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Posted: 5 years ago
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As many people are not happy with this. I am removing it. This story will not continue.

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Sorry

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Posted: 5 years ago
#2

Nice start

Atharva is finally changed person and Swara accepted him

Pillu is fine👍🏼

waiting to see how their relationship dynamics will change

thanks for update

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Posted: 5 years ago
#3

Superb start

A very different approach. 😃

Atharv realise his mistakes, find peace and love.👏👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
#4

Nice

Kaash serial mein bhi aise dikha sakte

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Posted: 5 years ago
#5

Super

It's very different but I like it

Continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#6

Amazing neera

Update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#7

Guys let me clear one thing I don't support atharv action in any way. But it's just a character created by cv. Because it's all in cv writing I don't hate atharv even. I think swara and atharv will be a couple. But I am not sure about it.

Just read this story and don't let serial atharv hinder this atharv.

I was bored so I tried this one.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#8

I appreciate ur idea . But dont think Cvs will take a chance of making them a couple ..they have already damaged his character. He had tried to stab and kill Malhar. Kalyani shoot him .so his redemption in the story is next to impossible but I really like that atleast u make him a changed person in the fanfiction . Shagun as an actor is brilliant but i have zero sympathy and love for Atharav. And Swara had suffered a lot she deserves some peace now. This poor girl is althrough suffering for her Parent' s family" s misdeed . Malhar vi uske liye khas kuch kar nhi paya. I hope i have not hurt u. I apologize if i hurt u.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#9

I don’t like swathrav...

I hated the fact that he got married to swara....

but I like your stories.....

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