TD fast forwarded by Slena!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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This is my version of TD fast forwarded, hope you guys enjoy!

Just to et you guys noe, Gargi is in jail, mummyji is cured and the Two D's have small happy family!(what my version is, is that it is kind of a drag, but i just wanted to share it with you all)

Disha is running after a 3 year old boy –Stop raj beta, eat ur dinner. When the door bell rings, she hands the plate of food over to a servant and walks over to the door thinking who it could be at this time.

Disha –Oh its u Dk, I was wondering who it mite be, I thought u were coming back tomorrow night?

Dk-I thought I'd give u a surprise.

Just then, Raj comes running towards Dk, yelling Papa! Dk kneels down and they both hug.

Dk-How are u raj beta, hope u didn't bug ur mom. Look I brought u all gifts from goa, Disha where is mummy?

Disha-maji is gone to visit Vedant, she said she was staying back there, and will be back by tomorrow morning.

Raj-yaaaay!Papa apne mujhe wo truck liye!

Disha-What was the need Dk, he already has so many toys, you know ur spoiling him!

Dk an disha's bedroom: Dk is standing by the window, Disha comes behind him.

Disha-whats wrong Dk? You seem upset?

Dk turns around smiling,

Dk-Why wouldn't I be upset, actually I'm jealous of you!

Disha smirks –Why are you jealous of me?

Dk-because you give and get so much love, Raj loves you so much!

Disha-oh Dk, he loves you just as much, but yeah he does love me a bit more!

They both laugh and then they hug eachother.

Dk-I love you Disha.

Disha-I love you too Dk, its getting late and we also have to go and meet Aai in the morning.

MORNING

Disha is getting up, when Dk holds her hand and pulls her down

Disha-let go Dk, I have to go, mummyji is calling!

Dk lets go of her hand without saying anything.

Disha is in the kitchen with her sasu-ma.

Maaji-main ne suna Dk , Goa sa agaya.

Disha-je mummyji, wo kal rat agay thai. Mummy, I have to go and wake up Raj, I'll be right back.

Maaji-okay.

Disha opens the door to Raj's room, and the room is filled with toys, Raj is sleeping on the bed.Disha goes and opens the curtains.

Disha-wake up sleepy head!

She picks him and sits with him in her lap.

Disha-Good morning beta, apko yaad hain aj hum nani-ma kay ghar ja rahin hain?(do you remember that we are going to nani-ma's house today?)

Raj rubs his eyes-Mummy I love you!

Disha hugs him-I love you too, now get ready, you know we also hav to wake up your papa.

AAI"S HOUSE:

Aai and Rano are sitting and taking about how Disha and DK finally got together, and how they make such a good family.And Rano starts complaining how irresponsible Inder is, leaving her in this condition and going to the US, just for a meeting. Just then Raj comes in yelling NANI!

Aai-Raj beta tum lok agai, mummy papa kahan hain?

Disha comes through the door with a flowers in her hand-Happy Mother's day Aai!

Disha and Aai hug eacthother, Aai gets tears in her eyes-I'm so fortunate to have daughters like both of you. Dk kahan hain?

Disha-He's in the car, talking to someone in office, he'll be here in a few minutes.

Aai is about to say something when Rano comes-mumma, whats this its such a happy day and your ruining it by crying, now don't cry. And will let Di know that I'm mad at her!

Saying this she turns around and crosses her arms.

Disha-mujhe maloom hain, that's why I brought something for you.

Disha takes a small box out of her purse-here is your mother's day gift , meri maa!

Saying this they all laugh .Aai see Dk coming in-Agai beta.

Dk touches her feet, and she gives him blessings.Aai says come lets eat breakfast.

They all finish eating.

Dk-mummyji, the food was great , now I know where disha got her skills from.

Rano-jiju, I also made it you know, I also deserve a praise!

Raj-mausi, apne kana acha banai hain.

Rano-Thankyou!

BACK AT THE SEGHAL MANSION:

Disha is sitting on the sofa with Raj in her alp, reading a magazine.When she looks down to Raj, she see's that he has fallen asleep. She keeps looking. She moves his hair back, she thinks to herself, bapa has given me such a gem of a child. She gets flashbacks of when he was born.Dk is holding the baby and is smiling, with a shine in his eyes he says-Disha today you have given me everything.

He hands the the baby to Disha, who is sitting in bed-He looks just like you dushyant.

He sits on the bed with her and the baby, and puts his arm around her. The flashback is broken by the ring of the phone.

Disha-hello

Caller-hello, is Mrs.Disha seghal there?

Disha-Yes that's me.

Caller-This is jailer Iqubal, I'm calling from central jail, Ms.Gargi wants to meet you, she says its urgent, can you come?

Disha-Yes I'll be there.

Saying this she thinks why does gargi want to meet me?She gets up and puts Raj in bed.

On her way out she tell mummyji that she is going out for some work and she will be back shortly.

CENTRAL JAIL:

Gargi looks old in a jail uniform, her hair gone grey, and no make up-Disha, kasi ho tum, sunny and sab ghar pa kaisa hain?(how are you and everybody at home)

Disha-stop this drama, tell me why you called me here ?

Gargi has a evil smile-to say good bye, before you die Disha.

Disha-what are you talking about? Look I don't have all day, get to the point!

Gargi-I just called you hear to say good bye, and now that I have done that you can leave!

Disha gets angry and just leaves.Gargi is still; sitting there,.and goes uufff…your too much gargi. Disha wont understand why I called her here, but I really did call her hear to say good bye before she goes to her bapa!

I hope you guys liked it, I will be writng more! So tell me how you guys liked it, but there is lots more, I would finish it rite now but its quite late.

Edited by hottie99 - 20 years ago

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Uh-oh! Even from jail, Gargi will cause problems! Somebody kill this woman off, already!!!

-Dkaddict

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey hottie99!!!! I can see your addicted now too!!!!!!!!!

You've done a wonderful job!!!!!!!!!!!!! Disha and DK with a baby boy!!!

AAAAWWWWWWW!!!!! CHO CHWEET!!!!!

One question: How come they didn't spend mother's day with mummyji (DK's MOM) too?

AAHH MAN!!! Gargi is still a problem!!!! Can't she have some kind of a uncurable, painful, deadly disease? just a thought😆

*KHUSHI*

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Posted: 20 years ago
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good one i love it expecting more from u

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Hey hott99

Lovely story, you had me glued, please do continue with the rest of the story

Hope the writer do include something like this with Dk and Disha with kids and all, on thursday here in SA, the show was screened with Dk in jail and reminiscing about his past to Disha with his mum and dad etc, it was very sad, can't wait to see him with his own kid

PS: i would love to see a scene with Disha giving birth and Dk give Dish all the support in the world and watching her going through all the pain and loving her even more for that

Edited by AALIYAH786 - 20 years ago
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hey sooo romantic .. a drem it seem from thenumber of twists and turns the story is taking😆
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i like ur story plz do continue it!!!
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WOOWWW Slena!!!! Now that was absoultely awesome seriously loved every single bit 😃!!!!!!!! Awww disha and dk happily married with baby rajjj sooo sweett aww humare dk a daddy awwwwwwww 😛😉loll hehhehe.please so continueee.....can't wait.........

love Asian princess/DK ki deewani 😉

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👏Slena its really good can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! For the next bit!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Excellent keep it up!!!👍🏼!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Okay, i hope you enjoy, its starts from where disha leaves after meeting Gargi.

Disha is driving, the road is a very queit and desolat, Disha is feeling a uneasy and scared about what Gargi had said.The words keep repeating in her head. Disha snaps out of her thoughts, when a guys jumps from nowhere on to the road, she slams the breaks but the car goes out of her control, and goes crashing into the tree's. She gets out of the crashed car, she has been injured on her forhead, not in her senses she goes towards the road,she is standing on the side, there comes a van, someone in the van pulls her in the van and drives away.

Disha is in the van , there are two men hovering over her, she isn't aware of anything and just falls unconscious.

Seghal House:

Dk is worried about Disha and keeps calling on her cell phone but it is off. He is walking back and forth thinking where she could be, she never stays out so late. He goes to his mums room and asks her if she know's where Disha is?

Mummyji-She said she had some important work and she would be back soon, why do you look so worried? She is not a child Dushyant, she can take car of heself.

Hearing this Dk tries to calm down,by thinking that his mom is right. But he know that Disha is not the kind of person to stay out so late. he still cant stop wondering where she could be? He maybe she is with Vedant, so he phones him "Hello, vedent kya Disha waha hain?"

"no brother, she is not here, infact I haven't heard from her all day! Why, is she not at home?"

" if she was at home do you think I would have asked if she was with you? No, she went out, and hasn't returned yet, I don't know where she is. Acche main phone rakta hoon.

3 hours pass and Disha is not back.Dk is getting more and more restless with every passing minute. Finally he decides to call the police. The police question him about what the car looks like and a descripition of what his wife."She never stays out so late, please inspector find my wife!"

"Ummm…Mr.Dk, we have found a car, it hs had n accident and it fits the description of your wifes car, but we haven't found anyone in or around the car."

Dk is feeling very terrified and starts yelling at the inspector,"What are you doing sitting there, go out and look for my wife, you r duty is to look for her!"

"Yes, sir we are doing our best"

Dk hangs up the phone and calls Vedant,"Vedant come over right now, Disha is missing!"

"calm down bro, I'm coming over right away!"

Disha is in this place that looks like a shutdown factory. Her mouth is coverd with tape and her hands are tied, she opens her eyes, she is dead scared, she starts moving around, trying to untie her hands, just then someone comes and sits in front of her!

"look women, if you try to run away or try anything,we will kill you!" the guy takes the tape off her mouth.

"What do you want? Why did you kidnap me? Who are you?" Disha looks scared.

The guy looks at her, "so many questions, why are you after your ownlife lady?" He puts the tape back on, and leaves disha all alone.

Here Dk is still pacing around the room, mummyji is also there now.Vedant walks in through the front door. "Brother, any information on Dish babhi?" Dk looks at vedant and says, "no, mummy app Raj ka kyal rakhna, hum lok Disha koy doondna ja rahay hain, agre koy khabre mily, to mujhe phone kar dena."(take care of raj, we are going to go and look for disha, if you get any info phone me.) Saying this they leave.

Okay that's it for know, Hope you enjoyed, its not romantic or anything but that will come soon! I'm sorry if you guys don't like it.

Edited by hottie99 - 20 years ago

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