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Posted: 10 years ago
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sanjana stood on the roof as past events played in her from her court marriage to her divorce dat thought gave shudders the thought of leaving ajay if only her mom was alive she would support her she felt alone tears flowed but she had no strength to wipe them

A hand touched her gently she turned to see ayush avni mishri utpal standing

"Don't u think u r alone sanjana we all r with u " ayush said

"Yea bhabhi talk to us don't feel alone " mishri said

sanjana felt overwhelmed but could only say " There is nothing left now to tell ajay left me nd even if i tell him my feelings he won't listen cause of mamaji nd i don't want him to gp against his family "

"But bhabhi mamaji is the one who taught us not to sacrifice our happiness for even our family " avni said

" omg who r u nd wat did u do to our avni the sacrificing queen " mishri mocked

" shut up mishri"

" oyee u two stop nd bhabhi pls tell ur feelings nd make him realize his " utpal said

" make him realize wat ? "

"Ohoo don't be so thick sanjana he loves u dats y he is sad the day u left till now he keeps seeing ur pics at night in his cell " ayush said

" what r u saying bhaiyya"

" Its true bhabhi he misses talking to u nd he is driving us crazy " utpal said

then ayush told the remaining to sleep nd said to sanjana" If ur feeling confused see in his eyes u will know bye"

sanjana stood there thinking when ajay came to d roof

when she saw him a plan formed in her mind

meanwhile,ajay turned to return down as he couldn't see her if he did he knew he will loose control before he could leave he heard a cry

"Sanjana ! wat happened r u okay "

sanjana could see the love nd affection ayush bhaiyya said nd smiled

" Wat d hell y r u smiling "

" Ajay am k its just weakness k"

"So now u r nt even eating what is wrong with u"

"Nothing nw leave me"

"Don't show me attitude " with dat he scooped her in his arms took her to her room lay her on the bed

"Now don't u dare move from here am sending the maid with food "

hmmm so he did love her bt he won't tell i will make u tell ajay i will Now i won't let u go


so how's it guys am jessi from the beautiful city vizag dis is my first os first post here am huge ajna fan. give ur reviews guys


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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovelyyy

thankuuu for writing dis... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one! Thank you for sharing this with us, feeling happy authors of this forum are increasing day by day, all magic of AjNa ..

Lines i loved are
" Its true bhabhi he misses talking to u nd he is driving us crazy " utpal said
"Don't show me attitude " with dat he scooped her in his arms .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ajay_Sanjana

lovelyyy

thankuuu for writing dis... :)



ur welcome nd thanks for d review
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: smileee

Nice one! Thank you for sharing this with us, feeling happy authors of this forum are increasing day by day, all magic of AjNa ..

Lines i loved are
" Its true bhabhi he misses talking to u nd he is driving us crazy " utpal said
"Don't show me attitude " with dat he scooped her in his arms .



thanks yaar dis is my first os these reviews means so much to me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Jessi🤗Welcome to the forum🤗
This was a lovely OS😊 Loved it😊

The cousins supporting Sanjana was sweet😳 And Ayyush and Mishri are my Favs in the show apart from AjNa😳

Ajay's concern was lovely😳 These lines were so sweet😳 I want this to happen in the show😳

"Don't show me attitude " with dat he scooped her in his arms took her to her room lay her on the bed

"Now don't u dare move from here am sending the maid with food "


Lovely OS😊

P.S: I love Lionel Messi too😳 I love football and Argentina is my favourite football team😳


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Hello Jessi🤗Welcome to the forum🤗

This was a lovely OS😊Loved it😊

The cousins supporting Sanjana was sweet😳And Ayyush and Mishri are my Favs in the show apart from AjNa😳

Ajay's concern was lovely😳These lines were so sweet😳I want this to happen in the show😳

"Don't show me attitude " with dat he scooped her in his ar
ms took her to her room lay her on the bed

"Now don't u dare move from here am sending the maid with food "


Lovely OS😊

P.S: I love Lionel Messi too😳I love football and Argentina is my favourite football team😳




wow a messi Argentina nd ajna fan dats me too i love messi nd fc Barcelona btwn thanks mishri ayush my favs too
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Am glad to see how We r getting new and More writters r coming with dere AjNa fiction...Am really happy to see How AjNa is actually spreading It magic to all...Love AjNa and I loved ur Update Thanx for Writting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely os dear😃
I loved the cousins support😳 That should happen in the serial...
Ajna moment Awesome...
Write more and remember to share😳

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