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Posted: 20 years ago

OMG Diksha and Bluefish. You'll are rocking. I did not have the time to go thru the mails all this while and now I am here reading the mails since the last 1hr and am completely hooked to this topic. Indeed a great job . I feel like I am reading a M & B novel. Hope the script writers of TD take your ideas. And hope they keep showing more and more of DK- Disha scenes together.........I went into dreamland reading your future predictions of TD. After this there is only one thing I can do ( standing ) 👏. Your ideas are just tooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooood. Love you all. Take care. IF is rocking and Love all here.

Love Lata

Edited by Lata - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago

Hi My wonderful writers,

Well ,it was a working day for me so hence this delay & in the evening went for a holi party just came back & have logged on & have got all hooked.Mindblowing veda.I think Rupali guha the producer is going to lift the ball room dancing scene.The B'day party is coming along quite well & keep cooking with all the spices it looks brilliant.

Veda I think your genius lies in your unique ability to appreciate the essence of human relationships.It is said that, "human brain is an enchanted loom ready to weave a unique tapestry of creative self-expression" But putting them in words is a different ball game which you r doing exceptionally well, no exaggeration really,I mean it!

Keep up the good work.Will not want to see the epilogue so soooooon.

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Posted: 20 years ago

diksha just loved the ending to your story it was soooooo sweet love to see lilttle juniour dk 😉like sumitra said !!! 😆lolll

Bluefish can't wait to read your next update your story line is sooo good got me eager for the next one 😃

Both of you and Miss england alll our really good writers ever thought of going professional guys 😃 kepp up the good work love reading your stories ladies 👏

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 20 years ago

HI Miss-england,congrats!job well done.👏👏

Now my story will start from where you left i.e Vedant saying ILU to Disha-----Disha reciprocating by giving him a hard slap & yelling Vedantttttttttttttttttttttt "tum pagal ho gay ho" I'm your bhabi & will remain that.That truth can never be changed."Mai kal bhi tumhari bhabi thi or aaj bhi hoo aur kal bhi rahangi" Whether you like it or not "yahi sach hai or rahega." Now Vee who has just overcome the shock & speaks in a soft voice says, "What abt the contract,I thought you had a contract marriage with brother". Disha, ---"you don't worry abt that.It is b/w me & DK & you stay out of it."Vee says my my Dish, Just to hear your feelings for bro I was just testing you,gives a faint smile & says Dish you are too much "Bhai say pyar karti ho deewane ki haad tak par kabool naahi karogi, Disha kab tak!" For how long you both will keep hiding your feelings from one another it will just drive you crazy.Please listen to me & accept one another I'm with u saying this puts his hand on Dee's & Dee returns the favour & then DK who is crossing just looks at it & gets it all wrong & yells Disha,"If u want to do all this u can as well leave my house & go".Poor girl who is now openly crying says, "Dk tum nahi samjhogay",DK you'll never understand me or my feelings.Dk by now has left the scene in huff & puff.

Back ground music the title track in male voice "Man ka man say---going on & Dk sitting in his room & trying to play the piano but just can't get the notes right & in disgust pushes the vase which is kept next to it.Disha is just entering the room does not get hurt ,she misses the vase by fraction of a second, but Dk just gets up & says tum -----------silence they both look at each other with hurt & pain in their eyes but for different reasons.Disha looks at the broken vase calls the maid to clean it & makes a U turn & goes to her room starts to cry profusely.

Sumitra Ma comes to her room & goes & sits next to her & says, Beti u have been so patient with Dushant for so long I think he needs a lil more time to come around but in the mean time if u want to leave him & go sure I'll not stop you.I know u have gone through a lot & now if u want to go & spend a few days with your mom u can go.Now Gargi the witch who was standing at the door & listining comes in & says,"Disha your contract is getting over Tomorrow so get ready to pack your bags & leave.We don't need u here anymore.

Sumitra----"Contract".

Gargi---------"Ya! contract , oh didi u don't know Dk picked this orphin from somewhere to take care of u for 6 months.But now u r doing fine nurse Meera is there to take care so we don't need any help!!!

Disha---------"Chotima please stop it !

episode ends on disha's Stunned & pale face.

I think if u find my writing not up to the mark Blame it on my BHang filled brain.I just returned from holi party & started to write--------------------------

See U guys here tomorrow

bye

mink

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Posted: 20 years ago

HI mink!!!

I like ur predicitions and the tittle song is not "man ka man say" it's "man se man ka" 😆 but it's ok and u wrote that vedant says"Bhai say pyar karti ho deewane ki haad tak par kabool naahi karogi, Disha kab tak!"but he doesn't say Disha but Dish and he doesn't say Bhai but Brother😆

But it's ok we don't mind and ur predictions are very good and i am sorry if u didn't like that i correct ur mistakes,i am very sorry.

Iman

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Posted: 20 years ago

Hi Iman,

Thanks for the corrections I abs don't mind.It shows that u guys read with full enthusiasm.Next time I'll try to be more careful.

It is just my envisage so anybody can address anyway they want it

Chalta hai kyo????????????😃

mink (man se man ka kya rishta hai-----------heheeeeeee😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
mink is it ok if we share my story!!😆
ManishaRox thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago

is it ok if i write part 3 of it kk

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Posted: 20 years ago

hey mink good job i loved the line where disha says;

" Mai kal bhi tumhari bhabi thi or aaj bhi hoo aur kal bhi rahangi" Whether you like it or not "yahi sach hai or rahega."

that wass sooo funnyyy 😆😆😆!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the good workkk 👏

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 20 years ago

I carried on from when Mink left:

Part 3😛

Sumitra----------- Beti kya yei sach ha ki Dk or tumhari shaadi ek contract se bandi howe hei or kal tumhara or Dk ka contract katam ho jaeyga.

Gargi---------(Oof Gargi your just too much) Disha batawo didi ko (tell sister disha)Disha-------- Mumiji aap so jayo app bhoot taki howe hei ap mera kamre mei so jao apko to pata hei ki choti ma kasi hei ( Mum your feeling tired go to sleep in my room you know how Gargi is)

Gargi--------- Kesi hoo main Disha betai.(Tell me Disha how am i)

Sumitra starts to feel tense because all this time she thought disha was her daughter in law and all of a sudden i hear this is a contract i am definantely sure that if disha stays with Dk sunnie's life will go back to normal. Disha puts the blanket over Sumitra and is about to leave when Gargi says" Disha you played with Gargi now you know what status you have in front of me Disha says" Chooti ma aap kya soch thi hai kei Dk mujhe janei dei gai yeai tomhari saab se bari bavakoofi hei,Je app mujhe abb tak nahi nikal sagi to ab kya nikalo gi. (Gargi what do you think Dk would let me go this is your biggest mistake also if you couldn't kick me out before how can you kick me out now.) Gargi goes out thinking actually how would i be able to kick disha out would dk let me.

Dk sits in his room thinking Disha you know i don't like all this then why do you and Vedant do things which hurt me.

Disha sits in the lounge and thinks about all the nice times she had with Dk recaping all the good and old histories. Suddenly she thinks why don't i go and tell Dk the truth after all he does love me and why should he always misunderstand mine and vedants relationship. Here they sing the song:
Chalte Chlate Meri Jiwan Mein
Yeh Mod Kaisa Aaya
Na Toh Hai Manzil, Na Hai Karwan
Na Toh Pyaar Ka Hai Saaya
Dekhe The Jo Mere Aankhon Ne
Woh Khwab Sunahare Bhikre Hain
Har Waqt Magar Unh Yadoon Ke
Kuch Dard Dil Main Ubhre Hain
Un Yaadon Ko
Bhoolon Kis Tarah, Kaise Main Bhoolaon
Disha hurries of to Dk's room when she gets there she see's Vedant and Dk fighting over Porinita (OMG will these two ever stop their hatred). She goes inside and stops the fight and says Dk and Vedant stop it!!! try to forget the past and move on you two are brothers! After Disha says this finally they stop their childish behaviour and Vedant leaves giving a furious look.

Disha says: "Dk i have come to say that whatever you see happen b/w me and Vedant is all wrong its just a coincidence that when you c us two where sharing a sister in law and brother in law relationship however you always misunderstand us.

Dk says" Splendid now your saying what i saw with my two eyes is wrong and why does it always be a coincidence when i am there you know i don't like him eventhough you know that you go to him. Do you remember when I slapped him you started argumenting and I also saw him telling you to smile and you did and then what he put his hands on you I saw that with my two eyes and that is also a coincidence ain't i right Disha? (Giving a bad look)

Dk look i have to come to tell you because i think you have the right to know thee truth if you misunderstand a relationship then their is nothing I can do however I do want to try and get you out of the misunderstanding.

Dk with a jelous look says ok Disha i trust you however just try to keep your brother and sister in law relationship to a limit. Disha calmly says: Thanks Dk for understanding

Disha then says Dk i want to tell you that I.........

Ok guys wait for the next part until then leave it a suspense plz tell me if u like the story however if you do not then i will stop writing thanks a lot😃

Edited by miss.england02 - 20 years ago

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