Kalma Story- Birds of a Broken Nest Part- 11 update pg17 22/01/23 - Page 8

Amazing update Priyu! Guilty Malhar is the best Malhar. Keep going!

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Amazing update Priyu...

Malhar is ready to leave Moksh with Kalyani and live alone as a self punishment for his mistakes.. He feels so bad for hurting Kalyani.. His guilt is not not allowing him to live or breathe..

Kallu poor girl is still under the fear that Sampada may take away Moksh from her.. But luckily it was only a nightmare..

And then she found his letter..

She understands all his pain and his guilt too.. And his self inflicted punishment..

But she's right, in his self punishment indirectly he's punishing Moksh too..

And so she gave him only one choice, either you come back with me or else me and Moksh are coming to be with you... 👍🏼

Malhar is stunned at Kalyani's nature.

Let's see how he brings him out of his guilt.

We all know kalyani can do anything for moksh to use uske baba se dur thodi na hone deti..

Originally posted by: Jara567

Thank you so much Priyu for updating and tagging! Such a beautiful storyline! Sorry Aaj trend tha Sehban ke liye toh kal se hi thoda occupied thi.😃

Bechara Malhar wants to punish himself but his better half has left no ways open for him to do so! How beautiful… the storyline is very cute how Malhar is soo deeply hurt and broken and guilty about each things he has done to Kallu. REEM says that feeling all the emotions deeply makes us feel alive but shows mein kaafi baar emotions choot jaate hain. You are portraying that guilt of mj beautifully. Waiting to see more!🤗

Tum log kitna kuch karte ho for them..

I Really appreciate it… 👏

Malharji ki arddhangini hai na unhe kuch galat nahi karne degi..

Haa yaar sometimes emotions are too plain in the show..

I really wanted it to be this way so likh diya…

Thanks for liking … it motivates to write more..

Priyu sorry maine ye tag abb dekha ..i read it today only 😔😔 but it's was awesome like really really awesome tu kehti hai tujhe likhna nhi aata or ye dekhna what a masterpiece you gave us 🤗🤗

Malhar is in really guilt for his past actions and die to his nature if we did mistake then we have to get punishment he is in this mode

Usko ye nhi pata ki usne jo bhi kiya vo anjane main aake gusse main dhoka khaake kiya kyunki uski jindagi poori barbaad ho chuki thi ..

Hope usse kalyani iss guilt se bahar nikal paaye aur ho sake to iss beech ussein kalyani ek alag roop keval moksh ki aai nhi balki apni wife ke roop main bhi dekhke 😳

Vaise ye sahi hai kalyani madam ko har baar uska thikana mil jaata hai and she reached on time ..⭐️

Abb malhar ki band thori bajnj bhi chahiye but kalyani bechari vo abhi bhi iss dar main ki kahi sampada naa aajaye aur uskr bete ko usse door le jaaye ..

Keep going like this ☺️

Hum genuinely pagal hain! Spam, trends, comments aur bhi kitna kuch!! But jo maza fandom mein aata hain that's genuinely priceless. The family i have made there is truly something I count as a blessing. Btw I had once seen your profile on ig probably. Shayad Nisha k comment section mein....

Aur tum bhi likhti raho, we are here for you🤗

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Priyu sorry maine ye tag abb dekha ..i read it today only 😔😔 but it's was awesome like really really awesome tu kehti hai tujhe likhna nhi aata or ye dekhna what a masterpiece you gave us 🤗🤗

Malhar is in really guilt for his past actions and die to his nature if we did mistake then we have to get punishment he is in this mode

Usko ye nhi pata ki usne jo bhi kiya vo anjane main aake gusse main dhoka khaake kiya kyunki uski jindagi poori barbaad ho chuki thi ..

Hope usse kalyani iss guilt se bahar nikal paaye aur ho sake to iss beech ussein kalyani ek alag roop keval moksh ki aai nhi balki apni wife ke roop main bhi dekhke 😳

Vaise ye sahi hai kalyani madam ko har baar uska thikana mil jaata hai and she reached on time ..⭐️

Abb malhar ki band thori bajnj bhi chahiye but kalyani bechari vo abhi bhi iss dar main ki kahi sampada naa aajaye aur uskr bete ko usse door le jaaye ..

Keep going like this ☺️

Tumhe to pata hai humare Malharji ko galti par punishment dene ki aadat hai phir galti wo khud hi kyu na kare..

Malharji ko kallu and kallu ko Malharji ke alag alag roop dekhne milne wale hai..

Ab Malharji ka pata kallu ko nahi hoga to kise hoga.. waise you’ll get to know in next update ki how she got there..

Zindagi ne Malharji ki band bajayi huyi hai to abhi rehne dete hai..

Stay tuned 😘😘😘

Originally posted by: Jara567

Hum genuinely pagal hain! Spam, trends, comments aur bhi kitna kuch!! But jo maza fandom mein aata hain that's genuinely priceless. The family i have made there is truly something I count as a blessing. Btw I had once seen your profile on ig probably. Shayad Nisha k comment section mein....

Aur tum bhi likhti raho, we are here for you🤗

Tera IG handle kya hai tell me I’ll follow you..

I can understand jab show on air tha to forum me bhi bahut maja aata tha..

Raabta fandom ne bahut sare dost diye hai..

My fp is @obsessed_with_sehreem... I toh have always been a pakki wali SehReemian.

Our fd is loveeeee MashAllah! Genuinely yaar I have found one of the bestest people here💓 SehReem aur SehReemians ke bina toh zindagi adhoori hain.

Aur forum pe bhi toh main tum Rekha di vanshu hain hi...aur sach kahu? There are sooooooo many people who actually follow up all the stories and read them very eagerly but don't leave and like or comment. I myself had first commented on an ff of vanshu, usse pehle I never commented kyunki ajeeb lagta tha aur sharam si aati thi. I know many people who are awkward to comment in the same way.....

Originally posted by: Jara567

My fp is @obsessed_with_sehreem... I toh have always been a pakki wali SehReemian.

Our fd is loveeeee MashAllah! Genuinely yaar I have found one of the bestest people here💓 SehReem aur SehReemians ke bina toh zindagi adhoori hain.

Aur forum pe bhi toh main tum Rekha di vanshu hain hi...aur sach kahu? There are sooooooo many people who actually follow up all the stories and read them very eagerly but don't leave and like or comment. I myself had first commented on an ff of vanshu, usse pehle I never commented kyunki ajeeb lagta tha aur sharam si aati thi. I know many people who are awkward to comment in the same way.....

We all were like this only..

I was also a silent reader but kalma made me to participate in episodes discussion.. I love to read their stories…

1 year ago I couldn’t imagine myself writing stories and now I am writing stories on them and it was just because of kalma and Sehreem..

I love them so much..❤️❤️❤️

Priyu baby update ....plssss 🥺🥺🥺🥺