TD FAST FORWARD UPDATED: 14/05/05!! - Page 7

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Posted: 20 years ago
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KEWL THANKS A LOT GUYS AND OF COURSE I MIGHT WRITE TOMOZ IS THAT OK THANKS NO1TDFAN! THANKS NEHA THNX JINGLE THNX ANAND !😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thanks alot miss.england, i think you have writen that you will write the next part tomorrow??.....I hope so😃 😛

waiting.....

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Posted: 20 years ago
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plz miss.england,

i hope that you will write the next part today, i am desprite tp khow what is going to happen.....😕

so plz write it today........

ppppppplllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzz😭

😭😭

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Posted: 20 years ago
#64

you sure know how to create the suspense..But you did a great job. Can't wait to read your next part..

😊 Naina

Edited by Nachos - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#65

ppplllzzzz

miss.england where are you???😭

iam still waiting 4 your next part, plz write it soon...😭....

i hope you will write it before 4/05 pppllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 20 years ago
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SOZ GUYS COULDN'T WRITE 2DAY I COULDN'T THINK OF ANYTHING AND AM A BIT STRESSED CAUSE OF MY GCSE'S BUT I WILL DEFINANTLEY WRITE BEFORE SATURDAY JUST NEED SOME TIME TO THINK OF THE STORY THANKAS A LOT NACHOS AND NEHA THANKS A LOT GUYS U ARE SO SUPPORTIVE

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Posted: 20 years ago
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OK I have written next Bit so here it goes:

Night time: (9.00pm)

Disha was standing outside in the clod weather with a beautiful black sari(She has changed from red clothes as they were tooooo heavy!!) The wind was swaying past her beautful hair. Dk finally gets changed and see's Disha standing near the window he goes and grabs her

Disha: Kohn hei?(Who is it)

DK: Bhoot(Ghost)

Disha: Really funny DK

she turns around her hair hits DK however DK does not react DK puts his hand around and Disha waist and starts to act romantic.

Disha: yeh kya kar rahe ho DK? (What are you doing DK)

DK: Kamal hei jab mei pyar karta hoo to kehte hei kya kar rahe ho(Laughs) (When i act romantic she's ask what i am doing wonderful)

Dk and Disha both stare into each other's eyes they are both so deep into each other eyes they don't know how close they are to each other (Rain is pouring down heavily) they donot notice but suddenly Disha and DK kiss.

Disha: DK mei sono ja rahe hoo (DK I am going to sleep)

DK: Disha!!!

Dk by accident pulls her palu of not noticing and Disha with an embarrased impression puts it on😳

DK: Mujhse kya sharmaine (Why you shy of me)

Disha goes into the bathroom and two minutes later is changed into her night gown DK is astonished by Disha's beauty.

DK shuts the light of and...................................................

ITS NIGHT

😉soz had to stop there cause i can't think of anything further because we all knows what happens there lol i hope i didn't offend anyone if i did i am really sorri but i had to add it in.

Edited by miss.england02 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#68

THANKS ALOT MISS.ENGLAND👏😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
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VERY GOOD, I AM BEING A LITTLE SELFISH NOW, BUT WAITING 4 YOR NEXT PART😉😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
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thanks dklover and thanks neha 😛

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