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Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Nice concept

will love to read this track with modified version

prologue is beautiful

both trust each other

as a parents both will work together and bring their beloved son back

his words of assurance👍🏼

thanks for writing 👍🏼

Thank Bhaggu

will ud soon

thank you for loving the prologue

both has come lng way n has trust n understanding like normal couple

my pleasure

Originally posted by: bluemoon255

😲😲

Kya yeh sach hai ya sapna

OK I will read and edit cuz I need deep breaths first😆

sapna dekh rehi hain aab uth jayegi🤣 nautanki

okay tu pehele acche breath le 😈

It’s awesome...

Update it soon

Originally posted by: rammehra103

Di aapko aaj Kya hua hai ...shock pe shock de rhi Hain ... second ff ...Haye nazar naa lge aapko 😆

Prologue is amazing .👏

Update soon🥳

ho gaya hai inko toh pyyar tillu🤣

Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav

sapna dekh rehi hain aab uth jayegi🤣 nautanki

okay tu pehele acche breath le 😈

inhale exhale....inhale exhale...

Originally posted by: bluemoon255

Double post

Apparently I have lost it🤣

Will update comment here

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Read m1

First of all thanks for the ffs, u know how much am obsessed with show wale canon kalma ffs.

Beautiful update malharji

Kallu ka pain, mallu ka pain so beautiful shown.

Waise I didn't understand that ole baby part . Explain plijj malharji😳

I knw it frm long time tu lost it...🤣

show wale canon KalMa ff something tbh for me also

thank you 🤗

ohi toh key part hain

I told mainly he n she na isliye 😈

Originally posted by: kusharberry

haai my jaan u r giving me shock today ff peh ff dekhe love u my jaanu 2🤗

interesting concept

kalma is in pain

waiseh i love moon

please do continue soon

Hi My baby shona

pyaar insan ko bahut kuch karvata hain 🤣

KalMa ka pain temporary to get permanent happiness

me too love moon

will ud soon

Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav

I knw it frm long time tu lost it...🤣

show wale canon KalMa ff something tbh for me also

thank you 🤗

ohi toh key part hain

I told mainly he n she na isliye 😈

u r welcome malharji🤗

le mujhe key part hi samjh nahi aaya uff

yeh mere saath hi kyun hota hai bappa

Originally posted by: rammehra103

Di aapko aaj Kya hua hai ...shock pe shock de rhi Hain ... second ff ...Haye nazar naa lge aapko 😆

Prologue is amazing .👏

Update soon🥳

kya pata kya hua 🤣

thank you

m glad that u loved it

will ud soon

Different concept di👍🏼

Update soon!!!