the overwhelming response to my story. It really boosts up my imagination. There is a slight change in the pattern of story. I'll continue with this story later first I need to pen down a romantic scene between the D' that has been running in my mind since last night & I need to get it out of my system before I explode. I'll continue with my story later.

So here it goes:

Disha : Dk you go to the gym every morning & keep urself so fit at times I also feel that I should also join u. If u don't mind can I?

Dk: Of course Disha there is nothing to ask about the gym is ours its there in our house u don't need to ask for any permission. Besides, I'll be happy that u r taking care of ur fitness. I don't want u to blot up like other women after some time. After all u r handsome DK Sehgal's wife u need to be in shape. Start of tomorrow morning.

Disha (smiles) : Ok, thank u so much. So I'll buy tracks for myself today.

Dk: Definitely.

Next morning:

Disha reaches the gym a few minutes before Dk. Some how Dk has not seen her in the white T-shirt & gray Tracks. She has tied her hair back. DK enter the gym to see that she has already started exercising and the instructor is helping her. They both look at each other & smile.

Dk thinks to himself: She is so beautiful even in these simple tracks she's looking awesome. I wish I could guide her myself & could get a chance to be naughty with her. Someday I'll give this instructor a holiday & may be then……………(has a mischievous expression on his face & eyes)

But there is something he missed out. Someone else was leaching at him too. Who was it ?

Its Disha:

Disha watches Dk & thinks to herself: Look at him he looks so hot in those Sandoza T-Shirts & Tracks. I never noticed he has great body. Look at his biceps, triceps & his chest is like a rock. When he exercises the way his muscles move is amazing. I always used to think that women fall for his money, but today I realize it more than that. My God! and I like a fool never realized or enjoyed such a sexy guy who is fortunately my husband. Thank Goodness I didn't marry that Blondie peroxide. Now u see Dushyant Sehgal what I do to u. u can never imagine it.

Disha finishes with her exercises before DK & leaves the gym quietly picking up DK's towel so that he cannot wipe of his sweet.

Dk comes to his room all sweaty & mad about someone taking away his towel. Disha approaches him

Disha: what happened Dk? Why r u shouting?

Dk: some one took away my towel & I was all sweaty. I had nothing to wipe with.

Disha: I'm sorry Dk actually I stepped on ur towel & it got dirty, so I brought it with me & was about to send u a fresh towel. I'm sorry.

Dk: (calms down) U should have told me.

Disha: Come I'll wipe ur body see ur still so badly soaked.

Disha goes behind Dk with a wicked smile & starts rubbing his partially visible back & shoulders & occasionally touching him with her hands. Then she comes in front & wipes his cheat & arms. Dk gets suspicious but cannot read her mind. Then she takes off his t-shirt & sees his bare body & the only thing that her mind says was

MY GOD!!!!!!

Then she wipes his rest of the chest slowly trying to feel his every curve. DK looks at her & smiles & grabs her closer, Disha's concentration breaks & she thinks "I hope he doesn't know what I'm up to'

DK: Disha u look very sexy in the sports gear, actually I must say u look like a girl. But I like u more in saris. Because then I hv more options u see.

Disha smiles blushingly & then they kiss. This time Disha also hold his body tight.

And before he goes any further she pushes him in the bathroom. Turning back she thinks to herself.

'Dushayant u'll come to know tonight who is the sexy one & who is the dominating one?'

Wait & watch for the next part coming up soon. Till then comment on this one.

Rang 😉

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