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Posted: 10 years ago
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A ray of moon light was filling the room which was filled with darkness till then sanjana seeing dat light thought why can't my life see a ray of light

yesterday she saw something she wanted to see badly and seeing dat gave her hope strength to fight back just like a ray of light in darkness but today her hope crashed

why ? why me ? what did i do to deserve this

Ajay was looking in the mirror but he couldn't see his face he saw her face instead the childlike glee on her face which after a few minutes turned from shock to hurt her eyes which were sparkling till then had tears

he couldn't believe he did dat where did dat anger come from he never slapped a girl till now so how did his hand raise dat too against her

so what if she didn't want to sign them he should have convinced mamaji his inner self was blaming him yes he shouldn't have done dat he came outside nd headed to her home

ajay was standing outside sanjana window he nd her escaped on her wedding from here only

"u have to tell her sorry man come on u did once it won't be hard just climb "

Just then he heard a voice

" ajay beta now ur my damad so need to climb come through the main door "

Ohh was all ajay could say nd entered

" sit beta will u have anything is everyone k why u came middle of night "

" oh uncle all is k" he. wanted to say why he came but could he tell he came to talk to sanjana at dis time

" sanjana is upstairs beta " her dad said noticing his discomfort nd went

ajay entered the room to see sanjana sitting near the window he sat with her

" sanjana " there was no response

after a few minutes
" Ajay divorce papers r on the table i signed "

"sanjana listen am sorry. i shouldn't ...

" i signed them so there is no need of all dis"

" pls don't say like dat am so sorry i shouldn't slap u am sorry see am holding my ears pls"

" u thought ur slap hurted me it did but very less compared to ur words"

" it was in anger sanjana i don't mean any of it"

" hmm leave it take ur papers nd go"

" do u want me to go"

"i don't want anything now just now "

" but i want i want my friend to forgive me

ajay left the papers in the room went outside nd thought i Will make sure she forgives me even if i have to tell lie to my family nd stay here i will do it i will get my sanjana back


hola people am back felt bad ajay will slap sanju but i want her not to forgive him easily nd i want ajay to stay with sanju in her home nd win her back nd she should forgive him but act as if she didn't




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely one!! I too wish Sanjana to be angry on Ajay. But i want her to open up about her feelings, she really irritating Ajay without knowing the pressure on him, Poor Ajay he went out all his frustration through the slap. more than Sanjana Ajay will feel bad about it..Its sweet that he feels sorry & ready to console and get her back by staying in her house..

Loved this dialogue:
" u thought ur slap hurted me it did but very less compared to ur words"

Many Thanks for writing & sharing this!

Edited by smileeee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very good OS that i've ever read.
I like Sanjana in ur OS who is very strong n signed d divorced paper.
Can u continue d OS?
I'm very excited what's happen next especially what Ajay'll do 2 get Sanjana's forgiveness.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very well written dear 👏


I too want sanjana to be more strong and to be angry with Ajay... And Ajay should really miss Sanjana...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely OS...
I too, think Sanjana should sign the divorce papers and make Ajay run after like a peahen😆
He deserves it after all for being such a blockhead😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok even I think its high tym that Now Ajay must go behind Sanjana...It would b Fun to see how Ajay patofies Sanju
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanx guys but they have to show more ajna cause am not getting any ideas
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NAVI55

Lovely OS...

I too, think Sanjana should sign the divorce papers and make Ajay run after like a peahen😆
He deserves it after all for being such a blockhead😕


I know I want sanjana to be strong and ajay to get his head put of his ass
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I hope sanjana brings ajay to his knees
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb OS. I wish this happens for real.

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