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Chapter 2


5 years later


Aurangabad:


Malhar was reading newspaper with a cup of tea when the doorbell rang. Irritated at the chance of his routine being disturbed, Malhar took his own sweet time to open the door.


After the door being opened, Sampada was standing in front of him in a shimmering silver short dress. Malhar frowned, rubbing his forehead.


"Kabhi to Moksh ki maa ki tarah socha Karo, Sampada," Malhar said, "Kal raat use itna tez bukhaar tha. Aur tum ab aa rahi ho club se? Kalyani hoti..."


"Kalyani! Kalyani!" Sampada muttered, "Arey itni hi acchi thi to bane rehne dete na use Moksh ki maa. Use ghar se dhakke maar kar tumne nikaala tha maine nahi. Swara ki diary milne ke baad har pal takleef tumne use di thi maine nahi."


"Sampada!" Malhar shouted.


"Chillao mat!" Sampada retorted, "Tumhari bechaari biwi nahi hoon main jo tumhari har baat sahoongi main. Tumne, tumhari Asawari Aai aur tumhare Baba ne to saans lena bhi doobhar kar diya tha us Kalyani ka. Mere maamlon me agar vo hamesha taang na adaati hoti to do chaar tips de deti main use ki tumhare jaise mardon se kaise nipta jaata h. Vaise Malhar, kabhi tumne socha nahi ki Atharv me aisi kya baat hai jo tumhari har beewi uski deewani ho jaati h?"


"Baba, ye Kalyani kaun hai?" A cute kid of five years was standing rubbing his eyes.


Malhar lifted the kid in his arms and said, "Kalyani tumhari Aai..." then Malhar corrected himself and said, "Mera matlab Kalyani tumhari Aai...Khair chorro kal tum zid kar rahe the na ki tumhe crow ka ghonsla dekhna hai."


Moksh nodded with excitement.


Holding Moksh in his arms, Malhar leaned towards Sampada and made Moksh touch her hair, "Beta ye dekho Kauwe ka ghonsla."


"Sampada aunty ke baal," Moksh giggled, "Kauwa yahaan rehta hai?"


"Don't call me aunty," Sampada was fuming, "Call me Sam. Ye aunty, aai, Kaki, baba is so old fashioned."


"Haan Moksh beta," Malhar said, "Sam to umar me aapse bhi chhoti hai. Bhool gaye bachpan me tumhari hi god me kheli hai ye to." Stomping her feet, Sampada left.


Moksh innocently held his belly because he felt it would burst from laughing.


After preparing breakfast for Moksh, Malhar started getting ready for work.


"Vardi me aap bade smart lagte hain Malharji!"


"Kalyani!" Malhar turned back but no one was there. A tear fell off Malhar's eyes.


"Kal..." Suddenly what happened five years ago flashed before his eyes. Even after holding Kalyani responsible for Swara's death and promising to make her life hell, Malhar was not able to completely wipe out feelings for Kalyani from his heart. He had hurt her and the guilt was eating him inside. Finally he decided to listen to the whispers of his heart and started warming up to Kalyani. Then one day, he found Moksh burning in high fever. As he was going to take Moksh to doctor, he received information that a high profile human trafficking racket was running in a shady hotel in the outskirts of the city. Malhar called Kalyani's phone repeatedly but it was coming switched off. After Swara's suicide, he had broken up all relationships with Deshmukhs so he couldn't even call Anupriya to take care of Moksh while he led a raid on the hotel. Sarthak Kaka was not in town.


Helpless, Malhar left Moksh alone in the empty house and locked the main door.


After he had caught the members of the human trafficking ring, he heard a slow music coming from a room in the hotel. Signalling everyone to keep quiet, he quietly moved towards the room and pointed his gun, saying "Hands up."


But to his horror, he saw Kalyani's dishevelled hair and a smudge of lipstick on Atharv's shirtless body.

In front of his team, Malhar didn't say anything. But when Kalyani came home, Malhar threw a bucket of cold water over Kalyani. It was the month of January. Kalyani kept shivering outside in the cold night.

Finally in the morning, Kalyani found her things thrown outside the house.


But when milkman rang the doorbell, Kalyani entered inside the house and pleaded, "Meri baat to suniye Malharji. Vahaan kucch nahi hua tha. Please mujhe apni baat kehne ka mauka to dijiye..."

"Kehna kya. Hamare police department me to ham scene recreate karwate hain criminal se. Atharv ko phone lagaun kya me? Kal raat ka scene create karne me uski bhi to zaroorat padegi tumhe..."

"Malharji," Kalyani said sharply, then in a pleading tone she said, "is ghar se nikaalne se pehle, bas ek baar mujhe mere pillu ko dekh lene dijiye."

"Are waah!' Malhar taunted, "Jab mere bete ko tumhari sabse zyaada zarrorat thi to tum us Atharv ke saath love hotel me enjoy kar rahi thin. Nikal jaao mere ghar se."


To distract himself, Malhar switched on the TV.


The reporter was saying,

"Duniya ki chauthi sabse ameer businessman Ms. Agni Naidu finally India me apna naya business venture launch karne jaa rahi hain. Sirf 25 saal ki umar me apne raaste me aane vale har business corporation ko overtake karne vali Agni sirf Bhaarat hi nahi duniya ki har ladki ke liye Prerna hain. Unke super sharp business acumen aur ruthless attitude se business ki duniya me unka har competitor unke naam se kaampta hai. Par kamaal ki baat ye hai har top businessmen ko apni ungliyon par nachane wali Agni ko aaj tak kisi ne nahi dekha."


Exasperated, Malhar switched off the TV. On the other hand, in Deshmukhs house, as Anupriya's eyes were glued to the television, Pallavi switched off the TV and said, "Maai. Insaan ko TV news bhi apni aukaat ke hisaab se dekhni chahiye. Vo to hamara dil itna bada h, isliye tumhe rehne ke liye chhat de rakhi hai. Varna isse accha to Billi hi paal lete. Kam se kam uski shakal aapke jaisi manhoos to nahi hoti. Kitty party ke liye meri friends aayengi. Jo jo dishes maine bataai hain, sab time par ready honi chahiye."

Anupriya timidly nodded.


As she was cutting vegetables on chopping board, looking all around her, she pulled a law book hidden under the board. Anupriya loved working in kitchen where she could study for her law exams hiding from the Deshmukhs. She knew her daughter didn't die due to an accident, she was killed and as long as her murderers were roaming free, Anupriya would not rest.


I hope you got some answers in this chapter...Please give me feedback on this chapter. What will happen next according to you? Will Anupriya be able to bring Kalyani's murderers to justice? What do you think will happen in the life of Malhar and Pillu? What had happened five years ago to Kalyani and Malhar?

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This is again a fabulous work from your side praggu..... Love story nhi hogi but still I think I am gonna love it.... Will be waiting for next update....

And i too have updated my ff yahi rahoge tum.... Do read and tell me how was it whenever you get time..... ❤❤❤

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Originally posted by: Autumn09

Chapter 2


5 years later


Aurangabad:


Malhar was reading newspaper with a cup of tea when the doorbell rang. Irritated at the chance of his routine being disturbed, Malhar took his own sweet time to open the door.


After the door being opened, Sampada was standing in front of him in a shimmering silver short dress. Malhar frowned, rubbing his forehead.


"Kabhi to Moksh ki maa ki tarah socha Karo, Sampada," Malhar said, "Kal raat use itna tez bukhaar tha. Aur tum ab aa rahi ho club se? Kalyani hoti..."


"Kalyani! Kalyani!" Sampada muttered, "Arey itni hi acchi thi to bane rehne dete na use Moksh ki maa. Use ghar se dhakke maar kar tumne nikaala tha maine nahi. Swara ki diary milne ke baad har pal takleef tumne use di thi maine nahi."


"Sampada!" Malhar shouted.


"Chillao mat!" Sampada retorted, "Tumhari bechaari biwi nahi hoon main jo tumhari har baat sahoongi main. Tumne, tumhari Asawari Aai aur tumhare Baba ne to saans lena bhi doobhar kar diya tha us Kalyani ka. Mere maamlon me agar vo hamesha taang na adaati hoti to do chaar tips de deti main use ki tumhare jaise mardon se kaise nipta jaata h. Vaise Malhar, kabhi tumne socha nahi ki Atharv me aisi kya baat hai jo tumhari har beewi uski deewani ho jaati h?"


"Baba, ye Kalyani kaun hai?" A cute kid of five years was standing rubbing his eyes.


Malhar lifted the kid in his arms and said, "Kalyani tumhari Aai..." then Malhar corrected himself and said, "Mera matlab Kalyani tumhari Aai...Khair chorro kal tum zid kar rahe the na ki tumhe crow ka ghonsla dekhna hai."


Moksh nodded with excitement.


Holding Moksh in his arms, Malhar leaned towards Sampada and made Moksh touch her hair, "Beta ye dekho Kauwe ka ghonsla."


"Sampada aunty ke baal," Moksh giggled, "Kauwa yahaan rehta hai?"


"Don't call me aunty," Sampada was fuming, "Call me Sam. Ye aunty, aai, Kaki, baba is so old fashioned."


"Haan Moksh beta," Malhar said, "Sam to umar me aapse bhi chhoti hai. Bhool gaye bachpan me tumhari hi god me kheli hai ye to." Stomping her feet, Sampada left.


Moksh innocently held his belly because he felt it would burst from laughing.


After preparing breakfast for Moksh, Malhar started getting ready for work.


"Vardi me aap bade smart lagte hain Malharji!"


"Kalyani!" Malhar turned back but no one was there. A tear fell off Malhar's eyes.


"Kal..." Suddenly what happened five years ago flashed before his eyes. Even after holding Kalyani responsible for Swara's death and promising to make her life hell, Malhar was not able to completely wipe out feelings for Kalyani from his heart. He had hurt her and the guilt was eating him inside. Finally he decided to listen to the whispers of his heart and started warming up to Kalyani. Then one day, he found Moksh burning in high fever. As he was going to take Moksh to doctor, he received information that a high profile human trafficking racket was running in a shady hotel in the outskirts of the city. Malhar called Kalyani's phone repeatedly but it was coming switched off. After Swara's suicide, he had broken up all relationships with Deshmukhs so he couldn't even call Anupriya to take care of Moksh while he led a raid on the hotel. Sarthak Kaka was not in town.


Helpless, Malhar left Moksh alone in the empty house and locked the main door.


After he had caught the members of the human trafficking ring, he heard a slow music coming from a room in the hotel. Signalling everyone to keep quiet, he quietly moved towards the room and pointed his gun, saying "Hands up."


But to his horror, he saw Kalyani's dishevelled hair and a smudge of lipstick on Atharv's shirtless body.

In front of his team, Malhar didn't say anything. But when Kalyani came home, Malhar threw a bucket of cold water over Kalyani. It was the month of January. Kalyani kept shivering outside in the cold night.

Finally in the morning, Kalyani found her things thrown outside the house.


But when milkman rang the doorbell, Kalyani entered inside the house and pleaded, "Meri baat to suniye Malharji. Vahaan kucch nahi hua tha. Please mujhe apni baat kehne ka mauka to dijiye..."

"Kehna kya. Hamare police department me to ham scene recreate karwate hain criminal se. Atharv ko phone lagaun kya me? Kal raat ka scene create karne me uski bhi to zaroorat padegi tumhe..."

"Malharji," Kalyani said sharply, then in a pleading tone she said, "is ghar se nikaalne se pehle, bas ek baar mujhe mere pillu ko dekh lene dijiye."

"Are waah!' Malhar taunted, "Jab mere bete ko tumhari sabse zyaada zarrorat thi to tum us Atharv ke saath love hotel me enjoy kar rahi thin. Nikal jaao mere ghar se."


To distract himself, Malhar switched on the TV.


The reporter was saying,

"Duniya ki chauthi sabse ameer businessman Ms. Agni Naidu finally India me apna naya business venture launch karne jaa rahi hain. Sirf 25 saal ki umar me apne raaste me aane vale har business corporation ko overtake karne vali Agni sirf Bhaarat hi nahi duniya ki har ladki ke liye Prerna hain. Unke super sharp business acumen aur ruthless attitude se business ki duniya me unka har competitor unke naam se kaampta hai. Par kamaal ki baat ye hai har top businessmen ko apni ungliyon par nachane wali Agni ko aaj tak kisi ne nahi dekha."


Exasperated, Malhar switched off the TV. On the other hand, in Deshmukhs house, as Anupriya's eyes were glued to the television, Pallavi switched off the TV and said, "Maai. Insaan ko TV news bhi apni aukaat ke hisaab se dekhni chahiye. Vo to hamara dil itna bada h, isliye tumhe rehne ke liye chhat de rakhi hai. Varna isse accha to Billi hi paal lete. Kam se kam uski shakal aapke jaisi manhoos to nahi hoti. Kitty party ke liye meri friends aayengi. Jo jo dishes maine bataai hain, sab time par ready honi chahiye."

Anupriya timidly nodded.


As she was cutting vegetables on chopping board, looking all around her, she pulled a law book hidden under the board. Anupriya loved working in kitchen where she could study for her law exams hiding from the Deshmukhs. She knew her daughter didn't die due to an accident, she was killed and as long as her murderers were roaming free, Anupriya would not rest.


I hope you got some answers in this chapter...Please give me feedback on this chapter. What will happen next according to you? Will Anupriya be able to bring Kalyani's murderers to justice? What do you think will happen in the life of Malhar and Pillu? What had happened five years ago to Kalyani and Malhar?

Relpying to this one.... Mujhe mere half question ke answer mil gye..... I think vo business woman kalyani hai..... Or he pushed her as he think that she was cheating on him..... Kiski galti hai kiski nhi don't know.... But malhar is definitely at wrong point for pushing her off stairs.....

Mujhe moksh malhar or sam ka banter acha laga...... 😂😂😂😂..... That ghosla think..... Sampadak moksh ki god m khelti thi😂😂😂😂

I liked it praggu baby

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This chapter was so good pragyu I got my some answers as well ...🤗jaisa maine socha tha vaisa hi hai ye yahan pein kalyani revengeful banakein aayegi jo apna name change karkein rakhegi aur jisne uska murder kiya tha usseein nikalwayegi sach aur saath main Malhar kein saath flirt kar karkar usseein ki koi uski biwi thi kalyani naam ki vo usko kaise treat karta tha ye sab nikalwayegi i know it 😎

I am so excited for upcoming updates baby 😘😘 feel very bad for kalyani ..she didn't do anything I know and as you said Malhar is a really grey shade character this time ..he doesn't deserve a ounce of sympathy for his sister death from my side even yahan kalyani ko malhar ko bilkul naukar ki tarah treat karna chahiye jab vo usseein aise hi aadhi raat ko akela chod sakata hai to ye to kalyani badle main itna to kar hi sakti hai 👍🏼

Moksh and sam banter ..u laughed out loud ye hai crow ka ghoshala yahan baithe hai crow aww moksh 🤣

A emotional flashback😭

Kalyani ko iss baar Malhar ki aai aur baba nein bhi tang kiya hai abb to pakka kalyani ko inn sabko jail ki hawa khilani chahiye aur Malhar ko apne pair ki dhool ki tarah treat karna chahiye😡

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Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

This is again a fabulous work from your side praggu..... Love story nhi hogi but still I think I am gonna love it.... Will be waiting for next update....

And i too have updated my ff yahi rahoge tum.... Do read and tell me how was it whenever you get time..... ❤❤❤


Thank you Praku💓💓💓💓

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Originally posted by: Phlo004

This chapter was so good pragyu I got my some answers as well ...🤗jaisa maine socha tha vaisa hi hai ye yahan pein kalyani revengeful banakein aayegi jo apna name change karkein rakhegi aur jisne uska murder kiya tha usseein nikalwayegi sach aur saath main Malhar kein saath flirt kar karkar usseein ki koi uski biwi thi kalyani naam ki vo usko kaise treat karta tha ye sab nikalwayegi i know it 😎

I am so excited for upcoming updates baby 😘😘 feel very bad for kalyani ..she didn't do anything I know and as you said Malhar is a really grey shade character this time ..he doesn't deserve a ounce of sympathy for his sister death from my side even yahan kalyani ko malhar ko bilkul naukar ki tarah treat karna chahiye jab vo usseein aise hi aadhi raat ko akela chod sakata hai to ye to kalyani badle main itna to kar hi sakti hai 👍🏼

Moksh and sam banter ..u laughed out loud ye hai crow ka ghoshala yahan baithe hai crow aww moksh 🤣

A emotional flashback😭

Kalyani ko iss baar Malhar ki aai aur baba nein bhi tang kiya hai abb to pakka kalyani ko inn sabko jail ki hawa khilani chahiye aur Malhar ko apne pair ki dhool ki tarah treat karna chahiye😡


Thank you Vanshu Rani 💖💖💖💖💖 Bata is FF ke liye kya farmaissh hai teri??? Try karoongi ki use story me poori kar sakoon.

As for Malhar, morally he was absolutely wrong, but after Swara's death and Moksh's high fever, he was in really fragile and vulnerable state. Swara ki death ke baad Kallu ka torture was totally wrong but his reaction that night was kind of understandable. His trust was already broken so many time and Atharv vaise bhi triggered so many bad memories for him. So even imagining the possibility of Kalyani being with him made him lose his mind.

But obviously, one thing I hate about Indian TV shows and even THR in that case, ki hero revenge marriage kare, heroine ko mentally torture kare in the name of punishing her for a supposed wrong, uske loved ones ko harm karne ka threaten karke blackmail kare, all is forgiven just because hero later falls in love with the heroine. Seldom I've seen the heroine paying him back. As if heroine ki sole duty hero ko is sach ka yakeen dilaana ho ki she is a good woman and to protect hero and his family everytime. And heroine hero se ladegi bhi tab jab vo koi sensible aur practical baat kar raha ho.

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Chapter-3


The high rise building of A enterprises(Inside boardroom)


A middle aged man entered the boardroom and takes a seat. He impatiently glanced at his watch again and again. Finally unable to control himself, he said, "Isiliye aurton ko ghar se baahar nahi nikalna chahiye...na inme business sense hota hai na koi professionalism...itne bade corporate business ki head hai ye Agni magar time ki koi kadar nahi hai ise...aurton ka dimaag sirf dressup hone aur makeup karne me hi lagta hai?"


"Aur aapka dimaag kahaan lagta hai Mr. Majumdar?" A strong female voice boomed in the room. Everyone stood up to greet the woman.


The woman was wearing a red button down shirt with black trousers, her look made complete with a black blazer. Her red pumps suited her petite, curvy frame. Her hair fell in thick waves just upto her shoulder.

"So as I was asking, Mr. Majumdar," The woman said, "Aap apna dimaag kahaan lagate hain? Jis company se aapke jaise unprofessional employee ko salary milti hai uske secrets rival company ko bechne me? Yaa fir bholi bhaali interns ko unke job cheene ki dhamki dekar unka exploitation karne me?"

"Agni...I can explain," Mr. Majumdar tried to speak.

"Das janmon tak khud ko bhi bechte rahoge, tab bhi mera naam lene ki aukaat nahi ho payegi tumhari, Bijoy Majumdar," Agni hissed, "Apni gaddari aur beimaani se zindagi bhar me jitne paise jutaa paoge na tum, utna paisa main har aadhe ghante me main kamaati hoon. To ye jo tumhari shirt me mehengi tie hai na," Agni smiled, "Ise khareedne ki aukaat bhi ek Aurat ki hi company se milne wali salary se tumne paai hai. So ek aurat ko kahaan rehna chahiye ispar focus na karke jo company ki image defamation ka 75 crore ka claim tum kaise doge, us par focus karo to better hoga tumhare liye."

"ACP," Agni called, and a team of police officers entered, "Le jaiye ise. Bas ek request thi. Bijoy Majumdar ne itne dino kaam kiya hai is company to thoda inaam dena to banta hai. Bijoy YouTube kholo. Wow! You are a Star now. Promotion ke badle nayi intern se physical relationship banane ka tumhara proposal trend kar raha hai. Wow." Just then Agni's phone beeped.


"And congratulations Bijoy! Tumhare bete ko uske college walon ne nikaal diya hai!" Kalyani mock clapped, "Aaj to lottery lag gayi tumhari!"


Bijoy was completely shattered when police handcuffed him.


Everyone started discussing when Kalyani said, "Tum logon ko itni high salary main gossip karne ke liye nahi deti hoon. Let's start the meeting."


"Madam," a meek looking board member asked, "Bijoy ke saath jo hua vo bilkul sahi tha. Magar uska beta? Uski to koi galti nahi thi..."


A flicker of hurt passed in Agni's eyes but before anyone could see it, her expression became stern.


"Koi galti na hone ke baavjood bhi logon ko sazaa bhugatni hoti hai," Agni said, "And there's always collateral damage alongwith any action taken. And Mr. Mohite, mujhe nahi pata tha ki aapki dilchaspi social work me hai, varna kab ka aapko is job se nikaalkar kisi NGO ko join karne ke liye free chhorr deti main. Anyways, aapne mere paanch minute waste kiye hain. So aapki is month ki salary will not be credited to your account. Let's get back to the meeting everyone."


After the meeting was over, Agni looked out of the window of her penthouse in the most expensive locality of Mumbai. Her hand inadvertently went to her belly. That night five years ago flashed before her eyes.


Kalyani was brought to a shady place.

"Kaun ho tum log?" Kalyani spoke when the cloth inside her mouth was removed.


Someone removed the cloth off her eyes.

"Ahir tum?" Kalyani said in disbelief, "Tumhare Dada ko pata chalega to chhorenge nahi vo tumhe."

"Kab tak Dada ki dhamki deti rahogi Vahini?" Ahir laughed, "Tumhare Dada ko pata chalega to ye kar denge... Malharji Malharji, kaan pak gaye mere...Are khud ko haath pair ya akal nahi di kya...Chahe kucch bhi kaho, par apni Aai Anupriya par hi gayi ho tum? Bechari, laachaar, kisi mard ke sahaare ke bagair khadi tak nahi ho sakti... bechari abla naari."


Kalyani spat at him in disgust.


"Kalyani," saying this Ahir slapped her.


"Bas Ahir," a man spoke from the shadows, "Time khoti karne ka nahi. Rajkumari ki jaan to uske tote me basti hai, usi ki gardan marod do."


"Atharv, Mere Moksh ko haath bhi lagaya na tumne," Kalyani said with fire in her eyes, "Haath kaat kar phenk doongi."


"Are hum Moksh ki baat kahaan kar rahe hain. Usme mera bhi to Khoon hai," Sampada laughed, "Ham to junior Rane ki baat kar rahe hain."


When Atharva put his foot near Kalyani, Kalyani pleaded, "Please chhor do mere bacche ko. Tum log jo kahoge main vo karoongi. Mere bacche ko kucch mat karo..."


"Kucch bhi?" Atharv asked.


"Haan...haan kucch bhi. Tum jo bologe vo main karoongi."


Atharv pretended to think, "Theek hai Main junior Rane ko nahi maaroonga. Magar ek Rane ka murder to mujhe karna hi hai. Aisa karte hain," Atharv produced a vial of rat killing poison, "Ye Moksh ke doodh me mila do. Tumhare hone vale bacche ke liye bhi accha h. Rane parivaar ki property use baantni nahi padegi."

"Atharv, agar mere haath khule hote to tumhari aankhein noch leti main."

"Mujhe pata hai," Atharv laughed, "Isliye to baandha hai maine tumhe." And after that he kicked Kalyani in the belly.

"Malharji ko pata chala to..."

"Kucch nahi karega Malhar," Sampada said and played a recording on her phone in which Malhar was saying Agar Kalyani mar bhi gayi, to bhi uski laash ko agni nahi doonga main. Meri zindagi ki Sabse badi galti thi Kalyani.

"Atharv," Ahir said, "Main kya keh raha tha...baccha hone tak ise band rakhte hain. Mere Dada ka bhi to beta h na ye..."

"Bada pyaar aa raha h tujhe apne Dada par," Atharv said, "Bhool gaya tere itne gidgidane par bhi Swara ke premi ke katl ke aarop me andar kar diya tha tere mahaan Dada ne."

After that Ahir didn't spoke. Atharv kept kicking at Kalyani's belly until Kalyani was lying in a pool of blood.


After that, Sampada came towards Kalyani who was staring at the sky with dead eyes, "Is Kalyani ka chehra mujhe bilkul pasand nahi," And then she slashed her face repeatedly.


Kalyani was conscious all the time the three of them tortured her. She died at that moment itself when she felt her unborn child was no more. She had not even named the child. It was that moment Kalyani died.

And it was that moment Agni was born

"Madhav, Asawari, Ahir, Sampada, Atharv," Kalyani spoke, "Tumme se har ek ke saath ab vo hoga ki Har din maut ki bheekh maangoge par vo bhi tumhe nahi milegi." And then Kalyani opened an image in her gallery, "Aur tum Mr. Malhar Rane, mujhse badla lene ke liye tumne mujhse shaadi ki, for Swara ki maut ka badla lene ke liye doosri baar mujhse shaadi ko aur har pal mujhe dard diya. Aur main paagal. Itni andhi thi tumhare pyaar me ki tab bhi tumpar koi museebat aane se pehle maine use apne sar le liya. Agar Atharv, Aheer aur Sampada ne mere hone vaale bacche ko maara hai, to tumne bhi to mujhe mere doosre bacche se door kar diya. Kitna gidgidayi thi main tumhare saamne...par ab tum sabko mere ek ek aansoo ka hisaab dena hoga."


To ye tha third chapter...Kaisa laga please zaroor bataana? Do you think Kalyani is wrong to seek revenge from Malhar? Do you think she has gone so far that she herself had become like the ones she hated?(Galti se main likhne jaa rahi thi jaanne ke liye dekhiye Tujhse Hai Raabta ka agla episode sirf Zee par

Edited by Autumn09 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's so emotional chapter pragyu ..kalyani's condition cannot explain in words Malhar here is just a losser he is a losser totally smiley7...sach poochon to tujehin Malhar ko iss FF main khoob torture karna hai bass meri yahin wish hai aur kuch nahi smiley20

Atharva sampada....par mujhein ek baat nahi samajh aayi Malhar nein last kalyani ko ghar sein bahar nikala tha jab usne ussein atharv ken saath dekha tha , lekin yahan abb ye in teeno ka torture uspein first chapter aur isko to main connect kar paa rahi hoon par ye ..mujhein kuch smajah nahi aaya ...

Bechari kalyani her unborn get killed by them brutually..

Nahi jab kalyani kein saath aisa hua to vo jo kar rahi hai vo sahi hai ...

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Phlo004

It's so emotional chapter pragyu ..kalyani's condition cannot explain in words Malhar here is just a losser he is a losser totally smiley7...sach poochon to tujehin Malhar ko iss FF main khoob torture karna hai bass meri yahin wish hai aur kuch nahi smiley20

Atharva sampada....par mujhein ek baat nahi samajh aayi Malhar nein last kalyani ko ghar sein bahar nikala tha jab usne ussein atharv ken saath dekha tha , lekin yahan abb ye in teeno ka torture uspein first chapter aur isko to main connect kar paa rahi hoon par ye ..mujhein kuch smajah nahi aaya ...

Bechari kalyani her unborn get killed by them brutually..

Nahi jab kalyani kein saath aisa hua to vo jo kar rahi hai vo sahi hai ...


Athu ko Mallu se badla lena tha. So Sampada took Pillu out of the house and Atharv said he kidnapped him and Kallu madam, Pillu jaap me chali gayi jahaan Atharv ne use bulaya tha. That's why she wanted to see Moksh one last time as she wanted to make sure he's not harmed.


Badle lene the sabko Malhar se, and they knew he didn't care for his life. To beech me Kallu pis gayi. To continue rakhu na main is FF ko? Cos I was afraid if anyone gets hurt as the KalMa are not together in this.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Autumn09


Athu ko Mallu se badla lena tha. So Sampada took Pillu out of the house and Atharv said he kidnapped him and Kallu madam, Pillu jaap me chali gayi jahaan Atharv ne use bulaya tha. That's why she wanted to see Moksh one last time as she wanted to make sure he's not harmed.


Badle lene the sabko Malhar se, and they knew he didn't care for his life. To beech me Kallu pis gayi. To continue rakhu na main is FF ko? Cos I was afraid if anyone gets hurt as the KalMa are not together in this.

aree hum kahan hurt honge mujhein to aisi love hate stories bohot pasand hai pls continue kar I am liking it ..🤗

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