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Posted: 10 years ago
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LOVED IT! But I am sad again because I know a resolution is not coming so easily.😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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deariee...
thanku very muchhh,,,,
this was much needed,,,
you hve penned it very beautifullly,,, i soo wish something like this happens soonn,,,, i cant see ajna like this,,,, hope they unite soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved each & every line of it... u so beautifully described Ajay & Sanjana's feelings & the way they long for each other, u r angel to uplight all our moods with your creativity, Thoroughly enjoyed it!!! Many Many Thanks Tiana for spending your valuable time & effort to bring a broad smile in so many unknown faces!!!!

Ajay slowly took her arms in his and placed it on his chest. She felt his heartbeats.

"When you left you took my heartbeats with you. And now that you are here, they are back. If you leave they will go again with you. Will you take these heartbeats away again?"

Sanjana hugged him tightly and whispered with tears in her eyes,

"Never."

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehak9

It's too good...
.. 👏 I hope we got to see such things on our show also... But it won't because cvs loves harrasing us..

Thank u dear for your heartbeating os



Thanks Mehak 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

unres😉

<font color="#ff6666">First of all can I just say YAYYY first to comment😆</font>
<font color="#ff6666">Tiana you have really outdone yourself today, I can say for a fact that from all of your writings, this one is by far my favorite one!</font>

<font color="#ff6666">Just from the first paragraph I was hooked! The way you described how he felt after their conversation, I could feel his heart break!</font>

<font color="#ff6666">Honestly I have no words, I truly just sat back and enjoyed reading this OS; thanks so so so much for posting you!</font>

<font color="#ff6666">You did a fabulous job👏</font>



Thanks Shakti😊

I guess it is the song that gave more beauty to this OS...😃

Glad you liked it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Aayushi15

Wow what a beautiful os. You are an amazing writer. Thank you so so much for writing this wonderful piece.



And you are an amazing reader... 😃

Glad you liked it...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: darrish


LOVED IT! But I am sad again because I know a resolution is not coming so easily.😭



Thanks Rishma😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ms.Bholi_Bhaali

deariee...

thanku very muchhh,,,,
this was much needed,,,
you hve penned it very beautifullly,,, i soo wish something like this happens soonn,,,, i cant see ajna like this,,,, hope they unite soon



Aww... Thanks... Missed you in the forum...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: smileee

Loved each & every line of it... u so beautifully described Ajay & Sanjana's feelings & the way they long for each other, u r angel to uplight all our moods with your creativity, Thoroughly enjoyed it!!! Many Many Thanks Tiana for spending your valuable time & effort to bring a broad smile in so many unknown faces!!!!

Ajay slowly took her arms in his and placed it on his chest. She felt his heartbeats.

"When you left you took my heartbeats with you. And now that you are here, they are back. If you leave they will go again with you. Will you take these heartbeats away again?"

Sanjana hugged him tightly and whispered with tears in her eyes,

"Never."



Shanthi... You are an angel to make me smile with your comments every time...😊

So glad you like it😊

And loved your comment as usual... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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extremily lovely.
Enjoyed it a lot.
Kash something like happens in the show.
I loved each word of it.
The last part is simply amazing.
Great piece of work 👏

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