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Posted: 6 years ago
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hey guys i am back again so this os based on yesterday episode hope you like and enjoy it here it goes


after saving moksh kalma comes back to ahliya niwas kalyani was silent she was feeling so much hurt she was angry with malhar for not understanding her and always ignore her malhar was trying his level best to talk to kalyani as he knows how much he hurt his kalyani if anything happens to moksh he will never be able to forgive his own self thank god that kalyani save moksh on time and understand sampda's plan malhar saw her coming to room when he goes towards her and holds her hand tightly

malhar:kalyani suno to sahi yar meri baat ko ?plzz aik chance to do mujhe bolne ka yar aise mar karo

kalyani:mujhe apki koi baat nhi sunni malhar ji apna kabhi meri sunni hai kya jo ma apki sun lo mujhe jane den malhar ji

malhar:nhi jane donga jab tak tum meri baat nhi suno gi mujhe aik mauka do yar i am sorry na

kalyani:yeh theek hai ap hamesha apne man ki karte hain aur meri bari mujhe pa order chalate hain likin ab nhi malhar ji agr ap na mujhe hurt kiya hota to tab bhi ma apko maaf kar deti likin is bar baat pillu ki hai uski safety ki apna pehle mujhse shadi ki yeh jante hoe bhi ka pillu ki custody sampda ko mil jaye gi aur uske baad aj jab pillu ki jaan khatre ma thi ma na kitni dafa ap sa contact karne ki try ki likin ap itne bz the i guess ka apka pass time nhi tha mere baat sune ka

malhar:moksh mera bhi beta hai kalyani ma pyaar karta hon ose agr moksh ko takleef ma tum nhi dekh skti to ma bhi nhi dekh skta i am sorry na ma mughda ki talash ma tha yar aur tum janti hon ka ma na tume ignore kyun kiya tha bhool gayi apni harkat

kalyani:ap aik baat ko pakar ka bhet jate hain malhar ji ma na kitni dafa samjhya hai apko ka ma apni ayi ka liye kuch bhi kar skti hon aise kase ma apna paper karti yeh jante hoe ka bhi wo paper nhi den payen gi ma na jo kiya unka pyaar ma kiya hai ma beti hon unki aur aik beti apne maa ka liye kuch bhi kar skti hai isme kya galat tha malhar ji

malhar angrily pinns her to wall and tightly holds her shoulders she was trying hard to free her self but he was too strong for her she began to cry he wipes her tears and try to hug her she pushes him away in anger he holds her duppta and pulls her closer towards him she was constantly pushing him with her hands in this pushing and pulling her hand reach on his cheek and she slaps him he was shocked and numb for many minutes she was cursing her self for not controlling her hands and anger he removes his hold on her and free her she holds her hand and try to stop him from going she just gives a tight bone crushing hug to him he was leaving her when she again started to cry

malhar:thapar marne ka baad rona kis baat ka kalyani yeh sahi hai tum aik beti ho isliye apni ayi sa pyaar karti ho ka unka liye paper chor diya aur mera kya kalyani ma kon hota hon tumhri life ma tumhre liye kuch bhi sochne ka haq shayd nhi hai mujhe ma hi pagal tha mujhe laga tha ka yeh shadi jo kuch time pehle tak samjhota thi ab aik pyaar bhare rishte ma badal gayi hai mujhe to laga tha ka haq hai mujhe tum pa tum meri patni ho par shayd ma galat tha yeh rishta aj bhi wahi hai aik samjhota jo moksh ka liye tum na kiya

kalyani:i am sorry na malhar ji aise mat bolen apko haq hai mujhe pa i am really sorry mujhe maaf kar den ma na jan bhoj ka nhi kiya na

malhar:agr tum aik beti ho na kalyani to tum aik patni bhi ho tum na aik dafa bhi exam hall ma mera nhi socha yeh nhi socha ka jab tum fail ho jayo gi to ma kya feel karon ga tumne apne baba ko sach ma sabit karna hai kya ka ma aik acha pati nhi hon tumhe parne nhi deta isliye tum fail ho gayi sorry kalyani likin shayd tum apni ayi sa itna pyaar karti ho ka oska aage agr tume mujhe bhi hurt karna pare to tum kar deti ho kalyani shayd tmhri life ma sab sa zyada important moksh aur mayi hai ma kahi bhi nhi hon tumhri life ma sahi hai ma na kabhi tum pa haq nhi jatay patni wala isliye shayd tum is rishte ko value nhi deti

kalyani:i am sorry malhar ji likin ap hi batyen pillu ki jaan khatre ma thi ap yaqeen nhi karen gen ka mujhe pa wahan kya beti isliye ma apsa naraz thi aur ainda ma apne test ya exam ma aisa nhi karon gi ainda sa aisa nhi hoga meri life ma ap bhi value rakhte hain trust me yeh rishta humare darmiyan jo hai wo samjhota ab nhi hai ma apki patni ho ap chahe to mujhe mar len ya dant len likin naraz mat hon plzzz

malhar:theek hai sirf is bar likin aj ka baad tum apna exam ma aisa nhi karon gi agr aisa kiya na to phir mujhse bura koi nhi hoga

kalyani:acha na nhi karon gi i am sorry ap chahe to mujhe saza da den plzzz

malhar:saza to milne cahiye akhir mujhe thapar mara hai pore aurangabad ma kse ma itni himmat nhi hai ka koi mujhe hath lagayen

kalyani:kya malhar ji ab ap mujhe bhi maren gen yeh to galat hai acha theek hai de den saza mujhe to ab adat ho gayi hai creative punishment ki

kalyani close her eyes tightly waiting for him to slap her he pulls her closer by shoulder kiss on her forehead and then join their lips she was shocked and frozen he kiss her with whole passion she feels shy and blushes he then pull her in his arms and kiss on her neck and both cheeks she try to push her a little bit he pulls both of them on bed and they lay down in each other arms while smiling holding each other close

malhar:kase lagi meri punishment mrs rane ko

kalyani:aise kon karta hai

malhar:pagli i love you abhi bhi samjh nhia aya kya ya ma kuch aur kar ka dikhaon

kalyani:i love you too a gya na samjh bus kuch aur karne ki need nhi hai


this is it shower youre love by commenting and liking plzzzz hit the button of like and do comments i will wait for youre response

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Posted: 6 years ago
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i dint saw yestderday’s episode but got a idea through forum... n trust me ur upcoming version is damn cute❤️😻

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sidyusha

i dint saw yestderday’s episode but got a idea through forum... n trust me ur upcoming version is damn cute❤️😻

Thanks you for the comment even I didn't watch the episode read written update and make it

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: bb14

Thanks you for the comment even I didn't watch the episode read written update and make it

great work... keep writing 🙌🏻

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update savira. Love it❤️❤️❤️

Sorry for the late reply. I read it 3 hours ago because of error i can't reply. And I have a request will you write a totally different story from the show. If you like the idea then please write if not then ignore it.

I always loved your stories, hope to see you soon with a new one.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dk26

Nice update savira. Love it❤️❤️❤️

Sorry for the late reply. I read it 3 hours ago because of error i can't reply. And I have a request will you write a totally different story from the show. If you like the idea then please write if not then ignore it.

I always loved your stories, hope to see you soon with a new one.

Thanks for commenting suggest the topic also plus some one suggest me to make os on kalyani's pregnancy what you think about it

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks for commenting it means a lot to me

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sorry for late reply 😞

Loved ur os 🥳..it is amazing

Do write more

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: rammehra103

Sorry for late reply 😞

Loved ur os 🥳..it is amazing

Do write more

Thanks for commenting

I am glad you like it

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Posted: 6 years ago
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aww that was sweet os

kallu mallu talking out everything was love

poor mallu maar bhi mil gaya😆

thank u for the os, loved it very much❤️

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