KALMA FF :- The Eternal Love (CHAPTER -1 UPDATED 21-09-2021)

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A man was standing in front of the burning funeral pyre of a person....... The man dressed in a white kurta pyajama with tears on his face ..... Eyes swollen due to it .... Can't do anything but to watch the fire on the burning pyre with no expression and anger could be easily seen......

MAN- tumse jyada dhokhebaaz insaan nhi dekha maine ab tak ki meri life mein......koi ahamiyat nhi thi na tumhare dil m mere liye..... Hai na????

Khudgarz, matlabi ho tum..... Tumhe meri parwah kbhi thi hi nhi agar hoti to mere kehne par bhi esa kadam nhi uthati.....

Kyu kyu kyu..... Kyu kiya esa tumne mere saath..... mujhe or moksh ko kaise.....main akela pad gya hu..... Vapas aa jao please!!!!!

He broke down on his feet and loudly said.......

KYU KALYANI .... KAISE CHODD KE JA SKTI HO TUM....... MUJHE....APNE MALHARJI KO CHODD KE CHALI GYI NA...... KYA KRUNGA TUMHARE BINA...... KYU......!!!!!!

I LOVE YOU KALYANI...... I LOVE YOU.......he said with a broken heart......

And with the flowing time the funeral pyre soon turned into the black ashes.......

The amount of his tears, sadness, pain can't be calculated........

WHAT WAS THE REASON OF THIS SITUATION????

WHAT HAPPENED TO HER????

HAS SHE REALLY LEFT HIM AND THE SMALL MUNCHKIN????

Should I continue this????

Please give your reviews

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Awesome teaser baby 🤗ek aur nayi story 😳

Ye wala time I think jab kahan hai when kalyani fall down from the cliff but here malhar has saved her this is the only that guess Varna tu to hai hi rockstar Jo bohot badhiya likhegi 🥳

But pls yahan kalyani ko maat maarna aur moksh aur malhar ko akela mat rehene Dena ...beachare dono baap bete 😢😢😢 it's humble request praku 🙏🙏

Originally posted by: Phlo

Awesome teaser baby 🤗ek aur nayi story 😳

Ye wala time I think jab kahan hai when kalyani fall down from the cliff but here malhar has saved her this is the only that guess Varna tu to hai hi rockstar Jo bohot badhiya likhegi 🥳

But pls yahan kalyani ko maat maarna aur moksh aur malhar ko akela mat rehene Dena ...beachare dono baap bete 😢😢😢 it's humble request praku 🙏🙏

Thank you vanshu for a lovely reply😘

But yaha tera assumption wrong hai.....

Track bhi vo nhi hai jo tune btaya or kalyani ka marna bhi......

This is different story.....

Iska concept pura alag hoga

I am so sorry if its not according to you

Ohhh... The teaser looks promising..

Can't wait to know what brought this situation.

Praku.. Awesome teaser

Itna suspense..

Malharji is broken..

Kya hua hai Kallu ko..

Unhe chodke kahan chali gayi...

Please continue

It's totally ok praku ye to mera sirf guess tha even I am eagerly waiting to unfold the story

Aane do aane do aane do…

Jaldi aane do…

The teaser is superb praku

You have to continue this …

I’m wondering ki kya kab kyu kaise ye sab ho gaya…

Puchne ka sawal hi nahi banta…

Hum hote kaun hai mana karne wale….

Originally posted by: sathwi_99

Ohhh... The teaser looks promising..

Can't wait to know what brought this situation.

Thank u sathwi......

Will try to update it soon as its again a hectic day

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Praku.. Awesome teaser

Itna suspense..

Malharji is broken..

Kya hua hai Kallu ko..

Unhe chodke kahan chali gayi...

Please continue

Thank u di😀😀😀

Malharji kaise toote

Kallu ko kya hua sb pta chaelge......

Ina bta skti hu ki ye kaafi emotional ff hone wala hai..... Starting m thoda maza baki fir its gonna be so emotional

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Aane do aane do aane do…

Jaldi aane do…

The teaser is superb praku

You have to continue this …

I’m wondering ki kya kab kyu kaise ye sab ho gaya…

Puchne ka sawal hi nahi banta…

Hum hote kaun hai mana karne wale….

Thank u priyu....

I will surely continue this

Esa mt bolo ki tum kon hote ho.....

Aap logo ki vajh se hi to ideas milte hai .... Aap hi nhi rahoge to ye stories kisi kaam ki nhi

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